REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 105

Originally posted by: anmirza

Hey I caught up with the story after really long and I loved it!!!!

How are you doing? How is the situation in NJ now??? Hope you’re keeping safe!!!

Thanks for catching up with the story. Now dont disappear...lol....coz we all miss you...

I am ok. Thinks are bad here but have got used to being home. How's everything on your side? Stay safe

Part 73

Cab driver- Par wo toh highway ke beech mein hai,madam

Geet- Haan wahin jaana hai

Cab driver is puzzled

Geet- Aap chaalaaiye please. Late ho raha hai

Cab driver stops at middle of the deserted highway

Geet gets down

She walks a few steps to find Maan waiting for her on his bike

She hops on the bike as he zooms off with her

They reach Maan’s house

She gets in as comfortable as it is her own house

G-Pata hai ghar mein pehli baat jhooth bolke aayi hoon main

He smiles

M-Acha? Kya kaha ghar pe?

G-kaha ki main apni friend Manneeta se milne jaa rahi hoon

He laughs

G-Manneeta!

She laughs pulling Maan’s cheek

Maan gets up embarrassed

M- Stop stop. Let me go and check the food. It will get burnt

She is roaming around the house as Maan is in the kitchen

She walks to his workstation thinking –‘ki yeh Maan weekend mein bhi kaam kar raha hai’

She goes to close his laptop

She notices few confidential documents and information open in his laptop

Company’s whole balance sheet is there

Geet thinks, Maan ke paas ye sab information…kyun…aur kaise

But brushes off thinking Akhil ne koi kaam diya hoga

They spend the day hand in hand snuggling into each other

Shaam hoti hai

G- Late ho raha hai. Ab mujhe jaana hoga warna mamma ko lagega itni der kahan gai main

M- Tum aayi bhi toh late thi

G-Main late nahi aayi. Tumhare yahan pohonchne mein hi 2 ghanta lag jaata hai

M-Hmm. Chalo I will drop you

G- No, I will go. Tum jaoge 2 ghanta, aaoge 2 ghanta

M-Toh kya hua? I will get to spend more time with you

She blushes

G- You are not real, right?

Maan frowns

G-itna acha koi ho hi nahi sakta

He looks into her eyes

M-Its you. You make me a better man, Geet.

Her heart instantly melts into a puddle

She mounts his bike as he drives

She is enjoying the cool pleasant breeze on her face while holding onto him firmly

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He drops her few yards away from her home so nobody can see her

She gives him a quick peck on the check and happily runs into her house

She enters the house seeing Akhil with her family

He runs to her

A-Kahan thi tum itni der se, Geet?

She looks down

G- Friend ke yahan

A-Kaunsi friend? Aur itni der kaise lag gai

G- Wo…usko…tum nahi jaante

A-Aise tumhari kaunsi friend hai jisse main nahi jaanta?

She sighs

G-Tumhe koi kaam tha?

A-Of course! Mera closet kaun saaf karega? It’s a mess! Aur meri dry-cleaning bhi toh laani hai

She nods

G-Aaj main bohot thak gai hoon. Kal kar doongi

A-No! How can you say that? You have to do it!

G-Maine kaha naa Akhil, kal kar doongi

A-Tum subah se bahar thi! Its your responsibility!Mujhe subah tak ye chahiye

She looks at Akhil and walks away into her room leaving Akhil and her whole family gasping

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Geet accidentally going through Maans laptop may stir something in the future I just hope its not going to create any misunderstandings. Love how Geet told AKhil off. e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol

Originally posted by: Kkiran

Geet accidentally going through Maans laptop may stir something in the future I just hope its not going to create any misunderstandings. Love how Geet told AKhil off. e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol

True, that might raise questions in Geet's back of the mind. I loved the line- e can sit and stare at his dirty closet lol. She indirectly did it. I also recall this quote in this situation since I see so much change in Geet: "It doesnt matter what's in front of her, as long as she knows who's behind her"

Akhil is not a normal human being. How can he treat someone like that !

Originally posted by: masoomii

Akhil is not a normal human being. How can he treat someone like that !

LOL...sahi pakde hain😆

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I am as ok as I can be being in NY!

I love your writing n so I read like 30 plus updates in one go!

I am glad that Geet didn’t get to look more into Maan’s stuff! I don’t wanna see either of them being heartbroken that soon! It’s just the start of their love story so hopefully it’ll only get better from here on 😉

I so wanna beat up Akhil though 😡 He’s such a 🤬

Originally posted by: anmirza

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I am as ok as I can be being in NY!

I love your writing n so I read like 30 plus updates in one go!

I am glad that Geet didn’t get to look more into Maan’s stuff! I don’t wanna see either of them being heartbroken that soon! It’s just the start of their love story so hopefully it’ll only get better from here on 😉

I so wanna beat up Akhil though 😡 He’s such a 🤬

Seriously yaar stay safe. Thanks for liking my story. You made my day with your words. But seriously reader's comments are the fuel that motivates me to write.

By the way, what do you think would have happened if Geet would have seen Maan's stuff. Aur Akhil ke baare mein jo bolna hai khulke bol, Akhil bashing always makes me happy

Wow geet ignoring akhil too good waiting for next

Hi , thanks for update and after long waiting

Akhil pahele se dominet karta hai geet ko per she is love with him so she ignore it but after maam coming in her life she knows about her true feeling.maan ki sachhai khud maan bataye to better hai.please dono me mu mate hone dene

Maan ne akhil ke liye kuch plan kiya hoga

After all he is Maan singh khurana

Ab jaldise update dena,

Stay safe