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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter 30, part 3


Arnav bought the bike !!! THIS GUY 🥺🥺


LAVANYA CALLING ARNAV ABOUT KHUSHI - that is my girl man !!!! That is what you call friendship.. i mean she 100% has her back. Also love the “undivided interest” comment because 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 (slightly worried i sound really repetitive at this point but we move LOL) - okay wow. WOW THAT ESCALATED HELLA FAST. WOW (it’s like that office meme with the main guy - dwight???? I think and the “calm down” because of the fire extinguisher.. pretty sure it isn’t dwight actually? Anyway LOL)


Wow.. wow Arnav and Lavanya going to Lucknow. AAAHHHHH I’m so excited. This is what you call friendship.. well a little more on Arnav’s side but this is ride or die, you know. LOVING THIS 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 - also glad they acknowledged the fact that Khushi might be pissed.


Omggggggg !!!! Akaash really went for it bless him!! I’m so happy he finally let it out and showed Lavanya how serious he is. So, so cute!!! And of course, Lavanya being so touched by his words. Cute, cute, cute!!! This update was a treat LOL. Tbf they all are but still 🥺🥺🥺😂😂


Chapter 31


(Tbc) - i need to really rest my eyes now but i will be back!!!! Xxx - going to use this as a modern version of “reserving” hehe

P.S suddenly wondering whether my emoji’s are coming up as i’m using them from iphone. Hopefully they are LOL.

God, this update makes me so angry. So, so angry. Shyaam is such a sleazeball, the little sh** . How dare he have the nerve to continue to undermine and trigger Khushi? It’s unfair. It’s so, so unfair 😠😠😠 .. Khushi’s whole experience coming back to Lucknow, her loneliness broke my heart. She is so strong and brave and now she’s back in that territory which had left her unsafe and small. A little scared for her tbh.. who am i kidding? A little LOL. I’m quite scared for her emotionally, mentally, physically. *protect* !!


But if wishful thinking could make grief disappear, there wouldn’t be a single troubled heart left in the world” - 😔😔😔


I love how you captured Khushi’s appreciation and recognition of how important and supportive Lavanya and Arnav were/are for her. It made for a very beautiful read. So grateful reading this story and knowing Khushi is a survivor who managed to rebuild her life and gain valuable and healthy relationships 🥺🥺 The scene where Khushi sees her parents and “gulps down her choke” made me tear up. It must be so difficult under her circumstances.. and it just breaks my heart even more. Parents are meant to love you and have your back. It’s not fair that they supported Shyaam and put him on a pedestal, rather than their baby girl 😭😭


(I wanted to deck Khushi’s mum the second she spoke. My God. GIVE IT A REST) 😠😠😠 - kind of gassed Khushi also ended up saying (give it a rest for 10 minutes) because MOOD. Also the AUDACITY OF THE DAD TO SAY IT FELT LIKE SHE DIDN’t care. How DARE HE? HOW DARE HE?!!!!?? As if he made his home an environment Khushi could feel HOMELY IN!!!!??? I’m so angry. It’s the audacity for me !!!!


This update.. i don’t know if I have the heart to read it. I am so excited to continue because it is MAD but it is also stressing me out. Khushi’s anger, her hurt and Shyaam’s shamelessness is too much 😭😭😭😭..


AAAAAAAHHHHHHH BIBIJI’S FRIENDS !!!! ARNAV AND LA !! ARNAV AND LA - MY BABIES PEOPLE ARE HERE 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Oh what a beautiful ending. I’m so excited to see what happens!!!

Chapter 32:


Okay.. i genuinely want to just burst into tears. This was so beautifully done. I’m so happy Khushi’s people are there.. Akaash as well. They’re her pillars, her people 😭😭😭


Jheesze, I can hear how thick the tension is through your work. Fantastic. Just wow..


You didn’t know where she worked for three years?” Aakash couldn’t help himself, but then raised his hand apologetically and zipped his mouth shut.” - Akaash LOLLLLLLLLL 😂😂😂


I can’t deal.. this is too good. Ahhhhhhh. Afraid my comments are going to sound too generic but i’m so excited and scared reading this !!! LOL - Given that I find him standing here,” Arnav replied in an even tone, gesturing towards Shyam with a tilt of his head, “I’m sorry sir, but I am finding it hard to believe that she is.” ARNAV KING !! LA QUEEN - or maybe princess because Khushi is queen !!! Ahhhhh this isn’t the time for titles but AAAAAHHH


WOAH.. wOAH WOAH WOAH THAT ESCALATED SO FAST. I cannot believe Shyaam tried to attack Khushi in her own house in front of her parents and her friends. What a lunatic. I’m so happy her parents saw this side to him though!!!! But wow.. crazy. And horrible. Just crazy. (Akaash’s wt* though😂😂😂😂😂)


AAAAAAAAAAH AAAAAAHAHHHHHHJH OH MY GOD !!! OH MY GOD - . “I lost her to you. Once. And I’ll be damned if I lose her again.” !!!!!!! I feel sick !!!!! Aaaahh !!! 🥺🥺🥺


Random people would stop me in my way those days and ask me if all was fine at my end just by the look on my face!” - 💔


Khushi’s whole monologue about her mum not having the right to cry, her being unable to cry broke me. This is probably one of the strongest versions of Khushi I have ever read in fan fiction. Definitely more than the show itself and i’m so happy she finally stood up for herself. I’m so, so proud of her. Devastated, bit proud too.


