Hey Hey Hey. Look who is here. How are you my "five word sentence game" partner🤗
Wow.Really nice story friend. I just read because of your name appeared there.
That is so sweet of you😊.. I wasn't expecting coz the story has hindi in it.. but you still gave it a shot.. ohh I am so humbled.. thank you so much🤗
You are a good script writer. Keep it up. You have portrayed real love of wife, her burden when she did not receive reply from her husband. Really nice.
Thank you for your kind words and I am glad you liked it. Its just my take on post leap show, specially the party sequence and some other scenes..
Waiting for next phase of story. 

Awww.. honestly, this one may or may not have a sequel but in case it interests you there are others you can try.. links on page 1 of this thread under the story.
Glad to find you here.. 🤗
Edited by Sunn_shine - 5 years ago