Rishbala os reborn for the love

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Rishbala os
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(Hey guys i wrote this one shot,the story is based on om shanti om ,but there is soem changes hooe you like it and do vote and comments)

Rishabh Rishabh kuswa..
a junior artist in Hindi cinema..he had a dream to become a superstar like madhubala malik..the dream girl if entire nation.


He is in love with a film superstar madhubala malik aka Madhu..
He don't miss any film of madhubala she is a dreamy girl.
His mother was also a junior artist Radha.
Radha: yeh ka haal kar diya hai iss kamre ki..
Rk:arre maa mera,mera woh suit nahi mil Raha hai.
Radha:konsa wala
Rk:laal wala..
Radha:woh toh maine dunne ke liye de diya hai ...
Rk:kya..
Radha:arre yese kyu chila raha hai..
Kan dard kar Raha hai..
Rk:maa yeh tunne ka Kar Diya.
Radha:kyu kaha jaaye gya tu.
Rk:teri bahu se milne madhubala Malik main araaha hoon.
Radha:haan haan nazre betha ke rakhe hoge tere intezar main.

Rk and his friend ranjit attends the premiere of madhubala's film..
He is waiting for madhubala..too come and come but sad she ditch all and didn't come for premire.
He wait hours for madhubala ,as he always sent to the site where madhu may shoot but never got the chance.

The Next Day,
Rk finally see madhu,she was shouting and asking for help,she got stuck in a shoot and the fire broke out in real.
And its out of control and madhubala stuck in there.she is shouting asking for help.
Seeing madhubala in  danger,rk didn't think about anything just jump on fire and rescue her.
At tent,
Madhu: aapko kiss muh se thanks kahe samjh nahi araha hai.
Rk:ji aap ..aap maat bole...
Madhu:toh aap bhi hume aap na bole tum bole.
Rishabh..
Rishabh: Rishab Nahi rk..short form dekhna yeh short form na age jaake bihat chele gua waise yeh idea na main
Woh raj Kapoor ji ke studio jaisa classy.
She laughed.
Madhu:sukriya aaj bohat dinno ke baad main haasi...
Aaj se hum pakke Dost..
Madhubala forward her hand to rk,who smiling take her and shake with her.
From that day,
Madhubala used to meet rk in the studios,tehy used to talk in leisure moments.madhubala used to laugh with him but he can see a sadness in her eyes don't know why.
What is the reason that superstar feel sad when whole world is in his feet.

One day,
At ramji Studios.
backdrop set,
Rk see madhubala is in hurriedly when to makeup from while he forgot her purse to him when they meet, suddenly dint know what happens , madhubala get tensed and worried.
He went after her and see her talking with the producer Abhay Kapoor.
He was about to leave the alone when he hears something which shock him.
Madhu:kyu bhul jaate hai aap k,hum aapke biwi hai..
Aur aapke biwi banke rehna chate hai..
Teen saal se humara rishta hai..
Kab thak hum chupayenge.
Abhay:toh main kya karo haan tum he bolo.tumhe aapna career oasand nahi hai kya.
Madhubala: lekin mein yeh career nahi tumhe chate ho...
Aur yeh ka hai tumhare rishte ke baat chal Rahe hai.
Anita se..
Abhay:bakwas hai..
Aur hun aaone sache jaldi bata denge ek baar yeh film shru ho gaye..
Madhubala,its my dream project..
Biggest film of the country and you are the heroine.
Film release hone ke baad hum sabko bata denge.
Madhubala:sab ko bohat jald he pata chal gaye gya.
Abhay:kya matlab..
Madhu: I'm pregnant.

Rk is getting shocked after shocked he can't take it and run away from there from the sadness from madhubala ,his obsession.
Few days later,
Madhubala searched rk, he only met her a day he was lost but he is happy when she tell him about her love life and tell him every thing only he is the person whom telling this, after that day he is no seen.
Madhubala finally spot him at another floor doing job of extra.
Madhubala:kya baat hai janab ...
Aaap toh humse ab milte he nahi.
Nearesh ko dund ne bheje ohir mile aap hume.
Rk:woh Kuch Nahi kaam tha..
Madhubala:lag raha hai aap humse naraz hai.
Koi galti ho gaye hai ka humse.

