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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: 77nikita

WHOA sumi!!! fantabulous effort

Its mind blowing👏👏👏 The way you take into account each and every angle and the way you explain everything without leaving any loose ends.........

Imagine VJ as inspector Khatri doing all this.....what a treat it would have been ....and then Meera as Chakor feeling proud and emotional listening to everything!!!!

But seriously.....thank you for all the effort which you have taken inspite of your busy work schedule and believe me i know how irksome it is to post a story here!!!!!😳

so now waitingggggg for the last chapter😳❤️

Niki thanks thanks a ton and I got that word. Great the explanation was convincing.

sorry was terribly busy today so late in visiting IF.

Yes imaginging MeeJay thanks...

tank u tank yes...and tell me posting the story and again reediting is a herculean task as against the older version and this font is dumb too. but 🤔

Last chapter he he he by Sunday

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nemo316

Hats off to you for the thorough planning 👏, Suraj is very smart. Glad that Kabir didn't try to protect his brother.

Chakor making Suraj eat the bland hospital food ❤️️❤️️.

The scene when Chakor slept by the bedside because Suraj wouldn't leave her hand 😍😍😍.

Is Chakor going to propose?

I guess the story will soon end, I'm going to miss it a lot. Thanks Sumi for introducing us to K jodi


Thanks Mai Sumi happy happy

Yes Kabir, there has to be a logical mix not necessary the sibling should be bad too.

@bold black even I liked it ..happy you loved it too.

Story ending..... for a good beginning 😉

I too will miss the Khadoos ya Khatra jodi and the Angel and Darling.

but for you I would not have written it.

taking this opportunity to share...a point.

Many were asking why Suraj didnot dash in or rage to fight or why not any hot scene

Well one he is not my dude to dash against and he is not the Lion to roar and rage.

I tried not to bring the influence of The Rajvanshi nor the Raaghav . I had to completely disconnect from the Sun and the Lion to bring this Khatri different but with bit of attitude.

He is a strategist so not much of action orientation but planning...

Sukor is completely different and just wanted it to be subtle to maintain their individuality so yes tried to bring in sukor togetherness not the romantic moments which I thought would not fit in in this stage.

Hope I make sense.

Will post the last Chapter by Sunday as today had been real hectic.

Loads of love 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago

That's great thank u so much

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Part 7A:

Full of action packed update

So finally culprit is revealed & Kabir doesn't know about his brother illegal activities Clever Suraj find out that they moved Chakor in another car & loved the way he inquired about Chakor safety from Ajay and the way he held tight his friendship band it was cute

Part 7B: Another dhamaka update Finally Suraj saved Chakor & caught culprit red handed & destroyed his business but he hurt badly loved the way Chakor worried for Suraj

Part 8: So emotional update but Finally they both confessed their love to each other 😍😍😍& also tanu and ajay confessed their love to each other

Part 9: Hatts off to u instead of ur busy schedules u write for us & u explained everything so beautifully The way Chakor trying to make suraj eat hospital food ❤️❤️❤️ and she slept beside him because he never left her hand this scene was just 😍😍😍 thanks for introducing us khatri jodi & eagerly waiting for last part

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks you Sritama that's a double damaka 🙏🙏😍😍🤗

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Part 8:So emotional n full of Sukor bliss😍❤beautiful Sumi di👏👏devastated,broken Chakor repressing her own emotional turmoil&performing Suraj surgery&making it successful👏👏d way she took care of him n completely dedicated herself for Suraj❤❤Chakor's breakdown,constantly blaming herself for Suraj's condition..it was so heart wrenching..d way she poured her heart out to unconscious Suraj❤❤so emotional n touching..Suraj responding, opening his eyes n reciprocating his feelings❤❤both of dem confessing their love😍their heart to heart conversation..Suraj saying u r not my weakness bt my strength❤❤u talk too much..loved it..Tanu&Ajay also r a couple now..loved their bonding with Sukor,their light hearted conversation in Suraj's room..throughout d whole story I was imagining MeeJay😍😍dis entire update was a pure delight..filled with so many mesmerizing Sukor moments..tnx a ton Sumi di for dis bliss❤❤n so sorry for my damn late feedback😞was badly stuck with my work since d last 2 days😖

