**Her Old Wounds ** **MishBir TS** Completed - Page 10

This was really well written. Abir has a lot of patience, really. I would not have been able to have such a "sabhya" conversation with Kuhu if I had been in his place. She's done so much to hurt Mishti and I just really hate her at times.

But yes, I agree that if she felt that Mishti was taking her grandparents away from her, she should have said something. But she should also realize that they're her grandparents, but they're Mishti's parents. So, of course, their first priority would be their daughter, who's had her whole world changed. But yeah, she should have said something. Even Mishti could have complained about how Kuhu had been treating her, but Mishti was afraid of hurting the people who took her in, so I understand. Kuhu had had more time to acclimate herself to them, and she already considered them family, felt that she had a right on them. She definitely could have said something.

But I'm so, so, so happy to see how Nanko has grown up. He's admitting to his mistakes so freely, he's understanding where he went wrong, and he's trying to make things better. So, so, so proud of my kid. ❤

And of course, Abir finally saying something to Kuhu. I really want it to happen on the show too. Somehow Abir just keeps overlooking and lets Kuhu off the hook, which he shouldn't. It's really necessary for him to talk to her before things get really out of hand.

That lil bit at the end was so heart-warming. My MishBir are happy. What else could a girl want for?

Thank you so very much for this beautiful short story. I loved every bit of it. Absolutely, completely, mind-blowingly amazing. Thank you!

Shonaa....🤗

Thank you so much for giving us this epilogue. Loved Nanko's conversation with Kuhu. Yes, I would call him Nanko here. Because the person talking is Abir's Nanko, not Big Ben's Kunal. That egoistic, arrogant Kunal has grown into Abir's sensible and sweet Nanko. I admire the growth of this character. He just makes me feel so proud as if I am Abir. 😆 But yeah, the way he dealt with Kuhu is really praiseworthy. He accepted his mistakes and tried making Kuhu see the sense too. He was irritated with her rant, yet he promised to stand by her as he owe it to her. He has become the perfect son, brother, brother-in-law and husband. He has my heart! ❤️

Kuhu is still on her #BlameMishti mode. For her everything wrong that happens in her life is because of Mishti. Doesn't matter if Mishti is not related to it even remotely. She just need a reason to blame Mishti. Sometimes I feel that she is looking for problems so that she can blame it upon Mishti. I get it that she was upset with her grand parents for giving more attention to Mishti. Then she should have said that to them, not take it upon Mishti. And why wouldn't they shower more love and attention to Mishti? She is their daughter. It's natural that parents would be most concerned about their own children. If Kuhu didn't accept Mishti as family, it does not mean that her grand parents too didn't accept Mishti as their own. And it's not like they ignored her. They knew that she had a loving set of parents who would take care of her. Also her parents were totally dedicated to her. They were not very concerned about Mishti. It was only Badi Maa & Bade Papa who genuinely thought about and cared for Mishti.

Nanko & Abir were completely correct in decoding her and Jasmeet's hatred towards Mishti on Nishant's issue. It's just their ego. They would have been happy if Nannu broke the relation. But they couldn't digest the fact that Mishti got to decide the fate of their relation. Such pathetic mentality.

Abir should be some saint for having so much of self control. I for once know that I wouldn't be this patient with a person who hurt my loved ones time and again. Sometimes it's frustrating to see him being so understanding towards people who are clearly undeserving. But I'm glad that he called her out for her behaviour. She needed to ear that from him. And what does Kuhu mean by Mishti snatched away Abir from her? He was always Mishti's friend first and then her brother-in-law. Mishti & Abir's hearts were joined way before she came to know him even as an acquaintance. I loved it that Abir gave her an ultimatum. Hopefully she won't cross her limits again.

Thank you for giving me my lighthearted MishBir at the end. It just left me smiling widely after reading this. Their love is goals. THEY are goals. And I would love to fall in love with them again and again. I have nothing more to say about them, because words will fall short.

I enjoyed the entire journey of this story, Shona. Keep writing more on MishBir. 🤗❤️

So so so beautiful update. Its very ideal and sensible way of making peace between sisters and most important letting kuhu see her faults, behaviour and ppl around her. Thank you for this.

Shonaaaa....this was a perfect ending to what you began... ofcourse the story will continue...and things can go either way with Kuhu. (If u want to continue or something new😉😉)

Kunal has matured beyond expectations...his calm n mature way of talking to Kuhu. Placing himself in her shoes n understanding her POV. Also taking charge of explaining to her the consequences without being hurtful or threatening...

Abir ...I have now words ....you have Brilliantly once again characterized him. His patience, hopes and positivity. His conversation with KUHU was too notch.

