Akdha Dark ff Game of Destiny chapter 43 on page 136 - Page 46

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Superb chapter n Hope jalal know about Temple incident n take action for that n jalal involved jodha in taking decisions on some difficult situation n thnxx for PM me

Thank you 🤗Glad you enjoy the update😳

He will surely come to know about it😎

But what he will do😉 I don't know 🤣

Jo involvement in political matter of empire

it will take time for this to happen 😊

Thanks for reading😳 and your lovely Comment 🤗

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Superb Update Rashmi👍🏼

Thank you Divya di 🤗i am glad you enjoy 😳

Jo joined them in hunting, she didn't like to kill those innocent animals for fun ofcourse how can she, she has pure heart. Jalal is always lost when he saw jodha hahaha😎😉

No one can blame him she's such a beauty that anyone can go flat on her 😆 I like your words which you used for her 😃 you're so right on that Divya di 👍🏼

"Weapon's are made to take lives"! It's never useless in it's job"! Enemy and weapon shouldn't be understimate"! (Must say - deep & Strong message) (Ruqs is very irritating seriously)🤣🤓

That's true it was meaningful and very strong while the way it was used by Jodha against Ruk😆 was another master stroke 😎 the dilouges in this story play very important role😊 it can't be missed and I am so happy😃 that you don't miss them out Divya di and about Ruk well time for me to ignore her arrive 😆

The most important thing about your writing skills which i really like is you always focus on tiny things. (like the elephant Hawaii, Horse chetak) this small things is quite very interesting & also entertaining at the same time.

Thank you 🤗 that's mean allot 🤗 you could praise me for that 🙂 cause you noticed and enjoy those detail work to which itself is very appreciable 👏and that's something make me egar to read your review as soon I update 😊

"Sometimes grace us by one glance to"! - Akeli ladki dekhi nhi ki line marna shuru lol🤣😳 also he helped jodha to get on hawaii (she felt he caressed her waist 😆 - She blush) And yes as usual ruq burn in jealousy.

@Red that's so 🤣 seriously Divya di awesome line used by you👏its so true he's don't leave any chance when it's comes to Jo 😉 so chance or dance maar hi lete hai Sehenshah Yahan 🤣 about Ruk well enjoy her little suffering 😉

"I saw the handsome Emperor he's fair skinned"! But I saw the Beautiful Empress"! (jalal must be feeling proud😎)

Yes his smirk clear the shot 😆 he was indeed proud as soon he realised who said this line for whom 😎 he often get jealous and angry when only Jo get praise 😆I thought it's better to make him get praise to he deserves it the real Akbar we know not when it's comes to look but our Ja is surely handsome one as it's played by RT

The tiger died by Jodha spear shot - ruqs face worth watching, i can imagine it lol)

Those little part in update was for those who don't like Ruk 😆 first her jealousy by ja attention on jo, than her getting to face strong Jo by her reply, and in last her failure in hunting 😎 and of-course to show how both women are strong but why Ja is drowned towards Jo 😳

"You're blessed with skilled hands of healer"! Never let them get dirty by committing Sin" (She must be feeling sad & Guilty.)

You're right 👍🏼 she was feeling very bad😒 our Jo possess sensitive heart after all 😳

(Didn't she hunt you down already by herself"? Pity you still don't know you're prey of her beauty or persona"!) - Jalal's heart is much smarter than his mind😉

Well said Divya di 👏Of-course his heart is smart when it's comes to emotion it's just his fault he don't pay heed to his heart and go by brain 😆

Jo fall and jalal was there to held her, i like this teasing things.You already put me in hateful position among the people"! - True words

How can our hero let heroine hurt 😉 so he was there to caught her to prevent her epic fall 😎 more over like I said above He don't miss the chance when it's comes to Jo I am glad you enjoy these little teasing parts Divya di 😳thank you so much 🤗

Its good that jo-ja are fine, jo is strong girl (never underestimate a girl) (also both share their past experiences) good part👍🏼

@Red so true👍🏼 east or west Girls are the best 😎 yup them sharing their past with each other going to have very good effect on their relation😳 I am glad you enjoy

Zahir (jo question is right - "where he had disappeared "? when we were attacked a while ago"?)

