Tender Encounters (A PreRish FF) [Author's note on Pg 1] - Page 24

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YAAAAS. Those two kids doing the dirty and then RB walking away like a playyaaa. Hehe. I loved it. I also adore the shit out of Shiv. He's taking punches for a noble cause. Can we please get some more RB and Prerna action in the house? Because they on fire, girl.

Mostly because you set them on fire, you talented writer. Update fast. I need my next fix.

That was quite fast. What an update. Uhun shiv is in two minds. Poor thing. Lovely update. More of Bajaj pls. Hard to get over the kiss ☺️

Starting is so intense☺️. But damn he had to leave her without a word. What's the case with Shivi, looks like something is in store for Prerna once she in back to her family. So Bajaj finally got to know how it feels when someone leaves without a goodbye. Shiv has his own past which he is hiding, would like to know more about it. Maasi is the same here as the show. Love how Shiv handles her. Kukki and Prerna scene, I am so sad about this. They are bounded by destiny/fate. Though Shiv is in two minds about his involvement, I really wich he succeeds in bringing the family together for Kukki. She deserves to stay with her parents.

Arya🤗

Shiv is mine, with all the bells and whistles, his humor and pain, his underhanded ways, the broken and shattered and all that which is work in progress, is mine. Do not dare to give that man to anyone else. Mine, Mine, MINE!

Okay now back to business. You updated twice and I have two chapters to catch up on. I freaking loved it. Oh the inestimable control of Mr. Bajaj finally slipped. First he punched his brother and then ravished his lady love in the hotel corridor. Kudos Shiv! I love how RB got the taste of his own medicine when Prerna left without a goodbye though I think it was unintentional on hers and intentional of Shiv’s part.

The mighty is falling and I love how well you are portraying it so well. I can not tell you how hooked I am on this story.

I also have to mention that I like your Prerna lot and the camaraderie that you are showing between her and Shiv is just amazing.

Now don’t make me wait too long for the next update.

Love ya loads

Blues

I love Shiv Randhawa, such a jolly cute fellow, shipper of Bhaiya-Bhabhi❤️

Such a quick update! I was not expecting but oh I'm so happy with this unexpected surprise

So the kiss happens❤️ He dominates, she submits. Even though she started it, he was the one to end it. Just like he always has. (It was super hot 🔥)

PS. Can I say: I can't believe Prerna cheated on Anurag with Rishabh. I know, cheating is very bad and horrible but let me have this one please🤣

He then leaves lmao but Prerna understanding his actions, his thought process was amazing! For a second I thought, dang she's going to feel rejected or shocked but no, she understands him, knows him. 😭❤️

And Shiv oh God, this guy has no filters?😂 Mauled by a tiger. Ravished. Dude you're talking about your Bhaiya-Bhabhi😂

Rishabh is so affected, more than Prerna! Can't wait to know what Prerna is feeling about her DIRTY LITTLE SECRET now 😂

Ab kya Kia Anurag ne😒Jo Shivi ka natak start ho Gaya 😒

Shiv takes her to meet Kuki😭 really, this guy hasn't heard of learning from your mistakes but then, he hasn't done any mistakes,😁

Update soon ❤️

-Sanu

I loved, loved the update. Their intimate encounter shouldn't have ended there man. 😆 But I so loved the update. This Bajaj reminds me a lot of Asad from QH, extremely restrained but uncontrollable in his actions directed by his own beliefs.

Originally posted by: Sohali19

YAAAAS. Those two kids doing the dirty and then RB walking away like a playyaaa. Hehe. I loved it. I also adore the shit out of Shiv. He's taking punches for a noble cause. Can we please get some more RB and Prerna action in the house? Because they on fire, girl.

Mostly because you set them on fire, you talented writer. Update fast. I need my next fix.

Haha.. I wish this was anything but Indian TV.. oh the possibilities of RB as a character. Thank you so much! On a completely different note, have you read my matured OS on PreRish? You can check it out here

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/151051697?tid=5109496

And now I feel like a pesky saleswoman..😅

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

That was quite fast. What an update. Uhun shiv is in two minds. Poor thing. Lovely update. More of Bajaj pls. Hard to get over the kiss ☺️

Hehe.. thank you so much.. the kiss was so difficult to write. But I'm happy it's being well received.

☺️ 😘 was just ☺️