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Chapter 4

That night was most distressed for a hurted soul. A hurted life is crying for another injured life. His heart screaming every second for relief of the that injured soul. He wants to scream so that whole world get silent as compared to him .

He was hearing a lot of indistinguishable sounds from his heart, from his soul and from his mind.

Though he knows that she was out of danger, but still she was sleeping like a lifeless body without any cheer.

Once She was a girl which he loves. And now she lost all her sweetness.

He breaks down even more when Sahil Jain informed him that although she was safe but her only one eye is functional. Her one eye was not functional .

Sarthak kaka even enquired can he donate his one eye to her. But Sahil refused him as it leads to some complications.

Sahil informed him that they will keep her overnight under observation.

Sarthak kaka keep crying outside the Observation room whole night.

At around 3 - 3.30 he sleeps down.

In the morning, Anupriya slowly opens her eyes weakly . She feels fine but somehow she didn't get the fact that her one eye is lost. That one eye can only obstruct 30 degree in her visiion .

After some minutes she recognise that she was on hospital bed and her surroundings similar to that hospital wards.

While she was getting up she sways her right hand and hit the table beside bed.

She called out Kalyani again and again....

While in the corridor of hospital sarthak falls down from the chair with sudden sound.

He wears his spectacles and rush to ward of anu.

There she keep saying Kalyani.

But sarthak couldn't get why she is not reacting when he is standing in front of her.

Anupriya : Kalyani kya yaha tum ho. Batao na.

Sarthak : Nahi Anupriya ji, main sarthak hoo. Kalyani malhar ke saath hai. Malhar ne Kalyani ko bacha liya. Usne apke baare Mai bataya toh Mai apko hospital le aaya. Are you okay now.

Anupriya : Yes, my is okay ( in her weak English)

Sarthak give a sweet laugh and Anupriya also smile...

Sarthak : Anupriya ji my is okay nahi hota. Yeh "" Yes I am okay "".

Anupriya ::: Theek hai sarthak ji. Vaise sarthak ji hospital valo ne kuch dawai Di hai kya. Jab uthi thi tab sab dhik raha tha par ab blur blur dikh raha hai.

Sarthak ::: Kuch nahi hooa hai apko. Mai doctor se milkar aata hoo. You will rest.

Anupriya ::: Ji sarthak ji

Anupriya slowly lie down on bed. Sarthak also helped her. She closes her eyes.

He went outside the ward.. He immediately rush to doctor cabin.

His breathe are abnormally fast. He could not understand why anu have blur vision though her one eye is perfectly fine.

He reached Sahil cabin.

Sarthak ::: Sahil, I want to talk to you immediately.

Sahil ::: yes tell me sarthak. Is everything fine. Is Anupriya fine.

Sarthak ::: Vahi toh Sahil. Tumne kaha tha ki Anupriya ji ki sirf ek aakh kharab hui hai, and her one eye is totally fine. But when she get up, she told me her vision is getting blur.

Sahil ::: OK OK don't worry, let me first examine her. Come with me.

Sahil walk towards the ward and sarthak follow him.

Sahil give anaesthesia to her and take MRI of her eye. He also take X ray of her brain.

He found something very unusual.

He found that power of her that eye ( functional) get worsened due to a shake in lens and the nerve connecting eye to brain is not working for eye. He increases her under observation days and increases her medication.

While sarthak was roaming in corridor with a sense of wrong happening. Sahil came out of ward. Sarthak hurry up towards him.

Sarthak ::: Kya hooa hai Anupriya ji ko.

Sahil ::: I am sorry to say that Anupriya has lost her both eyes. (((( he explained him what happened to her)))).

Sarthak ::: Kya

Sahil ::: ji

Sahil went to his cabin .

Sarthak is in complete shock. He sat on the chair with a thud. Sarthak was broken down into many pieces which can't be glued again.

He knows that there is some relation between him and her. this relation doesn't have any name but it has such a strong force that can made him cry when she was in pain. He knows that this is not only one sided , this is between them .

Sarthak made his heart understand that he can't freak out he has to find a way so that he can enlighten the life of Anu Priya again.