Bless you and keep writing as an when you can.

Loads of love n happiness.

PS: if we wish that you write for the show, doesn't mean the show writers are not good...it just means YOU ARE GOOD n have the talent.! (No comparisons with anyone)

Love n hugs

Stay safe

N

Originally posted by: tumhiho

Hello 👋 Hope you are well! Wow.. what a a writer you are. You went into each character, understood them and wrote so realistically and convincingly. Can you please write for this show as well? I thoroughly enjoyed Kunal’s confession to Kuhu.. that was much needed because he needs to be the one to reassure her and be by her side and I feel that is missing in the show. And Your Abir was on point with everything ❤️❤️ I also really liked how Abir told Kuhu that she needs to express herself for others to know. Thank you for this lovely work 👏 you’ve got a fan 👏

Hey there! I am doing well. Thank you for asking! And thank you so much for the compliment.

Hahaha! I am sure the makers are doing their best jobs with the show. <3 I am still just a very amateur writer but thank you for the compliment.

Yes! Kuhu somewhere needs that reaasurance that she isnt going to be alone. Her fear of being left alone makes her do stupid and mean stuff.

Both girls-- Mishti and Kuhu have this fear. But their way of dealing with it is totally different. And yes, people need to express. Parents, families arent mind readers. No matter how much ever you expect them to be. There is only this much they will know. Rest you have to tell them. This is our society's biggest problems. Treating parents as god. While I agree they parents should be respected the most on this, they should also be seen as humans, who can make mistakes. Only then, life can be much more resolved in families.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting again!

Originally posted by: screen22

Thank You🤗

nicely written and executed to the core

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <3

Originally posted by: Mishtiagarwal

Excellently written as always 👏👏.The talk between kuku is much needed. I am not really a fan of kuku but the way Kunal and Abir made understand kuhu is perfectly written. You perfectly justified all the characters.The ending is simply beautiful 👏👏.I will be looking up to your upcoming lovely writings.

Thank you so much for the appreciation. I am glad I was able to bring that connect for you back! <3

Originally posted by: DMGThings

This was really well written. Abir has a lot of patience, really. I would not have been able to have such a "sabhya" conversation with Kuhu if I had been in his place. She's done so much to hurt Mishti and I just really hate her at times.

But yes, I agree that if she felt that Mishti was taking her grandparents away from her, she should have said something. But she should also realize that they're her grandparents, but they're Mishti's parents. So, of course, their first priority would be their daughter, who's had her whole world changed. But yeah, she should have said something. Even Mishti could have complained about how Kuhu had been treating her, but Mishti was afraid of hurting the people who took her in, so I understand. Kuhu had had more time to acclimate herself to them, and she already considered them family, felt that she had a right on them. She definitely could have said something.

But I'm so, so, so happy to see how Nanko has grown up. He's admitting to his mistakes so freely, he's understanding where he went wrong, and he's trying to make things better. So, so, so proud of my kid. ❤

And of course, Abir finally saying something to Kuhu. I really want it to happen on the show too. Somehow Abir just keeps overlooking and lets Kuhu off the hook, which he shouldn't. It's really necessary for him to talk to her before things get really out of hand.

That lil bit at the end was so heart-warming. My MishBir are happy. What else could a girl want for?

Thank you so very much for this beautiful short story. I loved every bit of it. Absolutely, completely, mind-blowingly amazing. Thank you!

Hahah thank you girl! Always looking forward to your review <3

See thats the similarity and difference between Mishti and Kuhu. They both have had the same fates with this family. Kuhu was also not born in the family. She was brought to this family after she lost her mother. Mishti was given away to the family. The difference here is that Kuhu shares the same blood line and Mishti doesnt. So both somehow have this fear and urge of losing this family. Kuhu feels that more because somewhere she feels as she shares the same blood line, she should get more of that affection or atleast equal. Yes, as Raj and Vish were Mishti's adoptive parents, so they became more attentive to Mishti, taking care of her. But Kuhu wasnt alone. She had Shaurya Varsha too. Now both the girls have fear of losing the family. Mishti doesnt use it as a reason to harm others. While Kuhu, when she cant handle it, uses Mishti as her easy scapegoat to take it out. Because she feels she cant share that with the family. And hence, in my story, I made Abir tell that both the girls had to tell their family.