Part 9:Just fantabulous..how meticulously u have unraveled d whole mystery..such an amazing in-depth analysis n explanation👏👏👏Suraj's fool proof planning n execution👏👏how tactfully n cleverly he ensured Chakor's safety n as well as d end of Bhero n his black empire👍👏good to know that Kabir too was helping d police in their mission..he didn't try to cover up his brother's wrongdoings👏hat's off to Asha too for her bravery👏Chakor making sure Suraj eat d bland hospital food😄her note😍Suraj sleeping n Chakor noticing his good looks😍sleeping beside Suraj holding his hands😍Suraj waking up n seeing her sleeping holding his hand😍admiring her innocence n beauty😍such a beautiful scene it was..💓💓super gripping precap..Suraj leaving for Aligarh n seems Chakor will propose Suraj..Dr.Chakor wants to add d surname😍❤super exited 😍😍

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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks so much Smita 🙏🤗

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Part 9A:

Sorry for too late replying Sumi as it was too hectic day for me, very tiring & I was thinking of you that how could you manage to update it in the due course even being so busy, really hat's off to you dear 👏👏🙏🙏. Both the parts were very interesting & amazing 👍👍. Suraj's intuition about the secret illegal business in lodge was so appreciative 👏👏. Taking Asha's friends deposition but to fool the wicked, he's excluding portions of their statements & presenting them to the media was a clever move👌👌. His meeting with K.N & convincing him about his brother's misdeed & hearing B.N & Dheeraj's conversation he finally agreed to help Suraj in the mission of nabbing B.N & Co. The transfer of registration of the car to BN's name, then under their eyes placing the papers & arms in right place really a master plan👏👏👌. Everything was so perfectly planned & executed👍👍. But my fav was the handcraft had the trigger connected to the bomb as Suraj presuming that B.N surely will fire at the handcraft to help Dheeraj escape. It was marvelous👏👏👌👌.

Part 9B:

It's nice to see that suraj was decided that Chakor was the lock for his sword but want to wait for her feelings to be unfold 😊😊❤❤ but he believes she may too was having the same feeling as his, so he left a message for her through Ajay. Asha's statement was so heart wrenching, so pathetic 😔 😔 , these heinous criminals do not deserve to be survive 😠😡😡. Asha's fake death was a trap to bring them out of the cave was another master strock 👍. The way his scaring Dheeraj to confess, all were just flawless Sumi👌👌,

Suraj's master blaster plan made Chakor awed😳😳😍😍. Chakor was silently admiring his handsomeness & he mesmerized by her beauty😍😍. Both were not wanting to remove their hands & went to sleep holding hands ❤❤though the reason are different but I loved Suraj's thought that gradually she's started to believe a man👍👍. Loved the entire part 9,& thanks to you for describing all the sequence with so much detailing being so busy & drowning to the workload👏👏🙏🙏. Precap is seeming very interesting, so will Chakor the first to propose? waiting for their actual confession😍😍. Thank you.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 10 Final

The Harvesting

The proceeding at the court commenced … The video recordings along with Kabir’s recording, Asha, and the two testimony in confidence were submitted. Suraj gave his points from the hospital through a video calling. The case was quite strong so it was sure Bhero will be convicted but it was debating how much the tenure will be. The judgement would take atleast few months,but Bhero was shocked that Kabir was aware of his dark side. He was indeed in a state of shock too as there was none to be on his side. The judiciary as per the norms of the law was allowing him to have his lawyer but unfortunately none was ready so the court assigned one for the completion of the process.

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The blossom…

It took two weeks for him to just glide and get to sit up on his own… it was one of the days when she was busy checking his wounds with the general physician. He was improving fast. She looked up, when he asked how long do you think I will take to get back on my feet. She said at least three months….

He said that’s too much of a luxury, I need to be fine and get out of the hospital soon… All of a sudden she felt sad, something was cringing her. a bit of tear… I know you would want to go back home.

He was in his bandages and still not comfortable to wear a T or shirt. The tear in her eyes, teared his heart but he smiled holding her hands said Doctor as you are wedded to your steth, I am to my uniform. She smiled hmm.

Though painful for him but the three months was indeed paving way as knowing phase for each other as destiny had twined them to even confess their love rather affection for each other but they had to know more. It was beautiful indeed. .