You're right👍🏼 but this inner questions going to be in detail in upcoming update

Salima - jo convo good, jalal went to merta (Maham and jo counter- lets see what this maham will do)

This update was on Akdha and mainly focus on Jo 😎 the next chapter is going to be on Ja 😉so Maham type vamp will be out of update 😆 I am glad 😊you enjoy Salima and Jo part🤗 even though it was little 🙂

Wow Tax part - one of the most wise decision taken by Akbar (that will change his image in his aawam, that too because of her queen jo) very much excited for this track and jodha's knowledge in politics.
Jo-ruq counter lets see how jalal will react on this matter.

You seem excited for this track I have to do more work on this then to match up with your expectations😊 I hope it's cone ought to be worth 😊 about Jo involvement in political matter of empire it will take time but it will happen for sure 😉 and Ja reaction to this it's going to be ... I don't know 🤣can't reveal yet 😆

Overall a full pack of update(Romance+Action+Emotions+Politics+Teasing+Jealousy+Love+knowledge)

@Red 👏 bang on 👍🏼you got these very well

Thank you🤗 thank you 🤗thank you so much 😘😘😘 for reading liking and such heart ruling review🤗 seriously Divya di you're 🙏🏼 the way you gave review on update is so heart warming 😳 thank you you truly enjoy the update from heart your review clearly express this and I can't thank you enough for this ❤️

Thanks.👍🏼

🤗

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Update

Thank you 🤗

But wait You're talking about updated one😊 or

You're asking for next one

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Thank you 🤗

But wait You're talking about updated one😊 or

You're asking for next one

Next chapter please☺️

Originally posted by: Jjlove

Next chapter please☺️

😆well that will take time dear😳 I have task for all readers today 😊

Happy Republic Day 🇮🇳my friend's 🤗

Today is celebration day hence I wanted to give update however by my own silly mistake it's got deleted I am sorry 😒

Anyway today I have something to say 😳"My lovely readers"! 🤗a thanks 🤗and more like I want to ask help😊 you all can ignore this rant and go down for my question's 😆

Somtime I wonder what's good"? What's more appreciable"? having readers who support you encourage you or having readers who take a look at your work but don't pay heed to it enough to even hit like 😒 forget about giving view

I have few reader's who , take a look at my work😳 by squeezing a little bit time, from their hectic schedule 😊 they take extra effort, to make a time for my stories to read them 😳 henceforth they value it and press like , infact share there heart ruling review on forum even personally by PM 😳 how kind 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

So there are many who end up reading my work 😳but they don't hit like or express view"! It's ok I guess they're shy 😆 or to busy to actually hit a like or share their view 😊 or maybe the work isn't worth enough to get brace by likes or review 😊

But the dishearten fact is I lose my humble lovely readers everytime😢 and no I ain't complaining 😊 I am at fault cause I end up taking break of month and week because of personal reason 😔 worse I don't even get to gave prior information about my break

It's alright to I think they get to tired while waiting for updates 😊 then avenge me in their own way 😆 by not replying ,commenting, or hiting like, I don't even know they get to read my work anymore or not infact even though I sent PM to everyone of them I don't know they received it or even wish to receive it or not it's confusing

"I know a I am silly author 🤪who end up writing many story with lot's of bad idea's spelling and grammar mistakes. 😆 honestly I cannot even recommend any of my work to any new joined member cause I know how embarrassing it can get for me 😆 if they read it still I am thankful to all of you"! 🤗for supporting me from start to till now 🤗

In start when I give Character sketch or Prologue i always have idea how I want my story plot 😊 and how I want the readers to think or expect while reading or investing there time in my work 😊

Somtime I succeed in giving exactly how I want 😃but most of time I fail 😒 but what makes me go on and on to write is support and encouragement I received from you all 🤗 not to forget your patience 😳

"Stories have multiple characters, and many main characters. The Protagonist here I tried my best to show them strong"😎 They are the most prominent figure in my story they drives the plot and makes up most of the narrative I try to gave everyone pov, however I ain't sure I succeed in the job or not 😆 but others doesn't matter much if my protagonist of stories are close to you all and you understand there side 😳

I try to gave good description as well with additional information about history 😊 which I didn't used much in my previous historical Story 🤔

That's happen cause I never been fond of history cause the type of lesson we received in our 12 years in school gave nothing about our Glorious Past but in my UNI I am learning lot about it and it's make me astonished 😲how I never get to pay my thank to such a people who sacrifice Everything for our today 😊 for me more than result of war , struggle and start of war matter cause that's how destruction start, Whereas the aftermath is always 😒

Anyway coming to story 😆 after reading 34 chapters of this one I am sure you guys figure out lot of things about the story, 😎However I have few quick questions"! For you all 😆 I mean it's going to help me to write my next chapter😊 I wanted to know how I want the character to shape or narrate them they're really coming out exact way or not😳 your answer matter the most in this so don't just don't ignore this and please answer as well"! 😊

Q-1 How you all find the male and female Protagonist of this story"?