Sarthak with strong determination went towards the Sahil cabin .

Sarthak ::: can we talk for a while Sahil .

Sahil ::: yes sarthak we can talk , come here sit .

Sarthak was trying hard to catch his breath and words as a horrible Storm is taking place inside his heart and soul .

Sahil give Sarthak some water and ask him to calm down and tell what he wants to talk .

Sarthak ::: Sahil aaj kal medical science Itni advance Ho chuki. I know ki aajkal artificial organs ban sakte hai. Can we try that on Anupriya ji.

Sahil ::: Yes you are right, sarthak medical science is developing by every second. Yes artificial organs bhi prepare kiye ja rahe hai. But firstly this facilities are not available in India.

Sarthak ::: Toh hum bahar le chalte hai.

Sahil ::: Sarthak, let me first complete my lines. Sarthak artificial organs are very dangerous for patients. Only a few percent cases get success. And eyes are not artificially prepared yet.

Sarthak ::: So is there any other way by which she can get her eyes back.

Sahil ::: Sarthak see One Way is also possible . If one of her acquaintance has same blood group and if he agree to donate his one eye to the Anupriya then it can possible that she can get her eyes back .

Sarthak thinks a little when a sudden thought came into his mind that there is no blood relative of Anupriya exist on earth now. ( Her bro doesn't exist in this story, story demands this).

His determination again get weakened . His body start shivering and his breath again gets abnormally fast. His eyes get filled with tears.

Sahil ::: What happened sarthak, why are you crying and shivering. Is your health okay.

Sarthak ::: There is not any blood relative of Anupriya. Her parents died a long time ago. She didn't have siblings. She didn't have any children Also.

Sahil ::: Sarthak calm down. There is one way more. Try to find a suitable eye donor for her. And ya keep this in your mind that blood group of donor should be B+ .

Now sarthak again see a hope to save his anu. He catches his breath and rush to the ward of anu ( he forgot his phone there).

He entered the ward of anu.

Anupriya ::: Kaun hai.

Sarthak ::: Main hoo sarthak.

Anupriya ::: Accha sarthak ji aap ho. Apne doctor se pucha meri aankhon ko kya huaa hai.

Sarthak ji ::: Kuch nahi hooa hai Anupriya ji. Apke brain pe thoda jhatka laga hai to apki aankhon ki image nahi bana pa raha hai. Ek do din me normal ho jayega. Tab tak aap hospital Mai hi rahengi.

Anupriya ::: Theek hai sarthak ji.

She again rest and sarthak took his phone and went to a nearby garden and sit there. He lie to anu bcoz he didn't want that she lost her hope to live.

He dialled his relatives and enquire about their blood group.

Around 3 of them has B+ blood group but they refused to donate any eyes to anu.

He keeps dialing number and enquiring about eyes donor.

While there was one life trying to save another, two beautiful souls are sleeping in the arms of each other and sunlight falling on them.

Kalyani was sleeping in sitting position taking rest of a pillow wall and malhar was sleeping in Kalyani lap in a child posture.

Kalyani's one hand resting on his head and other on his hair.

With the chirping of birds and sunshine Kalyani was the first one to wake up.

She gently stand up from bed putting a pillow under malhar head.

She was still in the wedding attire. She firstly close down curtains so that malhar peaceful sleep wouldn't disturb.

She cover him with a blanket.

She went towards the lord Ganesha and thank him for all the well being of malhar and him.

Kalyani ::: Bappa aaj apne prove Kar diya ki aap sabse acche god ji Ho. Apne Mujhe bacha liya. Malhar ji bhi Bach gaye. Thank you for this. Bappa ek aur wish plz kaka aur mai ko bhi ek Kar do. They need each other.

A flower fall down from Ganesha idol indicating that they will become one.

Kalyani thanked Ganesha for his approval of anusar.

Kalyani went into bathroom and do all the morning rituals . She comes out of washroom. She was looking a roc ( soul) which leaves her old body and entered into a new body. She was looking breathtaking in simple and yet elegant white straight kurta with gold plazzo and a simple kohlapuri. ( Ek baar toh Mai bhi Sharma gayi)😆😂😁) . Her hair are wet.

