She his weakness OR Thaakath!- the K-Jodi - Sukor - a Bonus. - Page 12

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing update.

Loved how their bond grew in those 3 months.

The confession was so heart touching ❤️. A simple wedding suits them so well.

I agree with you this Suraj is different from our Suraj, he wouldn't act in haste, he's an officer so he's trained to think and act keeping his emotions aside.

I also think romance wouldn't have suited Sukor here, given their past and the stage their relationship, so you took the right decision 👍🏼.


I'm going to miss this story a lot, thanks for writing it and keep writing more Sukor/Ragkor stories 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: nemo316

Amazing update.

Loved how their bond grew in those 3 months.

The confession was so heart touching ❤️. A simple wedding suits them so well.

I agree with you this Suraj is different from our Suraj, he wouldn't act in haste, he's an officer so he's trained to think and act keeping his emotions aside.

I also think romance wouldn't have suited Sukor here, given their past and the stage their relationship, so you took the right decision 👍🏼.


I'm going to miss this story a lot, thanks for writing it and keep writing more Sukor/Ragkor stories 🤗

Thanks So much Mai, I did the reply but IF played it . uggghhh

Happy you loved the platonic way it progressed towards the end.

@bold black

I too enjoyed writing this totally a different genre and not bad I am when I think about🤣

I dedicate this story to you Mai.... all the related comments and the likes... but for you I would not have. so a big Thank You.🤗

More Stories.... ha ha you know me.....

love you loads for the encouragement....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks Sonia for the lovely words

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Amazing update 👏👏👏

SuKor confession was so emotional and finally they got married a simple wedding is suits them because of their past and it,s not right time to SuKor romance loved the way their bonding grew in these three months indeed it was a simple but good end of this SuKor story Plz keep writing SuKor & RagKor stories

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Posted: 5 years ago

Can't we get some bonus chapters? 😳

Badly missing sukor😒

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Posted: 5 years ago

Touch my Angel………K-Jodi…….. SuKor…a Bonus

Dearies….. I will be off on a pilgrimage after the hectic week…. So thought to say short bye… but I saw Ankita asking for a Bonus…and so my bossy too.... Ha ha insatiable aren’t we…. I have a wee hour flight so before that thought to give a short mini OS…. Hope I make all happy

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Its new……………..

New experience………………..

She a great Cardiac Surgeon but at this moment she is unable to control her heart which was pounding terribly…. What is happening to me she was wondering….

She saw herself in the mirror…. The new mangalsutra was shining alongwith her sindoor on her maang..

Mrs. Chakor Khatri she told herself…

They had moved into their new apartment near the hospital. Just a 5 minute walk..

Suraj had organized for two helpers, a cook from the Aligarh bungalow as Chakor did not know cooking and he did not want her to have any complex as she was brooding within herself that she does not know what normal girls know. He had got a studio apartment for the helpers and cook to stay in the night. In the same complex.

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It was now a week after the wedding as immediately after wedding Suraj had to go to Delhi immediately on a special duty. Chakor stayed behind in her room in the hospital which was retained specially for her by the Chief. The separation was affecting them psychologically but not physically though as they had not yet ventured into their marital journey.

Chakor had organized the apartment along with Suraj on video calls and only that morning they had moved in though Tanu and Chakor had been doing the interiors which were mostly brought from Aligarh. The drawing had a pic of Pankaj Khatri and on the side a sword with a lock.

Three bed apartment it was with a balcony and a big hall,dining and a kitchen along with a guest room and service quarters. They did not want to go for an individual house for the sake of safety as Suraj may go out of Kanpur depending on his work nature.

It was their first day …………. Well first night…………. Well the night after their wedding……….

The just married couple AjNu acted as their elders (ha ha few weeks seniors but way too senior in many things….. so had organized for a simple decoration)

Suraj had gone to meet the commissioner concerning the procedures for moving Bhero to Tihar. He was dazed completely but was fuming within.

Suraj was not aware of the preparations being done at home…but knew that his Angel was bit worried.

Tanu kissed Chakor who was in a simple muslin saree in the drawing room. When Suraj entered she left wishing good night to him and giggling..

