My First story : Love by chance #3 Part 27 on pg 112 May 26 - Page 71

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Posted: 4 years ago

Thanks for summary

Pls update soon

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Thank you so much for the summary

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Lovely synopsis... 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 25


Hello friends finally updating this..


Ishita wiped his tears “ hey now don't cry I can't see you crying more if u don't want to tell then its OK but please stop crying “

Raman - no I will tell you as it's your right to know & I don't want hide this big truth of my life from you..

Ishita looking at him with anxiously while calmed himself 

Raman : you know jhalli I'm not maa papa's real son..he anyhow completed his sentence & tears again start flowing while ishita was shocked to react anything but his hiccups bring her back & she cupped his face “ I think u have any misunderstanding Mr lrll I mean ye kaise hi sakta hai, you & jiju are twins na so”

Raman - no jhalli we are not twins..

Ishita(shocked)- what?

Raman - hmm it's true ..

Ishita - but how can u be so sure I mean do u have any proof?..he nodded


Flashback


Raman was searching for album of their childhood pics in his father's room to surprise mihir when a file fell & paper spreads all over there 

Raman : oops raman tune ye kya kar diya if Mugambo(Mr Bhalla) has come he will eat you..saying he starts collecting all pages & about to keep it in file when his eyes fell on the page where written "Adaption Formalities" he immidiately starts reading it & got to know that on the same date of his birth Bhallas adopated a boy ..he sat on floor while tears flowing from his eyes his body suddenly became weak as he is not able to move but for confirming he gathered himself & thought to ask his parents & headed towards living room where mr & mrs bualla were having evening tea & snacks , he was about to call them but stopped hearing their talk

Mr bhalla- toshiji he should never know that we are not his biological parents..

T - ha Bhalla ji, aap fikar na karo, mere raman aur Mihir dono meri jaan hai. I know he will be broken knowing the truth I won't ever let that happen but you have to treat them equally as  kbhi -2 jyada strict ya polite hone se bhi children starts thinking.

Mr bhalla nodded while raman stepped back from there

Flashback ends


He was just crying uncontrollably hugging ishita while she was too shocked knowing it

Ishita : sshhh stop baba this much crying is not good for health please & lets go we will talk to your parents may be there is some missunderstanding

Raman : nope there is no chance of it & now everything is clear that why papa used to scold me everytime or daante bhi kyu na mujh anaath ko unhone apne ghr mein jagah di & given me all they provide mihir bhai even more than him , they had send me London for higher studies , they did everything for me but I'm not worth of it  , i m just a useless fellow, you too stay from me as you deserve better person than me not like me who don't know whose his real parents & surname..

..

Ishita : stop it Mr Lrll now i will slap you ,how   can you say that han now you will tell me whom should i love or not ? I loved you as person not bcoz of your surname..

Raman : you won't leave me na..he asked with much difficulty bcoz of hiccups

Ishita : never & ever..both hugged each other tightly & remains like this for sometime when he said

Raman : jhalli ..

Ishita : hmm..

Raman : i had decided something..

She broke the hug & asked him 

Raman : i will find a job for me & will leave somewhere else as now i don't want be burden on them..

Ishita : no mr lrll you will not do this..

Raman : after knowing the truth still you wants this..

Ishita : yes bcoz may be u starts staying away from them but you will always miss them & so as they & just think about them they never wanted to let you know this as they can't see you hurt & by taking this step you will hurt them & disrespect their decision..

Raman : you are right jhalli & now i don't want to become a reason of their sadness, now i will do everything which make them proud of their decision of adopting me  specially papa main unka layak beta banke dikhaunga.. He said Determination while ishita hugged him "that's like my Mr Lrll"

Raman  : thank you jhalli if u were not there for me i don't know what i would have done..

Ishita : i know i know main hu hi best any doubt...she said lightened the atmosphere

Raman :  nahi ji..both laughs & headed ftom there Raman ask her to not tell this truth to anyone not even mihika as if mihir come to know he will be broken like him & he don't want to see his brother like this

Ishita : i know Mr lrll you don't need to worry as it will be between us only..

Raman : i love you jhalli..

 Ishita : i love you more mr lrll..

Raman : come i will drop you ..saying he tried to stand but she holds his hand

Ishita : sit..he obeyed her & sat besides her while she take out a tiffin box from his bag

Raman : what's this?

Ishita : pasta for you made by your jhalli as i know tumne kuch khaya nahi hoga haina…

He nodded with teary eyes while she fed him "now no more cry" she wiped his tears while both feed each other & soon droved from there

He dropped her & promised her that he will take care of him as she was not letting him go 

Ishita reached inside her room & found mihika was pacing in fro

Mihika : ishu u came , what happened ? Raman is fine na ? Did he told you anything? ..

