**Her Old Wounds ** **MishBir TS** Completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Shonaaaa....this was a perfect ending to what you began... ofcourse the story will continue...and things can go either way with Kuhu. (If u want to continue or something new😉😉)

Kunal has matured beyond expectations...his calm n mature way of talking to Kuhu. Placing himself in her shoes n understanding her POV. Also taking charge of explaining to her the consequences without being hurtful or threatening...

Abir ...I have now words ....you have Brilliantly once again characterized him. His patience, hopes and positivity. His conversation with KUHU was too notch.

Bless you and keep writing as an when you can.

Loads of love n happiness.

PS: if we wish that you write for the show, doesn't mean the show writers are not good...it just means YOU ARE GOOD n have the talent.! (No comparisons with anyone)

Love n hugs

Stay safe

N

Thank you so much di <3 <3

Haha this story definitely ends here! But I have left readers to now introspect on what can happen ;p.

Abir had promised Nanko will come around. While we all hated how much he babied Kunal for all the nonsense he did, he finally did come around. So probably Abir thought maybe he can try and do the same with Kuhu.

Thank you once again for reading and commenting <3

And yes to your PS. We spoke about this <3

Heya! I am really glad that I came across this TS of yours and completed read it as well.

This is one brilliant piece of writing. If that's even enough to appreciate this. 👍🏼 You have tackled the MAJOR issues that need to be addressed. Something that I haven't seen in the show. Forget about addressing those issues, they are barely touched upon. Apart from the bitter bond between Kuhu and Mishti. I think, they might close this first before tackling the biggest issue of Devyani abandoning Mishti in her childhood. That would probably take a couple of years before we see it being brought up. But still mending Kuhu and Mishti's bond is going to be one hell of a task as well.

Anyways, I loved it how you didn't just address the issue but also had them straighten things out. Rightly said, they will need to take baby steps to deal with the hurt that Mishti has been carrying for the past 14 years. But she has won half the battle already once she decided to actually trying to let things go. What certainly can't be missed is that Abir is her pillar of support she will always lean onto. She would look up for him whenever she wavers. They are into this together and will be each others' support system.

Devyani's side of the story helped quite a lot to understand her perspective. And it actually made sense to have Mishti try taking baby steps to forgive her and let bygones be bygones.

Damn! Can I say I loved how Kunal had evolved. It seemed as though he was suddenly slammed with reality in his face and grown up overnight. He had matured and become much more sensible. His hesitance and guilt while he tried to apologize, coupled with his owning up his mistakes, accepting his faults and trying to make Kuhu realize that he can't see her make the same mistakes he had once made. Because he loves her. In that moment, I really felt it was Abir's brother - Abir's Nanko who was brought alive. Such character growth is worth appreciating.

I am really hope Kuhu gets some sense knocked into her brains after the brothers gave her an earful. Because she has to know that none of it was Mishti's fault. She had blamed her for all the wrong reasons. But if she still doesn't get things straightened out, she better be prepared to face Abir, the husband. 😂

You have got a way with your words. You handle emotions really well and jot them down making them seamless. Everything falls into place and seems so simple. But the emotions are really complex. Hats off to you! 👏 You do fab job, girl. Thanks for writing this beautiful piece of work and sharing it with us. 🤗

Love,

Shenz. ❤️

This is truly one fabulous piece of writing yaar👏...I m just fallin short of words to praise ur work dear..

Right from Mishti's breakdown,Abir's regret & realisation of the bigger picture,Kunal's apology not only to Mishti but too Kuhu as well, Devyani's stance,Kuhu's reflections & lastly MISHBIR cute banter❤️ everything was bang on👍🏼

I believe a writer's success depends on how he makes his readers feel his characters & dear I cud literally visualize the scenes & connect vid the plight of every character...literally no 1 s @ fault yet circumstances can't b favorable to both sides & der s wer the pbm starts..v often fail to c to wat extent our actions may affect others..& dat if not called out @ right time bcoms way 2 difficult to handle

u have maintained the core characteristics of each character very well( a way originally our writers vud have wanted them to b) unlike our beloved CVs whom seem to b oscillating den & der ...& this needs special shout out🥳

Thank u once again for giving us Dis write up dear😳

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Heya! I am really glad that I came across this TS of yours and completed read it as well.