The Dr would do her surgery if any and go do her rounds and also attend to any emergency… They would have the breakfast together if she doesnot have any OT and he was slowly going through an upgradation in the diet. Ajay and the others used to visit him for his advice on many cases though he literally would want to go but with the AL around it was not that easy but all he would do is just smile at her when she chides when he overdoes his work which would hurt his torso.. They had their touch and go moments of their hands. In all this Tanu was very happy as she found her K friend making a new world and not being in her shell and so was Ajay as he now get to see his K boss a bit smiling though not much.

The Doctor , a true professional she would just leave a note and get going with her case but always was beside him when she had no duty… They used to talk a lot about their work,discuss about political pressures, general debates…and she would always be more of feministic . She slowly started to be more comfortable with him to sometimes he would be in his own world of reading any case or talking to the Commissioner and Ajay in dealing with cases which were difficult to crack. She would just admire his thought process and also the way he is always calm but firm..

He told her about the family business and how his work keeps him moving between cities and never a day he would miss not talking about his father. The reality was striking that both tied to their professions which are mobile so taking their relationship to the next step would be calling for lot of debacle.

She for one realized how much he trusts and loves his father. … she would keep calm when he soon realized the pain and would lessen his talk about his house..

She would come tired after a complicated surgery and would just sit beside him while he would hold her hands admiring her and her non nonsense attitude with her staff and the way she would put her feet firm to call a spade a spade if she finds the treatment is wrong or if the reports are tampered.

He was moved to the special room and she would be with him till he sleeps. He never would insists her to stay behind as he was able to be mobile but needed a bit of support. Not much of sweet talk but she would admire him a lot. Both were going through an entirely different experience.

She would rarely talk about her mother as for most of the days she was sick…and he soon realized that this Doctor had battled through her life all alone and not much of friends or any one she had. He would just loose himself in her innocent natural face and wanted to protect her and love her more but was never taking any advantage as he wanted her to take their relationship to the next level.

It was her off day she was in his room while he was sitting at the side table having coffee. she was on the bedside couch in a simple salwar with just a small bindhi and a small single stone stud.. She was reading a case study when he lost himself in her plain beauty. He did not want to disturb and for the first time was admiring her without batting his eyelid… she felt a tinge in her because of his gaze.The first time her cheeks changed pink…eyes lowered. He felt it was different and a smile on his lips as he felt she was getting affected.

His wounds and blisters were healing in his hands and legs but the torso was still recovering.. He tried to get up when out of the three, his wound near the heart still pained. He whined when she just jumped to him and held him. Suraj please be careful, be slow don’t strain… is it paining too much… . she held him jittering…continuously shooting questions. For the first time she held his torso on the rib side which was not covered by the bandage and he held her hands. Her eyes was full of pain…forehead shrinking…. She slowly held him and placed him on the bed while she sat on the bed beside him…

Thank you he said..when she looked up why she asked. Getting hurt is not new for me, its normal in my work.. there are many wounds but this is the first time I had somebody to be beside me, worrying about me…. His eyes was tearing….caressing her hands…otherwise it was just me and the ceiling or the walls around, he smiled… there was few moments of silence as she caressed his hands too…not wanting to leave him… He slept peacefully..

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AjNu were sharing their happiness that they were taking their relationship further and their families have spoken and fixed the date it was in another couple of weeks time. Tanu infact persuaded Chakor as now that Suraj is fine and after the judgement he would be leaving for Aligarh and she should take it forward. forward… think about having her own family. She for a second debated… … is she suitable to have family… She had never thought about it. Is she right for him. Yes she is in love but marriage was something she could not reason it immediately. She didn’t know what his feeling was. She was scared so just kept aside.

Suraj was getting fine and was waiting for the judgement day. The reality that they both have to stay separate from now on was hitting them slowly and they started to feel it. AjNu suggested that they can all go together to Suraj’s quarters when he gets discharged from the hospital so that atleast that will ensure things are set but hindsight they wanted the K Jodi to take it forward.