Now rk feel very heartbroken and said in low voice.
Rk:galti aap se nahi hun se hui hai.
. seeing Rk Face Thapki getting a hint that maybe rk fall in love with her.
But still she take a chance.
Madhu:kya..
Rk:ke main aapse pyaar Kar betha...
Madhu breathing heavily and went away from there

Rk waiting for madhubala as she told him that Abhay is going to give her surprise in studio 9 ,she excited tell her before he confess it.

He wanted to say sorry to madhubala and he knows she is good at heart she will forgave.he want to meet madhubala maybe for last time,he see the car,but seeing Abhay with madhubala ,he dropped his plan as it may affect on madhubala relationship with Abhay, madhubala happiness lies on Abhay and his lies on Madhubala.
He don't want any problems in madhubala's life.

Rk was leaving when he see fire in the set and Abhay going away by locking the door and madhubala banging the for pleading to save herself.

He run after rescue madhubala, but is attacked by Abhay's goon.the goons beat rk a lot but rk get up and beat the goons and knock them out.
He went to save  madhubala.
Madhubala burnt in the fire as his  attempt to save her get failed.
Fire wood fall on madhubala and is burnt Infront him.

Rk is thrown from the building by its fiery explosion and lands in a nearby street.
A disorientated Rk is hit by a Bollywood prouder Mohan kundra.
Mohan kundra is in hurries as his wife meera having pain and the water broke .
He take rk with him to hospital.
At hospital,
Rk's condition is terrible no chance of lives.
He remembers his moments with madhubala as he dies,
Radha is cooking at home and feel worried fir rk as she knows he is heartbroken.she feels a strange she feels something happened bad,that time she hear a Knock at door.

She find two man are standing.
Radha:ji kahe.
Man:aapka beta Rishabh kuswa,died in hospital.
Radha is shocked and get numb she fall down on floor , can't believe what the people are saying.
A mother was mourning of her son's death
And other side,.meera is blessed with a baby boy.he is so cute.
She named him Rishab..
Rishbala khundra..
He is reborn of Rishabh kuswa.

27 Years later,
Rishabh kundra, nicknamed Rk, is a famous actor,a superstar of the generation.he is big star.



RK removes the cover and kiss his new motorbike. He sprays the champagne on it..
(I take the scene from the serial)
He is in white gem and blue vast with glass.it making him hot.
He ride the bike inside of the house its his birthday gift to himself.
And bittuji run after her.
Bittuji: chief aab bihat hi gaya..
Hume jana hai press conference hia aapke birthday ke mauke pe.

Rk is in car with bittuji,the fans are around to his  car today his birthday people are crowd here more thann any other day.
He  see a lady calling him with rishu..
Rishu.its making him feel soffocated.

His mother meera died few years ago in plane clash when he was college after that father took retired from films.
Rk took try in films and soon he get launched and with years he becomes a superstar.

At set,
Rk:red I don't like red..and orange i hate it .
Throw this clothes on garbage.
Bittuji:lekin chief shooting ke liye.
Yeh suit best hoga.
Rk:rk jo pehnta hai wohe best hota hai.
Get back to work guys.

Tum he mere ishq ho aur tumhe mere junnoon bas tum he tum..
Ab yeh dil dadak ta bhi hai toh tumhara naam leta hai.
Cut it.
Excellent shot rk,good shot ria
Ria:rk aaj raat tum ka kar Rahe ho.
Rk:raat ko harkoi shota hai magar tum kaho toh main tumhe jagah ke rak sakta ho.

Rk  is a big firt,have Many girlfriends.all his co star drool over him and he take this for granted.
His affairs always come on Spot light every month with a new one .
He talking with his girlfriends when  and his girlfriend rina take him to a secret place to have some fum.
which is none other than the set of where madhubala died..
He see the place and experience something ,he get some flashes from past.
Rina:hey rk.. are you okay..
Rk: I'm not Okey. i want to go back.