@ "I am asking about them only cause the story resolve around them the most 😉

Q-2 "In your view They're extrovert or introvert"? likable or unlikable"?

Q-3 "They seem to be focusing on past pattern in your view or focused on present and future possibilities"?

Q-4 "They use mind and logic or they use heart and emotion"?

Q-5 " Their decision in your view are Organized & Decisive Decision or Improvised & Open Decision Making"?

Q-6 "In your view They possess Light & Laid Back Attitude or Complex & Serious Attitude"?

Q-7 "What change you want in both Protagonist's personality by the end of the story"?

@"Even though my all stories are based on happily ever after end 🤣 and this one isn't an expectation either 😆 But I want to know"!

Q-8 "In your view what Goal the story Protagonist's have in this story"? They want to change themselves"? Change their surroundings"? Explore their emotions"? Or explore their world"? They want To Reappreciate the current meaning or find a new meaning (identity)"?

Q-9 "What and how you want the story to go forward"? like my Protagonist fighting with Antagonist for their love and bring change in the lives of others by their position and power"! Or more than this"? is there something else you want"? 😊

Q-10 apart from Jo Ja "which one of the character you want to see more in story"?😊 And which one of character you appreciate the most but want to see less of them"? 😆 is there any character I shown previously but not now and you're missing them"?

"I ain't threatning you or anything my readers🤗 but the next chapter will come as soon I get answer of all these questions"! 😊

Oh most important question had I offend you all by anyway😒 do you guys really want me to continue writing it till I complete it 😊 do you all want PM for updates or not

Hello,

Please continue to write dear and you did not update next part of Nafrat or mohabbat from such long time. I never receive any PM but don't worry because I am checking forum on daily basis to see that next part updated or not. I sometimes did not give review but yes I had hit like eveytime .

Keep writing dear. Your each and every part is magical. It has great impact on me. I really love historical fan fiction.

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

Happy Republic Day 🇮🇳my friend's

(Same here)

Today is celebration day hence I wanted to give update however by my own silly mistake it's got deleted I am sorry

(Its okay, no problem)

Anyway today I have something to say "My lovely readers"! a thanks and more like I want to ask help you all can ignore this rant and go down for my question's

Somtime I wonder what's good"? What's more appreciable"? having readers who support you encourage you or having readers who take a look at your work but don't pay heed to it enough to even hit like forget about giving view

I have few reader's who , take a look at my work by squeezing a little bit time, from their hectic schedule they take extra effort, to make a time for my stories to read them henceforth they value it and press like , infact share there heart ruling review on forum even personally by PM how kind 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

(I hope i am in this list)

So there are many who end up reading my work but they don't hit like or express view"! It's ok I guess they're shy or to busy to actually hit a like or share their view or maybe the work isn't worth enough to get brace by likes or review

But the dishearten fact is I lose my humble lovely readers everytime😢 and no I ain't complaining I am at fault cause I end up taking break of month and week because of personal reason worse I don't even get to gave prior information about my break

It's alright to I think they get to tired while waiting for updates then avenge me in their own way by not replying ,commenting, or hiting like, I don't even know they get to read my work anymore or not infact even though I sent PM to everyone of them I don't know they received it or even wish to receive it or not it's confusing

"I know a I am silly author who end up writing many story with lot's of bad idea's spelling and grammar mistakes. honestly I cannot even recommend any of my work to any new joined member cause I know how embarrassing it can get for me if they read it still I am thankful to all of you"! for supporting me from start to till now

In start when I give Character sketch or Prologue i always have idea how I want my story plot and how I want the readers to think or expect while reading or investing there time in my work

Somtime I succeed in giving exactly how I want but most of time I fail but what makes me go on and on to write is support and encouragement I received from you all not to forget your patience

"Stories have multiple characters, and many main characters. The Protagonist here I tried my best to show them strong" They are the most prominent figure in my story they drives the plot and makes up most of the narrative I try to gave everyone pov, however I ain't sure I succeed in the job or not but others doesn't matter much if my protagonist of stories are close to you all and you understand there side

