FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 4

Originally posted by: pravallika

Hey sabi!

I'm here. Thanks a lot for coming back and writing this new story dear 🤗

Will read the update and come back my smartphone 😉😆

It's a lovely update dear.. Finally both of them shared their first smiles assuming that they didn't in their office. I should say that it was a great comeback by kushi for anjali's question. Though she was on the spot, she managed revealing the interesting things about arnav. Why is shyam harassing her with his messages after divorce? Arnav had understood that there is a creep in her life. That acknowledgement is enough for now from arnav's side.

Though arnav comes across as a nonchalant person, he had observed kushi many times. That's great. He is not oblivious to his surroundings. I liked the way he flirted with her in the end. Didn't expect that from him. Now that anjali asked kushi about arnav, is there any chance that lavanya will ask arnav about kushi?

Waiting eagerly dear

Your smartphone had his hands full with a smartphone in this one ;)

Originally posted by: Savera84

Thanks for a long update. That was a super cool chapter.

Anjali has managed to break the ice.

Brekfast joint!!!!!

Let me switch to laptop. Typing on phone is hard.

It is cute how they want to write names in English but, don't bother about spellings. Reading these spellings always brings a smile.

Actually the food at small corner joints is quiet delicious. They make it fresh unlike big restaurants where half the items are pre-cooked.

Anjali thinks Arnav can fix laptops in like 15 minutes. Khushi and us already know that he can fix laptops in just like 15 minutes and he fixed Khushi's laptop filled with chips and crumbs in a different story.😊

My heart is brimming with happiness that these two finally managed to throw tiny smiles at each other.

I knew it! Shyam is not going to leave Khushi in peace. The idiot of the top order has to switch phones to ruin Khushi's holiday. I am waiting for the day when Mr Raizada lands a hard punch on Shyam's face to disfigure it. I know Khushi can do it on her own and Arnav can vouch for it. But, just to show that Khushi has support, I want Arnav and even Lavanya to do the honours.

So, Mr Raizada is running away from marriage? Was he worried that the wife will change the setting of the room which he is used to, for the last so many years? How would she like a certain Khushi Gupta instead of Sweety Sharma?

Your finishing joke (I want to be the ........) is hilarious.

Cheers....

@bold- Absolutely. I personally believe the quality of masala chai in particular is inversely proportional to the fanciness of the place serving, and the price of the cup.

My Khushis aren't very tech savvy, are they? No, it doesn't say anything about me. Why would it. Psh.

And don't you worry, no creep gets out of my story until I've had my fun with him 😆

Originally posted by: just4coll

I love it, esp the last bit ending with the lopsided smirk :)

It's an interesting premise. Arnav and Khushi have worked together, without any undercurrents beyond some annoyance, any awareness of each other as people beyond employer-employee. And now that they no longer work together, they are actually getting to know something about each other.

Can I say I love the equation between Anjali and Arnav, boring but indulgent big brother and chirpy, fun loving lil sister. All thanks to her, Khushi is discovering new things about the very private ex-boss...

I'm very curious as to where you are taking this story. So far is it is all 'unexpected'...

Thank you hun.

Well, so...expectedly unexpected this time? 😆

Originally posted by: Arshi67

A nod to "cement"! ❤️

The sibling banter spiralled out of control pretty quickly, didn't it?! With much hilarity for us 😆

What I love about your writing is how you are able to switch moods so effortlessly. Looking forward to reading you explore Khushi's state of mind.

Waise Arnav, "kaafi baatein observe ki hai aapne Khushi ki. Humein nahin pata tha ki aap itne kareeb se observe karte the usse office mein..."

Damn! 😆❤️

Thank you love!

Originally posted by: kizh72

The imaginative spelling sans the presence of oxford dictionary (language is after all for communication!), the sitteth and leaveth (brought to mind fond memories of a bahutheay bhunderful bhaasa which some of us used to employ, coming out of musings on what if mami were to speak Shakespearean English😆), the wiping off the cup to get rid of all the germs (recently I saw someone on a flight who wiped the seat, the overhead light, the ac vent you name it. Now for someone who's room is perennially in a bomb has gone off state, this was traumatizing😳😆), in the midst of all the humor you forced me to think of how distressing it must be to have to face unwanted attention, without any sort of support from one's own family.

Show off, yes!😆

I want to meet this person who wiped the AC vent and overhead light on your flight. Sounds like a wonderful person to travel along with.

Originally posted by: cheers2all

The first thing I did after reading the update was twirl a pen between my fingers, or atleast tried to. Needless to say, it was a disaster 😆

Khushi may not have found any interesting adjectives to describe Arnav in office, but she was honest. She had to put some effort to come up with "hardworking" and "organized" But her fascination to his pen-twirling art came without any thought. Did it even occur to her that she was appreciating Arnav for something that doesn't really qualify for an office skill? But it is something that has genuinely impressed her. After all, imitating this skill isn't as easy as the Oscar winning robotic walk 🤣

Loved the spoken and unspoken conversation between Arnav & Anjali. These two are such cutie-pies when they interact with each other.

On a positive note, Arnav has started noticing Khushi as more than just an employee. He may not know the person behind the flurry of messages, but Arnav was smart enough to realize it was an unpleasant intruder, even for Khushi. I think his whole act with the pen in the end (which I found extremely adorable and sexy at the same time) was to take Khushi's mind off the messages. And I hope someday he gives private lessons to Khushi on how to maneuver the pen between fingers 😉

Fantabulous update, Sabi. I was laughing like a maniac at the conversations in the car, the exchanges between Arnav & Anjali, the french-sounding english words (baveridges 🤣)...then I had an awww moment when Arnav volunteered (okay, was volunteered) to fix Khushi's phone and the way he got unsettled after reading the messages. And finally, the last few lines left a smile on my face which will stay for a long long time!

Your comment is ❤️

Thank you for your solidarity in the pen twirling disaster department.

Originally posted by: Viji79

Dedicated to all brekfast and baveridges serving highway eateries, mobile phones dunked in coffee and spinning pens. They will be eternally grateful to the author of this story for immortalizing them. Also dedicated to all the readers who are by now practising the perfect spin with their pen. Now let me go and find my damn pen.

❤️❤️

Originally posted by: bakwas_serial

You will be happy to know not only was I laughing and reading and I walked right into a glass door 😍

So I had asked what will Anjali do "sandwiched" between Khushi and Arnav. So you gave us Sendwich and Baverdrige and Sweety Sharma😂 The girl is a riot. Arnav cleaning his cup reminded me of Sheldon ( Big Bang fame). Just hope he looks like Arnav of the serial fame.

So I was wrong when I said I knew the the anynomous writer. I thought initially you were Rock.Barbie...but last two updates was not sure. Read your UE recently and loved it. Look forward to read this new tale of yours.

I am indeed more than pleased to know this.

And ah, Bazinga! ❤️

😃

It's quirky, it's funny, it's full of emotion...this untold story is leading to places to impossible to resist.

Please take with me you on this journey and pm me when you update!!

Thanks