She went towards the window and start drying her hair with towel.

Cool breeze coming from the window guide small water droplets to malhar.

Malhar open his eyes with making a curve on his lips. The view in the front of him is divine. It is like when a hermit or sage do a lot of meditation for centuries and then they open their eyes. A white aura with a shadow of lady full in white.

He gets up from the bed and move towards Kalyani. His wounds are not healed yet but he is hypnotised in that divine. She is still drying up her hair.

Malhar stand near to him and hold her from back. He gives a small kiss to her on neck.

Kalyani in a sudden move backwards and shake her head.

Then long , thick and wet hair of her fall on his face like a slap.

This cute slap made him to appear this world again .

Kalyani move towards him.

Malhar ::: Kya kya hooa. Ye Gila thappad Kisne Mara ( in annoyed voice)

Kalyani ::: Kuch nahi ji aap ne masti ki isliye maara.

She show him the lips marks on his neck.

Malhar ::: ( Grinning) Are ye masti toh ek baar aur karni hai.

He moves towards Kalyani to kiss her but she again threw her wet hair on his face.

Now they are standing very close but malhar face was filled with Kalyani hair.

And he is pouting and kissing to the Kalyani hair strands.

Seeing this scene Kalyani laugh madly at malhar. She takes a few steps backwards in her laughing state.

Malhar then realize that what had happened to his kiss. He get very annoyed and very angry.

Kalyani laughs again whole heartily watching his cute face ( We all know how cute he is)

Malhar now get very angry and move towards her. He hold both her hand with his hand behind her and with one hand he hold all her hairs behind her head.

Kalyani was still chuckling.

He just crash his lips to her. And take over that sweet pink petals.

Her eyes were closed and she is thinking, is she is dreaming. This was her first perfect kiss.

As their kiss gets comfortable , he fastens up a bit . She feels like her body is melting .

She feels like world is stopped. She forget everything and experience the real peace.

As he feels like he got a control over her lips he release her hands and hold her by head.

She also forward her hands to his torso to hold him.

But as her hands brush her injured torso. He leaves the kiss and scream. Then she realised that he was injured.

Kalyani ::: Sorry malhar ji, I am really sorry .i don't want to do that. Galti se ho gaya.

Malhar calms himself and replied.

Malhar ::: It's okay. Maine hi kiss kiya tha toh hona tha Jo Ho gaya.

Kalyani ::: Par malhar jii har bar meri vajah se apko dard sehna padta hai........

Malhar interrupts her and sealed her lips with his. Kalyani stand still and she is in shock.

He parted away.

Malhar ::: Plz ye sorry sorry band Karo. Kal bhi samjhaya tha. Ab vapas sorry bola toh na kiss hi karoonga.

Kalyani ::: Sorry sorry ab nahi bolungi ( blushing) . Oops fir bol diya.

Malhar again kissed her with full passion , this time she also responded.

After some time they parted away to catch breathes.

Kalyani ::: Malhar ji Chalo bahut befikre Ho gaye. Ab naha bhi lo.

Malhar ::: Mai akela kaise bath loonga. These wounds you see.

Kalyani ::: Are mai bath karwa doongi .

Malhar ::: Such Mai ham sath bath lenge aaj. ( With a naughty smile ))

Kalyani ::: Maine bola mai bath doongi not hum saath bath lenge. ((( Blushing)))

She went towards the bathroom.

Malhar ::: ( shouted) Oh meri Pagli , Sharma gayi. Bath toh ham saath lenge , aaj nahi toh kal sahi.

Kalyani :::(shouted from bathroom) Dekhenge ( with naughty smile)

Kalyani brings a bucket of water , a mug and a sponge.

She undressed malhar wounds and ask him to lay down on bed .

She first checked his wounds. His wounds are much better now. She cleans his wounds with water. And give a sponge bath to him.

All this time malhar keep on looking his beautiful wife.

Kalyani again put bandages on his torso.