They both had dinner when she nibbled as her heart was pounding very unusually…He went into their master bedroom which had pics of them together in their wedding costume and also few solo pics of Suraj…His young days pic was there. He went in when he realized that the room was decorated simply with scented candles. A few roses strewn on the bed… when he started to realise why the decoration was and realized why Chakor was bit worried.

He went to the drawing where she was sitting with a book in her hand… he was in his T and pyjama when he took the book from her and kept it proper.

She jittered, she was holding the book upside down as she was feeling very very different…

He sat beside her.. holding her hands… are you ok he asked…

Hmm… Doctor he called… he was no different as his heart was also equally pounding. The Devil to all turned meek in front of the Angel… Both were in same feeling.

He realized she was not feeling shy but was very worried too. He kneeled in front of her looking up holding her knees. You seem to be worried …

Hmm Yes, I don’t know anything…not even to make a proper coffee for you she said… I feel … when he held her hands..and said please I know about you and you about me… We know the state we were so lets accept and not try to feel bad and its not necessary for you to do these things…

Its long now so can we just relax he asked… she smiled hmm…

He spoke about Bhero and about the project he will be working into when unknowingly he was easing her and made her get up and walked with her into the bedroom.. She took his young pic when she caressed the face and said you look so smart and cute… He smiled slowly hugging her am I not now he asked..

She lifted her to look into his eyes when his hands touched her waist when she felt her heart pounding terribly..

She jumped a bit and kept her hands on his chest when she felt his heart too pounding… he winced a bit and she quickly asked is it still paining…. Show me… He held her waist in both his hands its not paining but my heart is equally pounding as yours he said… hmm that’s because the four chambers are gushing with blood and the flow is heavy…. He smiled, lifting her chin looking into her eyes which was fluttering… he kissed her eyes when she felt she would fall and she held his shoulders tight. The aorta is pumping very fast she said…. Oh My God what is happening to me she was wondering … he said very slowly in her ears….Doctor this is not cardiology class …. Hmmm her eyes were closed… It was new for him too… he has handled hard core criminals with ease but handling his angel was becoming so difficult… she was cute, innocent and he knew she was going weak as she held him tight.

He slowly moved her to the bed and made her sit… he made her touch his heart which was pounding… Chakor its same here too… hmm she looked down… saying Tanu told me so many things but I don’t remember anything…

He smiled … what did she say he asked..

I should fall at your feet and then give you milk ……. She looked into his eyes… I am sorry I donot know anything… she quickly was about to getup when he hugged her… kissing her temples he said… Chakor just be you… You are different and I don’t want you to be like the normal woman..

She went into him…. hugging her he said… lets take things slowly… at the pace we both are comfortable when she realized how blessed she was…

Hugging each other…he slowly kissed her nape when she closed her eyes… their hearts were syncing when he lifted her cheeks and caressed her lips which was shivering… he slanted her head when she trusted herself with him….

Peep peeep peeep was a message on her phone.

Coming to senses he left her cheeks when she saw the phone message Code : Blue

Suraj …..her face turned serious…. Its emergency …I need to go to the hospital…. Whats it he asked… Code Blue is cardiac emergency… she quickly moved to the other room and changed and put on her coat and turned… he was not there. Suraj …..no noise…she searched the other rooms… He was no where. Oh god… is he upset…What have I done… I know I am not fit for these… she got a message…

Angel I shall start the jeep.. Come down….

She smiled to herself..tears rolling…. Darling…. ..

True professionals in service sometimes have to compromise on their happiness but that’s the vow they had taken themselves to serve.

He drove her to the hospital…….. wished her good luck and waited in her room till the surgery was done……….

She was tired after the complicated one it was already wee hours, but just holding his hands she fell asleep in the jeep when he carried her to the room…. Placed her beside him….kissed the angel…hugging her fell asleep.

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It was early morning, she woke up to see him in half sitting position hugging her with she on him. She did not want to disturb she got up to refresh……

Awwwwh a loud shriek……………….. he woke up and ran to the wash…Chakor what happened… open the door… she was shrieking…luckily not latched properly when he pushed the door with a force it opened.… she hugged him tight….Pointing her index to the ceiling….. lizzzz aarrr……………….. she jittered. (I too have a phobia for that little reptile thankfully I don’t have any at my home). Holding her tight, he shooed the one which was also shocked in her shrieks… it went outside crawling through the ventilator… Its gone… he was coaxing her…. Calming her…..