At night,..he get nightmare that a girl is burning in fire and a boy trying to save her.
He wake up and sweat heavily.
He come down and surprise to see Mohan.
Rk:hey ,dad what a present surprise..
Kab aaye aap..
Mohan:kal raat ko..
Aur haan ek aur surprise hai.
Rk:kya dad..
Mohan:you know mujhe America mein mere ek purane dost se mulakat hui the..
Rk:the..
Kon the dad..
Maine na apke bade link ups ke vade mein suna hai..
Rk laughs..
Mohan:chup badmas baap se yese baat karta hai.
Mera matlab tha aur uske Saath mein ek picture wapas produce karna chata hoon.
Rk:wow dad aap come back Karne walo ho.
That's a good news.
Mohan:lekin inn sab mein tujhe mere help karne hai..
Naye naye chizo pe...
Rk: Acha heroine toh nahi hoge.
Mohan:haan , audicine shuru kar denge jaldi,lekin tu wahan ass pas belhi nahi batke gya bittuji shamhal lenge.
Rk: bittuji..unse aapna weight samhala nahi jaa Raha woh.
Mohan: Rishabh..
Waise maine ek party rakhe hai morji hotel pe time pe chale aana.

At party,
In a corner,rk having his oarty with a beautiful girl in a corner.
When he get a call.
Rk:dad bhi na kisi milana hai.
Sorry baby have to go.

At the party,
Rk get back to party and search for his dad.
Bittuji: chief mohan sir aapko bula rahe hai..
Rk see Mohan talking with a man maybe same man whom he wanted to introduce to him.
He apoorch them them.
Mohan:see here is rk.
The man turn ,rk see his face and get numb.mohan introduces him to Abhay Kapoor,a producer from Hollywood , Mohan's very good friend.

Rk see him and his mind get numb.
He remember the events of his past life.

He is shocked and numb.His mind was clueless.
At late night,
Radha wake up hearing a Knock on door.radha open the door and see Rishab standing Infront of her.
She have tears in eyes.soon rk throw himself on radha and they both start crying.

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Bittuji:chief aap jante ho Na inn sab mein koye vias nahi karega main khud abhi tak nahi viwas
Aapka purna janam ueh sab hota uai kya.
Rk:ishwar chahe toh sab kuch ho sakte hai.
Ishwar ne mujhe yeh muaka Diya hai ke main Aapne Madhu ko insaaf dun ...
Aaj bhi mujhe woh chik yaad kano mein bajte hai
Main Aapne madhu ko insaaf dunga.
Bittuji:magar kaise chief logo ko nahi malum madhubala kaha hai ,he bhi ya nahi.
Aur koi sayad yeh sab janta ho aake alawa.

Mohan cone there and see rk and bittuji are talking.
Mohan:arre rk kaha the tum aaj kal farmhouse mein yesa la hai.
Rk:dad,kuch baat hai
Mohan:kya hai.
Rk:woh main aapko waqt aane ke baad batayenge.
Mohan: Mera beta samajhdar ho Gaya hai.
Yeh dekho aaj mujhe mere favourite philosopher ke book mil gaye.
Bohat acha lekhte hain.
Insaan sab se saada darta hai aapne karam se aapne aati  se,aapnpaap se jo usne kiya hai wih jab sambe aaye toh woh aaone sachai dekhta hai.

Rk hear hear this and he get a idea,.
At room,
Rk:mil gaya bittuji , Abhay Kapoor ke sachai ab madhubala he samne laaye gye.
Bittuji:main kuch samjha nahi bittuji.

Rk tell bittuji a plans to convince Abhay that madhubala's spirit is haunting him.
To find Madhu's lookalike,
Rk:abhay mere saath film kar Raha hai.
Isse doran hoga yeh sab.

They audition many actresses,they are bittuji and rk is all sit with Radha.
Radha:himmat maat haar beta.
Madhu jaise ladki mill gaye gye.
Aur hume konsa ek sakal chahe bas thoda sa Madhu jaisa figure aur uske tarah voice.
Aaj pehla din hai.
Kal phir koshish karna
The guard come there a fan gate crash and cine to studio for audition.
Rk:thik hai bula jab woh aaye hai.