Ishita : arey nothing to worry akka u know na uncle always scolds him bas wahi ..

Mihika : pakka na bas wahi ..

Ishita : han akka why would i lie?..

Mihika : hmm ik chalo glad he is fine..saying she hugged her 

Ishita(st) : I'm sorry akka bcoz it's first time I'm hiding anything from you as its your happy time & i don't want that your & jiju's happiness spoil bcoz of this & i can't break my promise sorry..

Other side raman reached there & found mihir was waiting for him

Mihir : raman where were you han? & i had called you so many times but you were not taking it, do u have any idea, how much i was worried for you..

Raman didn't replied anything just hugged him tightly

Raman : i m sorry bhai aaj se apko sikayat ka koi mauka nahi dunga..mihir felt his voice lil different 

Mihir : Raman tu thik hai na?..  Said rubbing his back while raman just wiped his tears & broke the hug

Raman : mujhe kya hona hai I'm fit n fine..

Mihir : great & listen don't take anything on heart you know how papa is.. Raman just nodded & went towared his room leaving a confused mihir behind 

Mihir : don't know why but i have a feeling that there is something behind his smile, please matarani keep my raman always happy..

Next morning everyone was having their breakfast when raman comes there wushing them good morning

Toshi ji : come puttar  see i had made your favorite aloo ke parathe..

He just smiles & thanked her then said "papa i m sorry for everything i did it in past, you people had done so much for me & I'm always be thankul for it " Mr bhalla looked on him so as toshi ji & mihir

Toshi ji : why are you saying this puttar? You are our son hum nahi karenge toh kon karega..

Mr bhalla : toshi ji is right & i know yesterday i was lil more harsh but i didnt mean to hurt you &..he was saying but raman interrupted " no papa whatever u had said it was totally right"

Mihir : raman papa is saying na he didn't mean it so please forget it..

Raman : i too want same bhai & for that i have to prove myself a good son..Mr bhalla smiles hearing this

Mr bhalla : I'm happy to hear it raman that finally you are realizing ur responsibilities..

Raman : thank you..

Mr bhalla : so what had you decided?

Raman : today i will go to some companies for jobs interviews..

Mr bhalla : why don't you join us kyu mihir?

Mihir : ofcourse papa..

Raman : but..

Mr bhalla : no but you are joining our business from today only ..saying he opened his arms & raman hugged  him tightly while mihir & toshi smiled seeing this..


That's all for now hope you all liked it ..


Love

Harshita

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update 

Wait....what??!!

Raman was adopted by the bhallas🤔😔

He got so vulnerable 

Loved how Ishita consoled and supported him❤️

He was now determined to prove himself as the best son

Lets see what happens next 

Ty 4 d pm too

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very emotional and beautiful update  dr

Poor raman 

He was adopted son of mr bhalla 

He just crying and sharing to ishita about  this....

Raman hug her tightly...he want became responsible  person 

Eagerly waiting for next update plzzzz soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome chappy 

Sad raman

He misunderstood 

Update soon 

Thanks for Pm 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Emotional updt di

Feeling bad for Raman. He misunderstood seeing the adoption papers and thought Mr and mrs. bhalla has adopted him. Love the way ishu support him and tries to motivate. Ishu lies to mihika about their conversation. Mihir and raman bond is nice. Mihir doesn't able to see raman sad. In Morning raman thanks their parents and decides to start working. Mr.bhalla ask him to jion their company.

Thanx for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago

Superb update

Raman was crying ishita said it's ok if he don't want to tell her raman said no it's her right to know the truth he told her he is not real son of his parents they have adopted him ishita was shocked she said it must be misunderstanding raman said no he told her how he was searching for his amd mihir childhood pics to give him surprise how he found adoption paper of they day he was born he went to ask his parents and heard their talk oh no raman is thinking he is adopted but he don't know mihir his adopted not he raman asked ishita to leave him she deserves better she scolded him raman said toshiji and mr bhalla have done lot for her he said he will search job and shift somewhere else as he don't want to burden on anyone anymore ishita made him understand loved ishra talk loved how she consoled him and fed him he dropped her home and promised to take care of himself he asked her not to tell this to anyone not even mihika ishita reached home mihika asked if raman is fine what was the matter ishita lied to her other side mihir felt something is bothering raman he prayed for ramans happiness next morning all were having breakfast raman said sorry to his parents for always troubling them toshiji and Mihir said what he is saying mr bhalla whatever said last night was in anger he didn't mean it mr.bhalla said he didn't wanted to hurt him raman said he wants to make them proud mr.bhalla smiled and asked what he want to do raman said he will search job mr.bhalla asked him to join bhalla industries 

Pls update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting update 

Cont soon