The ending.. the ending was perfection. I have been a teary mess this whole update and it was a pleasure to read!!! You’ve done absolute justice to this chapter, this FF and thank you so much for being amazing. I’m so happy Khushi finally cried. All the pain, the anger, all the repressed memories just came out and i’m so happy for her receiving closure. She deserves the world and I am so happy Arnav was there to support her. So, so happy 🥺🥺


Chapter 33, part 1:


🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺


This is so soft and beautiful and sad :(


Strangely enough…yes,” she whispered. “I feel lighter, somehow.” - my baby. My precious, sweet, lovely baby!


It was true,” she replied, not a touch of hesitance in her voice. “I did.”

“Good,” he answered immediately, and she looked up at him with slight surprise. There was relief in his eyes, mixed with an emotion akin to pride. He smiled at her, and she felt a tug at her own lips at his reaction. “You look awfully pleased by that,” she remarked drily.

His smile dimmed. “There is nothing about the incident that pleases me.” 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺


I’m so, so happy Arnav is there to support Khushi. Sometimes you just need that bit of reassurance, especially his comment regarding tears. It’s so true.. tears aren’t a source of weakness. It just shows when a person is going through too much :(


Omg yay!!! Lavi staying with Khushi in her room. Arnav and Akaash in the house as well!! Brilliant.


Ashish uncle’s state in the end. Well.. well. Too early to tell but i’m intrigued. Still mad @ him but lets see. Argh, i go soft for old people in stories! Despite how horrible they can be. A flicker of regret and i crumble. Hopefully not in this case. Everything that happened was horrible. And to think, if only he had listened to his daughter.. (i felt bad writing this. What happened has happened. No use blaming someone but yeah.. a very difficult situation indeed)


What brilliant updates - God, i’ve missed this story so much. And you! ☺️


Edited by -JollyJabeen-JB - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Apologies for the SPAM but forgot to mention I am soo 100% looking forward to the confrontation between Arnav and Khushi’s dad. She’s going to finally have someone in her corner and I hope he throws some hard truths to his face - although it’s going to be mad and intense. I’m so excited!!! I can’t wait. Thoda thoda stressed too but it’ll be fine!!!!! 😎

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Posted: 4 years ago

CHAPTER 32

The chapter it was fantastic with an apt title .kushi’s decision to go to lucknow to give a closure to her past even though looked like one taken in a haste by her to her friends but in reality it was a very right decision. It finally solved many of kushi’s burning problems regarding her and Shyam also her ever so orthodox parents got all the answers to their questions and they finally realized how wrong they were in misjudging their only daughter and could see the real face of their so called useless damad.

Today Kushi is standing at the crossroads in life and hesitating to take any decision only because of her parents who were never supported her but their spineless damad, who was sponging off their wealth and her parents believed by stuffing his mouth with money they were bringing happiness to their daughter. when they saw their damad trying to physically assault their daughter then it dawned on them what sort of a guy he is

On the other hand Kushi no doubt was ready to face that jerk in lucknow she was ably supported by La Arnav and Aakash who managed to reach her lucknow haveli in time before that spineless jerk Shyam could physically cause harm to kushi.

Now kushi is free from that nincompoop waiting to see what happens next.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Chapter Thirty Three (1): What Morning Brings

Ashish wants to make things clear with Arnav. That invitation to tea will entail a grilling session.

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CHAPTER 33 (1)

What a fabulous chapter it was. It focused on the aftermath of events that had taken place the previous night at the haveli in lucknow.

Kushi was fully drained out and couldn’t believe all what had taken place a few hours ago but now she’s relieved that at last she has thrown shyam out of her life and at the same time she could show the true face of Shyam the so called damad of the house who her parents worshipped and trusted more than her.

uckily she had her friends to support her and now after the horrendous episode Arnav was with her in her room to comfort her and Arnav was relieved that he was there along with his friends to throw that spineless ex-husband of kushi. Now kushi can think about her future peacefully.

As for her parents they were shocked they did not realize what an abusive husband Shyam was and how much their daughter suffered at his hands. Looks like Ashish Gupta has realized the importance of Arnav in kushi’s life and wants to gauge his feelings for kushi hence he has asked Arnav and company to stay back and requested Arnav to meet him next day. for tea☕.

Will wait for the next chapter.

Edited by abivicky86 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I see three parts of a new chapter have been posted. Awesome.

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Posted: 4 years ago

OK. So the new chapters are for another story, not this one.

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