Suraj was discharged and they all went together… It was a simple one bed apartment with a kitchen and simple cooking items. She went in and she saw the pic of Pankaj Khatri in the drawing. He resembled Suraj very much. This is… she turned to Suraj when he nodded yes. Just unable to hold herself she went in front of the pic and kneeled, thanking him and crying and also apologizing for she thought he shunned his responsibility in the middle. I am so unlucky that I could not meet you even once though you tried to contact me. She bowed herself when Tanu consoled her while Suraj was close to her, wanting to hold her but held himself. Tanu prepared tea and a light snacks for them…. You know everything Chakor said. Tanu smiled, arey every girl knows she said…

AjNu casually spoke about the rituals and teased how Ajay’s mama wanted dowry and the normal wedding gifts while Ajay stood firm and said that nothing should be given and only the basic things while Tanu said marrying him is a great favour she is doing and he should give her dowry… they all laughed but something hit Chakor… which did not go unnoticed by the Officer.

They were invited for their engagement ceremony which was being held in the temple neary by in two days. They left the K Jodi…

She was calm… Chakor are you ok he asked..

She looked up to him…her eyes were full of tears. She did not know what to speak but had so much within herself.…. The last three months has changed her world completely. She woke up to see him and slept after he slept.. Everything changed but suddenly when he came out of the hospital…something was cringing within her. He could understand those questions in her eyes… He was also feeling the same. He woke up to see her and slept holding her hands… everything changed for him too.. His heart was pounding too. She could not say anything but just controlled herself and told him to have all the medicines on time stayed for sometime till an constable came though he did not want but she insisted that somebody is there with him in case of any emergency.

She started to leave…when he said… do you want to say something… his heart was screaming please please speak out,… your eyes says everything… She just lowered and said please take care… Good night…I will see you tomorrow. He turned and said Chakor…..thank you but my night will not …. When the constable came with an auto for her…. She quickly got into the auto and got back to her room….. she was feeling very empty…He was also feeling very empty and lonely.

Tanu’s words was coming in her ears….. Am I best for him…. I have nothing… other than these two suit cases….One with my certificates and one with my dresses.. She closed her eyes… she was holding the band and did not know when sleep took over.

He was just looking at his fathers pic…. The one who has the sword is the one who can hold you… the perfect lock….He held his band which was given along with his belongings while being discharged from the hospital. Kissing it he closed his eyes….

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The judgement was written and Bhero was given a life imprisonment and to pay Rs.4 lakhs as fine and if he fails to pay the fine he should serve twice the imprisonment. He was moved to Tihar Jail.

Asha along with the other two left for their villages, thanking all and were given couple of weeks leave for them to recover and continue their college.

Suraj and Chakor and the rest were at the temple for AjNu’s engagement. It was simple..

The couple were well dressed and exchanged their rings. All congratulated them. Su Kor hugged them when Tanu whispered into Chakor have you thought. He was in his simple shirt and she in a very simple saree with a small bindi…. Plain and he was lost in her.. the only difference he saw now was that she wore kajal which made her eyes like a bee and he lost himself in that. Unknowingly he said beautiful when she just lowered her head. The K jodi were standing together and Chakor was helping him holding his plate at the buffet when one old lady said… nazar na lagey bahut acha Jodi hai aap dono… when they both just looked at each other lost in their eyes.

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The commissioner applauded Suraj and said he have still not chosen a base office and he can go now to Aligarh but soon will be called back.

He was ready to go to Aligarh. He packed his things and steered his jeep to the hospital.

He came to the hospital… met the Chief and thanked the staff who helped him recover but Chakor was nowhere to be seen. His eyes were searching for her and his heart pounding.. Where are you doctor…… He asked Tanu who showed him her room..praying hard she walked back.

He went to her room….She was standing near the window… tears rolling…Her room was plain like her with just a study table, single cot and two suitcases and few books.

Chakor he very softly called out when she quickly turned towards him and held his hands.. Are you leaving she asked… her voice was breaking…I know your work is over here. You brought the evil to books.. You need to go to your place.. Take care of your health…..

He just told I love you….. you talk too much but you do not talk what your eyes talk .

She whimpered when for the first time he held her shoulders…please talk to me what your heart says….Will you com… before he could complete

tears rolled her eyes…yes I want to talk… my heart says so many but I am unable to .. I am not like those girls… I don’t know many things a normal girl should know, never had a house…nor anyone…. I have nothing… except for these two suitcases..

