Suvan FF: A Thousand Years - Completed - Page 20

A vry nice update yAar.........superb......wn r u gng to update the nxt part ........?!!! Waiting ......and my suggestion is can u pls add some emotional intimate scenes btw suvan when they meet again.....I think it would look nice.....huhhh?!!!!

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

A vry nice update yAar.........superb......wn r u gng to update the nxt part ........?!!! Waiting ......and my suggestion is can u pls add some emotional intimate scenes btw suvan when they meet again.....I think it would look nice.....huhhh?!!!!

Hey! Thanks! Seeing you here after a long time! Do you mean emotionally intimate or emotional intimate? Emotionally intimate would be deep conversations and or being there for each other through tough times. I think this chapter had a lot of that since Suman stood like a rock with Shravan through his recovery. If you’re talking about emotional physically intimate scenes, it would be indirectly mentioned like it was in the Ladakh scene but I won’t go in depth describing something like that because I’m not too comfortable writing that. Also, we have all ages here on the forum so it might not be appropriate for them. Things between suvan will change in the future (in a positive way) but I wouldn’t write a in-depth intimate scene. It would be similar to the Ladakh scene where I used very vague language but enough to understand what happened. Idk if that made sense 😆

Also, in this chapter I didn’t have them even kiss because Suman is technically still married and that would be infidelity which would go against the character sketch of SuVan because in the previous chapter, Anish questions their relationship as to how it’s different from his and Devika’s and well...that’s how it’s different because both SuVan are morally aware. You read both chapters 11 & 12, right?

Awesome update. Emotional one. Waiting to see what will be Shravan's reaction after reading her letter.

Originally posted by: Veenapain

Awesome update. Emotional one. Waiting to see what will be Shravan's reaction after reading her letter.

Thank you Veena! I’m happy you liked it! So, to make it clear, Suman used white out to erase the second paragraph because she knows Kavita wouldn’t approve of what she wrote. Kavita even checks the letter after Suman gives it to her. But, maybe they are underestimating Shravan’s intelligence 😆

Unresed on previous page😃

Originally posted by: Bucky

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This chapter was gut-wrenching to read. You've managed to capture the pain and the surreal beauty in it, flawlessly!👏

Aww thank you! That’s really sweet of you to say. Tbh, writing the first half was a little difficult just because of how depressing the plot was. Also I was trying to keep it “real” as possible and not romanticize Shravan’s recovery process.

Yep.....that's the same I'm saying.... like deeply emotionally intimate scenes jst like in chapter 12 ... their conversation is interrupted by shravan 's mom...such conversation is needed with more content like pouring their feelings......that's wt I mean.

By the way wn r u gng to update the nxt chapter....😆😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

Yep.....that's the same I'm saying.... like deeply emotionally intimate scenes jst like in chapter 12 ... their conversation is interrupted by shravan 's mom...such conversation is needed with more content like pouring their feelings......that's wt I mean.

Ok good you had me scared at first lol yeah I can definitely write that! Yeah so in this chapter Shravan was initially traumatized from his accident and wasn’t ready to talk about it and when he recovers he tells Suman that she was all he could think about in what could have been his last moment of life. Shravan did most of the talking while Suman listened and then Kavita came in as kabab mein haddi to later be the evil sasu maa lol

(Spoiler alert) So actually, in about 4-5 chapters, SuVan will have an uninterrupted heart-to-heart convo alone. The next few chapters will build up to that moment. I think you will like it! I already have it all planned out in my head lol tbh my most favorite scene that I wrote was in Dehradun when Suman talks about missing her dad to Shravan and they become friends again. So it will be something like that but a lot more emotional as they reflect on their relationship.

Originally posted by: Rajitha_rajji95

By the way wn r u gng to update the nxt chapter....😆😆😆😆😆

I haven’t started writing the next chapter yet oops lol but I think I might start writing tonight as next chapter Isn’t very long. Also, I’m trying to finish the FF by the beginning of June but looking at my pace, idk if I’ll be able to write that quickly lol