Rk is all disinterestedly having coffee.
When his eyes fall on the gate.
The girl is entering she looking like madhubala no she actually look like madhubala.
He stands up from his sit and apoorch to her.rk see the girl an exact doppelgänger of  madhubala.
They girl get so excited to see rk her favourite hero Infront of her,on excitement,she passed out.
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Girl:woh madhubala,mere ma papa itne bade fan the ke mera naam unhone madhubala rakh diya.
Lekin maine short kar diya
Madhu or say madz..
Rk: very good....tum samjh rahe ho na..
Madhu: tumhare liye toh main aaone jaan bhi de do.
My hero.
She kissed rk's cheek hardly,rk feel shy as Radha and bittuji is there.
All are start training madhu to become madhubala.
The way she walk talk.madhu is very modern outspoken hot sexy, Glamour's girl..chubuli
It's hard for her to be like madhubala.rk loves her this chubuli attitude and she was cilng to him.



At night,
Rk was passing when she see madhu near the swimming pool.
Her leg was down on water.
Rk come there and sit Next her
Rk:kya soch Rahe ho.
Madhu:main pehli yeh sab biwas nahi kar Rahe the lekin ab karne lage ho tumhare oyaar dekh ke madhubala ke liye.tum bohat pyaar karte ho na .
Main bhi waisa he pyaar karte ho
Rk: Madhu,yeh pyaar nahi hai tum bas mujhe pasand karte ho jaise tum on-screen dekhte ho.
Madhu: madhubala ko bhi toh tum dekhe the filmo mein ka tumhare pyaar kaam tha.
Madhu cup rk's face and kiss his forehead.
Madhu:auna hai rk har months girl change karta hai .
Ek month mujhe try karke Dekho.
Saare Zindagi mere age peche hoge.
Rk smiles.
They move forward, soon their distance between lips get closed and they kiss each other passionately.
They both jump on swimming pool and have a streamy make out.

In between the film's shooting,
RK and his team arrange incidents to remind Abhay of the past including organising the film's launch at the same ruined set.abhay feels madhubala's sprit haunting him who was madhu.

At the trailer launch,
Rk make ready a performance which taunts abhay by revealing the extent to which he knows the story of madhubala's death.
Abhay is shocked how rk know the truth.
He see Madhu and runs after madhu thinking she is the ghost of madhubala
Madhu accidentally cuts her arm and bleeds.
Seeing this,
Abhay realises that she is not madhubala's spirit.its all a plan to expose him
Abhay tries to confront RK, but he is suddenly hit by the set's swinging chandelier.

When abhay regains consciousness,
RK confronts him saying taht he knows how he killed madhubala.
Abhay reveals that he knows Madhu is not a ghost after all. Its a scheme.
He can not prove anything.

Madhu appears there as per and taunts abhay that she know the real truth.
Rk: madhu tum chale jao.yahan se yeh tum kuch kar dega.
Madhu:mujhe kuch nahi ka paaye gya yeh.
Jo hoga ab iss ke saath hoga.

madhu reveals that after the fire ceased to burn
Abhay found that madhubala survived and buried her alive below the chandelier.
Rk is confused about how madhu knows this detail, since he did not know this himself.
Abhay tries to kill madhu by shirlting her neck but rk interrupt and both rk and abhay had fight,
Rk is about to kill Abhay,madhu stops him and tell me that Abhay will die, but not by his hand.
The chandelier proceeds to fall on Abhay, killing him instantly.

Madhu and bittuji rush to join RK, who is shocked when he sees Madhu in two places at once.
RK realises that the person he assumed to be madhu was actually madhubala's spirit, and She smiles warmly towards RK and tearfully bids him goodbye,
disappearing in lights.
Madhu run to rk and hug him he hug her tightly.
They unite.
Rk tell everything to mohan.madhu dk a film with rk with launch her as actress then she and rk got engaged.

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Hey guys do read the new one shot its based on om shaanti om

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Awesome OS

well written

loved it