She looked up to him and was shocked to see his eye with tears…full of love…

She held his hands which were holding her shoulders. With great difficulty she closed her eyes and spoke

I love you too very much… I feel my world will stop without you…I don’t know if its too early or it’s the right time but…

Mr. Khatri…. Can Dr.Chakor have your name as her sur..na...mee ………………… she could not complete…………….. her head was bent down, her body shaking.

He held her tight…. His eyes with tears… hearing those words from her… those words which he wanted to hear from her…The Sword was waiting for its Lock to open up…

He held her cheeks with both hands and lifted her face … Kissing her forehead… she opened her eyes…Both their hearts were pounding…. His kiss sent her jitters the kiss which gave her the confidence that the man in front of her is there to take complete responsibility of her.

With utmost happiness he said Yes Yes Yes… Will you marry me??? He asked her again to reconfirm… the Officer wants a straight one… she nodded Yes Yes… but , she said I have nothing apart from the little savings to give you as …………………….when he just kept his fingers on her lips….. that touch of his fingers….its new… never had a man been near her… she was shaking and so was he as he had never touched a woman… …

I need you just you…. Nothing….For you are everything to me my Angel he said… She very slowly went into him and he slowly hugged her and calmed her… it was new…. They lost in each others embrace for few minutes…

The book behind fell down and came out the book mark the Sword with the Lock beneath.. They both came to their sense… She quickly took the book and caressed the book mark very preciously..

Looking at him she asked why the lock beneath the sword she asked… He smiled lifting her chin said yes My father had felt that Only this lock can hold this Sword… He further said so the sword had to wait for the lock to open.

So your father……………. She said… He said he felt you were the one for me.. and I too soon felt the same but trust me I wanted to know your feelings as I did not want it to be forced as because you were sponsored by him. He held her tight when she felt pained…what he asked… Officer your hands are too rough…. Hmmm Angel you need to get used to as these were holding guns and handling criminals. They both smiled hugging each other voicing I Love You.

So ….. excuse me Mr.Khatri and my dear friend …. Jumped Tanu… who came up as it was too long….

She hugged Chakor and said atlast my friend is going to get her Surname… Good at least better than the other name…

They both felt embarrassed and Chakor asked what other name when Tanu bit her tongue… ooops hann tell me you said he too had a name…

Tanu went backwards and said yes the Kadoos Jodi but bahut Khatra Jodi…and ran I am going to tell chief and Ajay….

They both smiled whataaa name Kadoos Jodi… yes Officer suits you well ha ha Devil..

Well nonetheless you too Arrogant Lady.

It was only laughter…..

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Being professionals they had to chalk out their future as both were married to their professions first. As suggested by the Commissioner he took Kanpur as his base office. He made arrangements at Aligarh and informed that they will be visiting Aligarh very often. His bungalow people were very happy as finally he found his bride.

Kabir was also happy and offered one of his apartments for them but Suraj chose to buy a simple one as per his Angel’s choice which was closer to the hospital as she may need to rush for any emergency during any time of the day.

It was a simple wedding at the registrar office and the new wed AjNu signed witness along with the Chief and the Commissioner.

She was dressed in a beautiful red saree while he was in his red kurta pyjama… they signed the register to share the responsibility. He tied the mangalsutra a unique one for the unique Jodi it was with black beads with a sword and a lock in diamond as pendent. They had a small party at the Aligarh bungalow where the name board read as Mr. Suraj Khatri & Dr Chakor Khatri…

The long journey of the Darling and his Angel began……

It was new experience, every thing was new for each other… every action… they will learn learn and master everything …..

She said she does not know anything and he said he did not know anything… but sure they in their new journey will discover and know everything!!!!!

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Thanks all dearies for journeying with me in this journey. Hope the journey was good.

C yaaa !!!



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Fantabulous winding up of a lovely lovely journey sumi 👏👏👏👏 thoroughly enjoyed it.... thank you si much for writing.

It was such a lovely progression of the two and you entwined it very well with the parallel story .👏👏👏

A perfect end indeed.

So keep writing.... maybe now you can get back to your ficfam and I know you will say that you don't know me😜😜😜

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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Fantabulous winding up of a lovely lovely journey sumi 👏👏👏👏 thoroughly enjoyed it.... thank you si much for writing.