I try to gave good description as well with additional information about history which I didn't used much in my previous historical Story

That's happen cause I never been fond of history cause the type of lesson we received in our 12 years in school gave nothing about our Glorious Past but in my UNI I am learning lot about it and it's make me astonished how I never get to pay my thank to such a people who sacrifice Everything for our today for me more than result of war , struggle and start of war matter cause that's how destruction start, Whereas the aftermath is always

Anyway coming to story after reading 34 chapters of this one I am sure you guys figure out lot of things about the story, However I have few quick questions"! For you all I mean it's going to help me to write my next chapter I wanted to know how I want the character to shape or narrate them they're really coming out exact way or not your answer matter the most in this so don't just don't ignore this and please answer as well"!

(Don't think too much, just go with the flow and regarding stories :
On IF its been long time i am active here just bcz of JOJA. Now the serial is off-aired many writers left their stories incomplete which is very disappointing thing but nevertheless its their own choice.
There are only few writers and readers are left who gave their best in terms of update and reviews and you are one of them writers who truly gave their best in terms of writing. The things i enjoyed, i always appreciate them and your stories are one of those things which i truly enjoyed.)

Q-1 How you all find the male and female Protagonist of this story"?

(I like them just the way they are strong and emotional at the same time. They both have many shades which is why they both are very strong, kind of unpredictable.)

@ "I am asking about them only cause the story resolve around them the most

Q-2 "In your view They're extrovert or introvert"? likable or unlikable"?

I would say both bcz it really depends on the situation. I want jo to be more open with jalal in terms of her own liking and wishes.

Q-3 "They seem to be focusing on past pattern in your view or focused on present and future possibilities"?

They both wants to focus on present but their past is stopping them, but its going really good and i have huge expectation from you)

Q-4 "They use mind and logic or they use heart and emotion"?

They use their mind & heart both as it really depends on the situation (but yes they use their mind more often)

Q-5 " Their decision in your view are Organized & Decisive Decision or Improvised & Open Decision Making"?

I would say both as they take their decision on the basis of the situation.

Q-6 "In your view They possess Light & Laid Back Attitude or Complex & Serious Attitude"?

Complex & Serious

Q-7 "What change you want in both Protagonist's personality by the end of the story"?

No changes as they both are good(but ya a bit strong personality of jo in politics)

@"Even though my all stories are based on happily ever after end and this one isn't an expectation either But I want to know"!

Q-8 "In your view what Goal the story Protagonist's have in this story"? They want to change themselves"? Change their surroundings"? Explore their emotions"? Or explore their world"? They want To Reappreciate the current meaning or find a new meaning (identity)"?

They both want someone who understand them, heal them and support them.
No they want to change themselves or their surroundings, yes they wants to explore their emotions but without changes.

Q-9 "What and how you want the story to go forward"? like my Protagonist fighting with Antagonist for their love and bring change in the lives of others by their position and power"! Or more than this"? is there something else you want"?

The story is going great (no changes)

Q-10 apart from Jo Ja "which one of the character you want to see more in story"? And which one of character you appreciate the most but want to see less of them"? is there any character I shown previously but not now and you're missing them"?

Maan & Rahim

I want to see avantika & Jodha's meeting

"I ain't threatning you or anything my readers but the next chapter will come as soon I get answer of all these questions"!

Oh most important question had I offend you all by anyway do you guys really want me to continue writing it till I complete it do you all want PM for updates or not

Everything is going perfectly fine...just carry on with you fabulous work. Ignore the things which bothers you and just enjoy your passion.

On 26 Jan Indians🇮🇳 celebrate republic day whereas on 26 January, we Australian 🇦🇺celebrate Australia Day. For 🇮🇳 it's the day . It's to Honour the date on which, the Constitution of India came into effect. on 26 January 1950, replacing the Government of India Act (1935) ,as the governing document of India and thus, turning the nation into a newly formed republic. For 🇦🇺 it is the day to reflect on, what it means to be Australian, to celebrate contemporary Australia and to acknowledge our history.we celebrate all the things we love about Australia: land, sense of fair go, lifestyle, democracy, the freedoms we enjoy but particularly our people.

Anyway I am late in wishing but Happy Republic Day Indian's"!