Thank you for always reading and leaving such amazing comments! means a lot <3

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Shonaa....🤗

Thank you so much for giving us this epilogue. Loved Nanko's conversation with Kuhu. Yes, I would call him Nanko here. Because the person talking is Abir's Nanko, not Big Ben's Kunal. That egoistic, arrogant Kunal has grown into Abir's sensible and sweet Nanko. I admire the growth of this character. He just makes me feel so proud as if I am Abir. 😆 But yeah, the way he dealt with Kuhu is really praiseworthy. He accepted his mistakes and tried making Kuhu see the sense too. He was irritated with her rant, yet he promised to stand by her as he owe it to her. He has become the perfect son, brother, brother-in-law and husband. He has my heart! ❤️

Kuhu is still on her #BlameMishti mode. For her everything wrong that happens in her life is because of Mishti. Doesn't matter if Mishti is not related to it even remotely. She just need a reason to blame Mishti. Sometimes I feel that she is looking for problems so that she can blame it upon Mishti. I get it that she was upset with her grand parents for giving more attention to Mishti. Then she should have said that to them, not take it upon Mishti. And why wouldn't they shower more love and attention to Mishti? She is their daughter. It's natural that parents would be most concerned about their own children. If Kuhu didn't accept Mishti as family, it does not mean that her grand parents too didn't accept Mishti as their own. And it's not like they ignored her. They knew that she had a loving set of parents who would take care of her. Also her parents were totally dedicated to her. They were not very concerned about Mishti. It was only Badi Maa & Bade Papa who genuinely thought about and cared for Mishti.

Nanko & Abir were completely correct in decoding her and Jasmeet's hatred towards Mishti on Nishant's issue. It's just their ego. They would have been happy if Nannu broke the relation. But they couldn't digest the fact that Mishti got to decide the fate of their relation. Such pathetic mentality.

Abir should be some saint for having so much of self control. I for once know that I wouldn't be this patient with a person who hurt my loved ones time and again. Sometimes it's frustrating to see him being so understanding towards people who are clearly undeserving. But I'm glad that he called her out for her behaviour. She needed to ear that from him. And what does Kuhu mean by Mishti snatched away Abir from her? He was always Mishti's friend first and then her brother-in-law. Mishti & Abir's hearts were joined way before she came to know him even as an acquaintance. I loved it that Abir gave her an ultimatum. Hopefully she won't cross her limits again.

Thank you for giving me my lighthearted MishBir at the end. It just left me smiling widely after reading this. Their love is goals. THEY are goals. And I would love to fall in love with them again and again. I have nothing more to say about them, because words will fall short.

I enjoyed the entire journey of this story, Shona. Keep writing more on MishBir. 🤗❤️

Asshiiiiiii <3 <3 <3

Yes! Nanko has grown and how? He is finally learning to see things the way they are. Without having his ego come in between. Wasnt Abir right about him all along? Abir promised his Nanko will come around and he did <3

For Kuhu yes, Old habits die hard. I am copy pasting one part of my comment which i made in one of my other replies:

See thats the similarity and difference between Mishti and Kuhu. They both have had the same fates with this family. Kuhu was also not born in the family. She was brought to this family after she lost her mother. Mishti was given away to the family. The difference here is that Kuhu shares the same blood line and Mishti doesnt. So both somehow have this fear and urge of losing this family. Kuhu feels that more because somewhere she feels as she shares the same blood line, she should get more of that affection or atleast equal. Yes, as Raj and Vish were Mishti's adoptive parents, so they became more attentive to Mishti, taking care of her. But Kuhu wasnt alone. She had Shaurya Varsha too. Now both the girls have fear of losing the family. Mishti doesnt use it as a reason to harm others. While Kuhu, when she cant handle it, uses Mishti as her easy scapegoat to take it out. Because she feels she cant share that with the family. And even if Kuhu has this first instinct of not believing Jas, she ends up believing it. Even she doesnt wish to harm Mish, she ends up harming her. And then because she gets scared of being caught and getting thrown out or punished for that, she finds excuses over excuses to cover it up or blame it on Mishti. Mishti, on the other hand, owns her mistakes, when she is wrong. And that is what sets both the girls apart.

One of the reason Abir has always maintained that type of stature in front of Kuhu is because of the kind of relation you share. He has always seen Kuhu as his brother's special someone first. You are different with your friends and your best friends. You act different with your parents and your in laws. Abir's has had this fun relationship with Kuhu, with a certain line of respect which he always maintains from his side. He also tries to baby her more because he also sees her as a victim to her brother's egoistic and irrational behavior. And he also knows his mom. So he has to set a balance somehow to make sure his mother isnt proven right. If he starts losing it, his mom will win. So he tries to always maintain that peace with everyone until he can.

Thank you for always reading and being so encouraging <3

Originally posted by: maneetmayur

So so so beautiful update. Its very ideal and sensible way of making peace between sisters and most important letting kuhu see her faults, behaviour and ppl around her. Thank you for this.

Thank you for the lovely comment and catching the right chord to the story! I am glad you liked it <3