It was such a lovely progression of the two and you entwined it very well with the parallel story .👏👏👏

A perfect end indeed.

So keep writing.... maybe now you can get back to your ficfam and I know you will say that you don't know me😜😜😜

Thanks so much Niki... 🤗🤗🤗

Happy you liked this platonic one as I felt it was apt.

Arey whattt suddenly i have gone blind reading the last line. Tatata

Loads of love to you 😍😍😍

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Thanks so much Sritama..

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Such a fulfill, heart touching ,fitting end❤❤👏👏👏👏👏d entire story was a delightful bliss😍❤loved n enjoyed it to d core..Sukor's hospital moments..both of dem discovering n getting used to each other,Suraj getting engrossed seeing Chakor's beauty😍Suraj saying to Chakor m used to injuries bt first time someone is worrying for me,taking care of me..❤❤Chakor's fear of losing Suraj..d way she was pressing her feelings inside her n was feeling heartbroken coz Suraj will leave..Suraj reading her eyes,understanding her inner turmoils bt still waited for her to confesss..Chakor's confession,Suraj's proposal😍❤their emotional moments, d forehead kiss,hug..everything was breathtakingly beautiful n soothing❤❤ dis entire Sukor journey,each n every aspect of d story was a sheer treat to read..suspense,emotions,thrill,drama,romance,social msg u blended it all so so perfectly👌👌👌👏👏thanks a ton Sumi di for dis wonderful story❤❤

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Thanks Smita

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Final part :

It's superb update, great ending Sumi👍👍, there could not be a better ending than this👌👌👏👏. Suraj, who was undergoing treatment at the hospital for three months, allowed them to get to know each other & to understand, it had awaken a feeling of solidarity between them & they were used to seeing each other every day. They were afraid of being separated from each other, was hurting them, but they could not express their feelings in words . The way you have shown the development of their relationship, their bond has gradually strengthened, was fantastic👌👌. Both of them secretly admire each other, talked about so many things but never said anything about their feelings. Chakor was hesitant to think about marriage or family, as she had always lived alone & Suraj did not want to forcibly his love & their relationship & his father's wish on her❤❤,

he wanted her to take their relationship to the next level, even though they both loved each other. Loved her day off scene, his loosing himself to her simple beauty & innocence, his unwinkingly staring at her, & her cheeks redden with shyness❤❤😍😍, his smile feeling that she has been affected by his glance😉😉. His saying getting hurt is normal for his profession but for the first time he had someone to be beside him, worried about him , their caressing each other's hand with tears, really very heart touching scene.

It's good AjNu families fixed their marriage 👍, all went together to Suraj's quarter after his getting discharged, Chakor's paying tribute to his father & thanking him for everything he did for her, apologing for misunderstood him👌👌, while Suraj wanted to console her but held himself, was very emotional scene😢. Both were stopping themselves to express their feelings, but there is a storm, an unknown conflict in their minds.

After BN was sentenced to life imprisonment & AjNu 'S engagement it's time to Suraj's back to Aligore, his getting restless, both were obsessed with each other's thoughts, then how beautifully their emotional conversation turned into their love confession😍😍, her willingly sought to use Suraj's surname , was so delightful 😍😍❤❤. His revealing the sword & lock mystery, his father's wish, his marriage proposal, her accepting, their touch made both of them shaken, their loosing in each other's embrace😍😍, then after simple registry marriage they became Mr. & Mrs. Khatri 😍😍 , took first step to start their new life💗💗. His taking Kanpur as base office, buying simple apartment near the hospital for the convenience of her work, all were so perfect👍👍.

Thank you Sumi, for the beautiful sukor story🙏. I'm glad to be able to journey with you in this awesome journey. It's really a mind-blowing one, a lovely treat for us👌👌. In spite of being so busy, you have completed it in time without making us wait & fulfilled our wish. Really you are simply amazing👌❤❤. So......are you going to rest for a while now?? but I don't think that will be possible. Just kidding dear😀😀, take your own time & come back soon with another new story😊. Thank you & love you lot dear.😍😍.. for read my too lengthy comment with patience 😊😊.

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