MishBir One Shot: It's Positive - Page 4

Originally posted by: ShenzK

I like Mira too.

Okay on a side note. Though I am one of those who promote 'Hum do, humara ek' - I would even hoot for three. 🙈

😆when I wrote you,me aur hum the name for the baby was Hira - then it didn't click so I thought Mira - but she remained nameless and I left it to readers imagination.

That was lovely to read

So close to the way characters actually act and behave

I can actually imagine them both doing this

Please write more

Thank you for doing this

Originally posted by: mridhu

😆when I wrote you,me aur hum the name for the baby was Hira - then it didn't click so I thought Mira - but she remained nameless and I left it to readers imagination.

Never mind, you can always write another one with the name mentioned. 😂

Originally posted by: coolove

That was lovely to read

So close to the way characters actually act and behave

I can actually imagine them both doing this

Please write more

Thank you for doing this

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I can just hope that's the same reaction I get with my upcoming ventures too.

I will write more. I guess.

Thanks once again.

I could imagine Mishbir in this.... You write well. Thank you for this beautiful OS. Hoping to read more from you..

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Originally posted by: Shellymehta

And this was?

Oh god!! This was so cute! GAHHHHHH! I LOVE IT!! <33333

No need for any control...please keep writing...

it was as usual....JUST WONDERFUL👏👏👏

Loved it❤️ i could literally visualise it

Keep them coming!!!

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Oh god!! This was so cute! GAHHHHHH! I LOVE IT!! <33333

Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Beautiful

Thank You! :)