She made him wear a loose t shirt.

After all this Kalyani went to kitchen and prepared breakfast for them.

She come back in room. Malhar was resting on the bed.

She feed him with her own hand.

Malhar ::: Are Kalyani thoda teekha Ho gaya.

Kalyani ::: Sorry sorry abhi kuch aur banakar lati hoo.

She start going toward the kitchen.

But malhar pull her and kiss her again with full passion.

He start dominating her. Both were lost into each other. Malhar hands were playing around her creamy waist and Kalyani hands ruffling in malhar hairs.

After full one minute they parted away to catch breathes.

Kalyani quickly taste the food to check whether it is really spicy or not.

Food comes out to be balance in all taste and it was perfect in taste.

She start glaring to malhar.

Kalyani ::: Jhoot bola malhar ji, sorry bulwane ke liye. Now I am angry.

Malhar ::: Toh kya, OK maine Jhoot bola par tum ne bhi kiss kiya Mujhe. Now answer me why you do that to me.

Kalyani smile and blushes and hugs him a little.

They both eat their breakfast.

After breakfast, Kalyani thought about Pillu.

Kalyani ::: Malhar ji where is Pillu.

Malhar ::: Don't worry Kalyani , abhi jab tum kitchen mai gayi thi tab I talked to my friend. They tell me that they found out moksh last night only. But moksh was unconscious. So they admitted moksh to city hospital. Doctor examined him and said that moksh have just a small dehydration. He will get fine only in one day. And one more good news is that all the illegal works of atharv are seized . Mughda is now under the observation of army hospital in AFMC, pune. Aur atharv bhi valley mai gir Kar Mar gaya. His body was found out by the police and he is declared dead.

Kalyani ::: OK malhar ji. I hope moksh will be fine as soon as possible . I don't wanna talk about atharv . Malhar ji agar aap kahe toh Mai Pillu se milna chahti hoo chale kya hospital . Apka bhi checkup Kara denge.

Malhar ::: Theek hai Kalyani chalte hai, but I can't drive in this condition.

Kalyani ::: Are toh main pawar bhau ko bula leti hoo.

Malhar ::: Theek hai bula lo.

Kalyani calls pawar and ask him to pick them and drop to city hospital.

Pawar drop them at hospital. They rushed toward children ward.

Kalyani found moksh playing in his cradle.

She take him and hug him.

Kalyani ::: Are mera Pillu kaisa hai tu. Kitne din Ho gaye mile hi nahi. Beta pata Tere cousin papa ne bada pareshaan kiya par Tere superman baba ne Mujhe aur tujhe bacha liya. Tere baba sach mai acche hai. Tu aur mai Kitne khushnaseeb hai Jo hamari jindagi mai malhar ji hai.

While speaking this some tears escaped from her eyes.

Moksh wipe her tears with his little hands. And give the cutest do dant wali smile.

Kalyani also smile watching moksh cute smile ☺.

Malhar also have happy tears in his eyes.

He hug both his lifeline. ( Just like their first family hug).

Doctor Manthan tharwani come to the malhar.

Manthan ::: Kya aap in bacche ji ke aai baba hai.

Malhar ::: Ji Mai malhar rane hoo aur ye meri wife Kalyani malhar rane and ye hamari jaan moksh Kalyani rane.

Manthan ::: OK OK malhar ji. Vaise your child is very cute and happy hai.

Malhar ::: Ji hamara baccha uski aai par gaya hai ( proudly)

Kalyani blushes and kiss moksh (( not malhar ji, subai se chaar kiss ho gaye aur Kitne chaiye)).

Manthan ::: Ji mera naam Dr Manthan tharwani hai and I am a child specialist.

Malhar ::: Ji mera baccha kaisa hai ab.

Manthan ::: Ji moksh is totally fine now but we have to just keep him under observation for 12 hour or 1 day.

Kalyani ::: Ji Jarror, ye moksh ke liye accha hai toh Jarror keep him under observation.

Malhar ::: yupp she was right.

Kalyani kiss Pillu and say good bye him .

