Read your note chuckling my ass off🤣🤣🤣🤣 Prerish stories are "sick"🤣🤣ANYHOW although I don't really know what you've envisioned for this story but these three chapters have made me feel so calm for some reason.That's the vibe the narrative gives and I absolutely love it or maybe it's just the calm before the storm comes raging in. This RB gives me such a suljha Hua vibe, the kind of person you can trust. Cant wait to read some more!
Hiiiii! Finally. Such a lovely dedication. 💙💙💙 Thank you so much!!
Such a short update though. 😒 I can't really comment much coz it was very little and since it was a conversation and a build up for what is to come, I'll save that for the next update. But I am really really liking the aura you are creating around PreRish, something mysterious. Two people stuck under a roof in a storm. One of them would walk away in the morning, never to come back and the other is left wondering whether the previous night was a figment of their imagination or some reality. Anyway, I am getting carried away. 😆 I know Bajaj won't run away in your story. I told you, this reminds me of The Sun Has Set, and if you remember, that husband never came back. 😆
I liked the last two lines, they are stuck together for a night and their fates were sealed, seems momentous and alarming at the same time. I can't find the right word for it though. And, I am looking forward to the next update really eagerly coz, this is the first AU story in this Forum that I have read, and I guess it's the only one still, and I LOVE AU stories if they fit right and yours does. Secondly, the ambience you have weaved around them, I can literally feel the air like a tangible, breathing thing between them. Update SOON.
And regarding the filthy PM you got, 😆 Ignore man. It's hard to see your OTP getting ruined before your eyes and people aren't reacting rationally. I know you are already doing it, but yeah.
Thank you so much for the lovely dedication. 💙 Means a lot to me, since it's like a first dedication in ages, I quit reading new FFs ages ago. The last time I was this excited for stories was in QH Forum. Btw, I hope you don't get offended. But your update again reminded me of another book - The Billionaire's Christmas Baby, two people get stuck in a storm. Different setting, similar scenario. See this is how much I like this story. Keep relating to different stuff. 😆 Update soon and make it longer PUHLEEZ!
Loads of Love
Naj
He is all googly-eyes over her 😎❤️
And he is staying in for the storm *wiggles eyebrows* nice combo there ❤️
The last lines just struck a chord and i am already anticipating the next chapter.
Well done!
Riya.
Your story is very unique and so is your way of description... i love your selection of words... please go ahead bashing is there in every field... just over look and write with your heart😊
So now their story started and their fates are sealed. And he is so affected by her, even when she is in a regular normal dress. I feel so bad for her, she is in pain even now, though she does not show it. He did realize it too. Looking forward to reading what is in store for them now.
Thank you so much
will update once i complete the chapter
Read your note chuckling my ass off🤣🤣🤣🤣 Prerish stories are "sick"🤣🤣ANYHOW although I don't really know what you've envisioned for this story but these three chapters have made me feel so calm for some reason.That's the vibe the narrative gives and I absolutely love it or maybe it's just the calm before the storm comes raging in. This RB gives me such a suljha Hua vibe, the kind of person you can trust. Cant wait to read some more!
I had the same effect bro trust me
RB here is very different from the show actually he's poles apart
Thanks for pm
Beautiful update.👏
It was just a normal conversation between Prerna & Rishabh but the way you described it was beautiful 😊
The last line was perfect
Waiting for next
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