Don't ask forgiveness for your deleted update, you're the one work hard on it. Author no doubt there's always, lot of mistake in updates, but guess what"? when I read your first ever story and this one, I find lot of improvement in your style of writing it. You take extra effort now to penned down each and everything which needs. To be mention in story, to not have anyone of us confused or think you forget about that one scene or member , So your work are worth appreciating, more over your every work aren't slow they're always fast and very gripping for me. Before in your story there was always pov and actions, more like giving insight to us , about things we wonder on, but never really pay heed to it. But now there's more to get , by you in the form of this historical story of yours. So from next time don't call yourself a silly author, infact it's worth recommended work of your's in my view, if not the rest of them. This one story is in my favourite list.

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"Now coming to answer of your queries"!

Q-1 How you all find the male and female Protagonist of this story"?

"The Protagonist of story are very intriguing characters for me"! There's is lot to learn from them and there's lot I expect from them I actually I can relate with them very much. I ain't one to stay quiet and watch someone doing wrong to others, I am the one always to have things in my way I work tooth and nail to get what I want. No matter what may come.

Q-2 "In your view They're extrovert or introvert"? likable or unlikable"?

In my view they're Omnivert (Ambivert) and very much unpredictable type. Even though most of time we know they will take action, but we don't know what action they will take. And that's something worth appreciable.

Q-3 "They seem to be focusing on past pattern in your view or focused on present and future possibilities"?

They're trying to focus on present and future possibilities, but their past is messing up with them. Cause wherever and whatever they are today, it's cause of their past lives.

Q-4 "They use mind and logic or they use heart and emotion"?

They're heart Locators, however they don't wear heart on sleeves, so they're mind locators, even though they tend to act cause, they're emotionally involved, but they use mind and logic. At least that's what their action showcase, but their pov we know better so for me they're Heart locator.

Q-5 " Their decision in your view are Organized & Decisive Decision or Improvised & Open Decision Making"?

"In this both are different, male Protagonist decision are Organized & Decisive. Whereas the female protagonist decision are Improvised & Open decision making. Hence together they Excel in their goal"!

Q-6 "In your view They possess Light & Laid Back Attitude or Complex & Serious Attitude"?

Complex and serious attitude, in start they had the light and laid back attitude , but now they're changed.

Q-7 "What change you want in both Protagonist's personality by the end of the story"?

"I want to see the Female protagonist bit selfish for herself, about male I didn't wonder much he seem pretty much relatable and cool, he's independent in many way and I will prefer to have him this way only, don't make him whipped in love depended on her.

Q-8 "In your view what Goal the story Protagonist's have in this story"? They want to change themselves"? Change their surroundings"? Explore their emotions"? Or explore their world"? They want To Reappreciate the current meaning or find a new meaning (identity)"?

"Individual goal's , but they can achieve it, with the help of each other only. They want to change theirs surrounding, without changing themselves. They want to find new meaning without losing their current meaning.

Q-9 "What and how you want the story to go forward"? like my Protagonist fighting with Antagonist for their love and bring change in the lives of others by their position and power"! Or more than this"? is there something else you want"?

"So far the way story taken shape I am enjoying it, henceforth i don't have excptation of my own. Cause you're the author and you know how you want the story to proceed. However if it's up-to me then I want them to being change in the lives of others. More over like a title the fate played bigger picture in their lives, then their actions. So"..you know better.

Q-10 apart from Jo Ja "which one of the character you want to see more in story"? And which one of character you appreciate the most but want to see less of them"? is there any character I shown previously but not now and you're missing them"?

"My favourite character is Maan, I want to see him more in the story"! And I appreciate Avantika and Mainavati very much, but want to see them less, keyword LESS. I am missing Bakshi, you shown her previously but now '!..

Had I offend you all by anyway do you guys really want me to continue writing it till I complete it do you all want PM for updates or not

Of-course not, what you can do to offend any of us"? Your stories are entirely fictional , with addition of little historical facts and knowledge. It cannot be hurtful to anyone sentiment and belief either.

I am really astonished to know, how you missed your reader so much"? And I think it's more than getting view and likes" your question as if you offended any of us, was really something hard to take.

You should complete it, cause you cannot leave this in mid way, making us , specially me to understand all this in implied mode. It will be sheer in-justice to leave your work mid way, which was support by all of us. So finish it till it's completed.

Undoubtedly I want PM by you about the updates. Because I don't get to check it on my own.

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Originally posted by: divyaJA

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