Kalyani ::: Mere little munchkin ye doctor tumhara khayal rakhenge. Hum kal aaenge. Theek hai bii mera baccha.

Malhar also kiss moksh and say bii to him.

Kalma give Pillu to Manthan and start going to the jeep to go back home.

While walking to the parking lot they saw sarthak going towards hospital.

Sarthak tried very hard but no one is ready to donate eye to Anupriya. So he wants Sahil to found a eye donor.

Malhar called our his name.

Sarthak saw him. Malhar and Kalyani walk towards him. Sarthak hugs malhar and start crying and sobbing.

Kalma ::: Kya hua kaka. Why are you crying.

Sarthak told them everything about Anupriya and her eye.

Eyes of kalma get wet. Sarthak ask malhar about any eye donor suitable for anu.

Kalyani said with a jerk.

Kalyani ::: Atharv kaka. His blood group Is B+ . and he is died now. We can take his eyes easily.

Malhar ::: Haa Kalyani he is dead now. But there is a problem. In Indian constitution without the consent of a individual we can't take his vital organ. If he is dead then only his close relative can permit about use of his organs for others. And I don't think Pallavi chachi will agree.

Kalyani ::: We request to her.

Sarthak thinks a little.

Sarthak ::: Chodo ye sab. Kisi se koi request karne ki jarrorat nahi. I have a idea. Only Atharv eyes will used for transplantation and that without any permission of Pallavi .

That's it guys. Plz read next post.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello everyone, this is Neera.

Guys chapter 4 is uploaded.

Guys beware badi dhamki is coming below.

Guys this chapter is more than 3300 words and longest chapter yet. It taken almost 5 hour to wrote it and edit it.

Guys next chapter will be on next week if and only if this post get 20+ likes. And 15+ likes on next chapter ( upload in next weak ).

Sorry for any grammatical errors.

Plz like and comment.

And guys Ff a epic saga : rise of kalma will be updated by september only. You have to wait guys. It takes time and my studs are also important.

And guys I do not have time to reply on every comment of teaser. Sorry for this. I have to prepare for my exams . Will reply after Sunday.

Guys plz thoda detail dena. About how you like chapter.

Guys sorry it has 4 kiss. I hope anyone don't mind this.

Love you all.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tilli

U have no idea how impressed am with change in ur writing from chapter 1 to here. And layers of emotions and transformation of characters are so beautifully shown choti.

I know how difficult it's to write such a big chapter with so much emotional content and editing is also hard with increase in no of words.it emotionally drains you. It's so beautiful and awesome to see the dedication and passion you have for writing. And it also shows in the update.

Awesome baby, u r doing brilliant. It was such a beautiful chapter.

Keep smiling baby girl

Lots of love

Baba / di❤️

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluemoon255

Tilli

U have no idea how impressed am with change in ur writing from chapter 1 to here. And layers of emotions and transformation of characters are so beautifully shown choti.

I know how difficult it's to write such a big chapter with so much emotional content and editing is also hard with increase in no of words.it emotionally drains you. It's so beautiful and awesome to see the dedication and passion you have for writing. And it also shows in the update.

Awesome baby, u r doing brilliant. It was such a beautiful chapter.

Keep smiling baby girl

Lots of love

Baba / di❤️

Are baba, your words affected me like no one does for my writings in my whole life. Thank you for liking it. Di yes I know dis chapter is amazing. Maine pada tha na toh mujhe anusar and kalma bohot acha laga sachi Di. Thanks di.

Love you di

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res ..will give brief update in morning😆

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Originally posted by: rammehra103

Res ..will give grief in morning

Di check your comment again. It is hilarious 🤣...

Di love you yaar. Kal de Dena it's OK

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Read them all together, i am very less active nowdays, but loved reading it, great work 😍✌🏻

Will definitely come more frequent now 😛

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Originally posted by: Vermilion

Di check your comment again. It is hilarious 🤣...

Di love you yaar. Kal de Dena it's OK

sorry didn't check it🤣🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
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good work keep going neera

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hey Neera

It’s written very beautifully...

I loved it so much

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