This is one brilliant piece of writing. If that's even enough to appreciate this. 👍🏼 You have tackled the MAJOR issues that need to be addressed. Something that I haven't seen in the show. Forget about addressing those issues, they are barely touched upon. Apart from the bitter bond between Kuhu and Mishti. I think, they might close this first before tackling the biggest issue of Devyani abandoning Mishti in her childhood. That would probably take a couple of years before we see it being brought up. But still mending Kuhu and Mishti's bond is going to be one hell of a task as well.

Anyways, I loved it how you didn't just address the issue but also had them straighten things out. Rightly said, they will need to take baby steps to deal with the hurt that Mishti has been carrying for the past 14 years. But she has won half the battle already once she decided to actually trying to let things go. What certainly can't be missed is that Abir is her pillar of support she will always lean onto. She would look up for him whenever she wavers. They are into this together and will be each others' support system.

Devyani's side of the story helped quite a lot to understand her perspective. And it actually made sense to have Mishti try taking baby steps to forgive her and let bygones be bygones.

Damn! Can I say I loved how Kunal had evolved. It seemed as though he was suddenly slammed with reality in his face and grown up overnight. He had matured and become much more sensible. His hesitance and guilt while he tried to apologize, coupled with his owning up his mistakes, accepting his faults and trying to make Kuhu realize that he can't see her make the same mistakes he had once made. Because he loves her. In that moment, I really felt it was Abir's brother - Abir's Nanko who was brought alive. Such character growth is worth appreciating.

I am really hope Kuhu gets some sense knocked into her brains after the brothers gave her an earful. Because she has to know that none of it was Mishti's fault. She had blamed her for all the wrong reasons. But if she still doesn't get things straightened out, she better be prepared to face Abir, the husband. 😂

You have got a way with your words. You handle emotions really well and jot them down making them seamless. Everything falls into place and seems so simple. But the emotions are really complex. Hats off to you! 👏 You do fab job, girl. Thanks for writing this beautiful piece of work and sharing it with us. 🤗

Love,

Shenz. ❤️

Heeyyy Shenzz!!

Firstly! Thank you so so so much for reading my work. I feel honored when such amazing writers read mine and leave such lovely feedback.

I think in general its going to take a long time for ITV to even delve into mental issues. Its business at the end of the day. They need to provide entertainment and they will provide what the TRP audience wants to see. Until and unless the outlook of TRP audience doesnt change, these issues arent going to easily addressed.

Hhaha! Yes! I also wanted to leave things open ended because obviously when you find the flaw in your own self, first step it to accept the flaw. And even that takes time. So I just ended at there. With time I think you start realizing that nothing happens overnight. And I guess that was my one another point I tried to vaguely address.

I am a pretty emotional person in general but I suck at vocabulary. Thats why probably I use the simplest words to put my point across. I wish I had the creativity like you guys who pick words and paint an amazing art of a story!!

Thank you once again for reading my story and leaving your feedback!

Lots of love,

Shonali!

Originally posted by: Kendrix

This is truly one fabulous piece of writing yaar👏...I m just fallin short of words to praise ur work dear..

Right from Mishti's breakdown,Abir's regret & realisation of the bigger picture,Kunal's apology not only to Mishti but too Kuhu as well, Devyani's stance,Kuhu's reflections & lastly MISHBIR cute banter❤️ everything was bang on👍🏼

I believe a writer's success depends on how he makes his readers feel his characters & dear I cud literally visualize the scenes & connect vid the plight of every character...literally no 1 s @ fault yet circumstances can't b favorable to both sides & der s wer the pbm starts..v often fail to c to wat extent our actions may affect others..& dat if not called out @ right time bcoms way 2 difficult to handle

u have maintained the core characteristics of each character very well( a way originally our writers vud have wanted them to b) unlike our beloved CVs whom seem to b oscillating den & der ...& this needs special shout out🥳

Thank u once again for giving us Dis write up dear😳

Thank you so much for your kind words! <3

I am glad you liked the way this story was craved. I guess Mishti's breakdown has been one of my dream scene. And yes you are right! Some situations you just cant blame anyone. They happen because they are meant to happen. Some people unfortunately just become associated to it.

I think our CVs are also doing a good job. At the end of the day its just how a character would react. In extreme situations, sometimes even the sanest person would make the biggest blunder. There are some emotions for human beings that remain unknown to them too. They dont realize such emotions exist in them until they are placed in such situations. Even after the time passes, we humans sit and analyze what could have been differently. But the fact is that the human is always going to react the best they can when they are put in their testing phases. They will either regret later or celebrate based on the results those reactions gave.

Thank you once again for reading and leaving such a lovely comment for me <3