Surajjjj…. She looked up when she saw him hugging her and his hug was tightening when she realized she was half robed… the situation turned hot for her half bare skin was igniting him and her…. His hands was caressing her back which was bare ….looking into her eyes….. he slowly went towards her thus making her go back against the tiled wall.

It was not set, nor prepared…. Urge taking over… he cupped her face and kissed her lips very tenderly when she dropped the robe she was holding…

She held his head caressing…when he said I love you….. You are so beautiful my Angel…I love you too Darling. He carried her to their bed placing her…. Things were taking its course…… Kissing her…… they went into a different world not hearing the door bell ringing…… the helpers smiled to themselves and left the couple to mingle in their new world to return back later………………

The Angel and Darling started their journey not in a set way, set time, set place as when love takes over it does not see time or place…………..

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Officer Khatri……………….. the noise came

Don’t touch her he said……………

She is my Angel…………………………. Touch and see…………………………

I will…………what will you do………….. he ran behind……………

………… He lifted high high above……………….giggling daddy daddy leave me…….laughed the three year old…………………. She was flying high and coming down to the strong arms of the Devil.

Hugging his Angel holding their symbol of love in his hands with pride kissing her he said……………………touch my Angel I will Kiss my fairy for you both are my empire…..

What will you want to become when you grow old he asked while the Doctor was beside hugging him …………….. An Police Officer the three year old Pari Khatri told Mr. Khatri……….Ohhhhh okkkkk. If somebody touch mumma I will shoot dhossom dhushoom....

But Daddy the little one asked…. If I touch your angel you will kiss me your fairy but if you touch your Angel what will happen she asked innocently…

He winked at her and told your mummy knows what will happen ….Chup the Angel said…. daddy please tell…. He smiled and said a chota sa devil like me will happen ….

Daddy please please I want a Devil to play with….

Devil you are indeed! the Angel smiled…… ha ha I can soon turn into your darling he smiled….

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See yaaaaa

and pleaseee dont ask me for more......




Edited by sumsukor - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Awwwwww this is such a sweet one❤❤🥰🥰

Let me tell you that the end is absolutely a cutie pie one ❤❤

And ofcourse with sukor things have to be different... so its good that the night was disturbed and then we got the unplanned morning🙈🙈🙈 thanks to the lizard and the latch😜😜

Her doctori explanation about the heart beating was just😂👍

A big thank you to ankita😜 and tons of love to you for writing it inspite of a hectic schedule.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you so much dear for writing this beautiful lovely story in spite of your busy schedule. U r an awesome writer and more awesome person as u never deny our wishes.

Enjoy your vacay!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful Bonus 😍❤️️.

Sukor's awkward first night was beautifully written, Chakor's insecurities, Suraj's supportive nature and both excitedly worried of what's coming ahead. Tina's giggling was funny and cute.

The morning scene 😍😍, we must thank the lizard for getting them close 😂😂.

Sukor scene with their Pari was adorable, so she's daddy's daughter, and thank you for naughty Suraj, hope Pari's wish gets fulfilled 😉😉.


Thanks Sumi, and enjoy your break ❤️️❤️️.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awww thats a sweet bonus❤

touch my Angel I will Kiss my fairy for you both are my empire…..

this is Awww❤😍❤ . loved it.. hv a happy trip

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thanks Sritama for the lovely words

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Sorry Sumi di for d super late feedback..super cute n damn adorable bonus😍😍Sukor's anxiety, tensions, palpitations😄😍❤so cute..d way Dr.Chakor used her cardiology theories describing d conditions😆😆caring ,supporting Suraj d way he made her comfortable😍❤..d unplanned morning bliss❤❤loved it..d Pari surprise😍her adorable talks,her n Suraj's cuteness overload conversation😍Suraj's wish❤😉truly d cherry on d cake😍😍thank u so so much Sumi di despite being so busy u wrote dis beautiful one for all of us❤❤have a lovely trip n enjoy ur break..hope u r having a great time..take care😘😘

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