Ts:- Enough is Enough part-3 updated on page-5 LAST PART

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi forumwasis I'm silent reader hear writing for the first time .. criticism and appreciation both are welcome...

The story start when Lakshmi come home drunk... everyone was lasting on Lakshmi but she was not in sense ..no one was concerned for her state so guddan come forward and was holding Lakshmi and Dadi bhua started shouting..

Db:- mene kaha tha na bahuo ko itni chut nahi Deni chahiye?? Dekh liya natija??yeh lakshan hote he Jindal parivarki bahuo k??dekh liya guddan tumhare dosti k tarike ka fayda?? Kya Gul khilaye he is kulakshini ne??maan lo abhi b k humara sakti Wala tarika he sahi he?? aur ha aaj Jo is Lakshmi ne Kiya he ask baad to yeh begerat ladki is gharme nahi reh sakti?? Sun vardan abhi k abhi ise mayk chod aa?? Mujhe shakal nhi dekhni is manhoos ladki ki...Vardan was about to say somethingl but before he could say something guddan blasted like a bomb on bhuaji...

Guddan:- bus bAhot hua dadibhua ji...hum kuch bol nahi rahe Matlab aap kuch b bolti rahegi??aur kisne haq Diya aapko humari bahuko gharse nikalne ka?? bAhu he wo humari koi kachara nhi Jo utha Kar fenk de..

Hearing this from guddan's mouth everyone was shocked...bhuaji was about to open her mouth but before she can speak guddan showed her palm to shut her up...and she turns towards vardan...

Guddan:- vardanji Jao Lakshmi bAhu ko andar leke jayiye..aur unhe thoda fresh hokar Aram Karne dijiye hum nimbuoani bhejte he ..unka khayal rakhiyega...badi masom he Kya pata Kya hua tha unk sath waha??

Vardan:- ji ma aap tension mat lijiye..hum pura khayal rakhege apni laksmi ka..Kya pata Kya hua is k sath??mujhe b usk sath kal Jana chahiye tha kitna insist kr rahi thi mujhe pR mene he kaha k akele Chalo jaooo...

Guddan:- koi baat nhi vardanji Jo hua so hua ab aap jayiye aur Lakshmi bAhu ko sambhaliye hum jara yaha ka adhura kaam pura karti hu...

After that vardan left guddan instructed maid to make lemonade for lakshmibahu...after that guddan marched in Hall to watch  bhuaji was sitting hell angry and rest wear all in super confusion....Guddan turned around and saw aj and rest of the family...

Next update in next part..it was meant to b os but shayad ek aur part karna padega...

 Should I continue??Plz like and reply...next prt me Akshan milenge....

Part:-2 on page 1

Part:-3 on page 5 ( LAST PART)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi guys I'm back again...thank you so much everyone for liking and commenting and loving my story...I feel so happy....so hear it part 2 hope you all will like it.... happy reading guys...

Guddan come to Hall were everyone was waiting for her...she saw aj and ask his permission to say he nodded and guddan stared at bhuaji...Durga and saru bahu....

As bhuaji was about to say something guddan showed her palm asking her to shut up....

Guddan:- bas bhuaji ab hum bolenge aur aap sunegi...bAhot bol liya aapne aur bAhot sun liya humne ab aur nahi....aapne ab Tak is guddan ko thik se Jana kaha he??jab hum apne guddanpane pe utar ayege na to aap b dekhti reh jayegi....

DB:- dekha lalla kaise juban Lada rahi he tumhari biwi mujhese?? Yahi sikhaya he iski ma ne use?? Are ha iski to ma he nhi he Durga bAhu Bata rahi thi...aur sauteli ma b ise kuch khas pasand krti nhi he...Aise me wo use Kya sikhayegi??...ab b wqt he apna dosti k ravaiya badl Kar sakti ka Rasta apna lo..fayde me rahogi....

That was it....guddan now totally in angry mode shouted on bhuaji...

Guddan:- bas kijiye aap..bAhot ho gaya... enough is enough....aap thakti nahi he itna bolte bolte bhuaji??jara apni Umar ka to lihaz kijiye?? Bp badh Gaya to humare lene k Dene pad jayege..aap hum Tak thi tab tk hum sunte rahe par humari ma ya mummy k bare me bolne ka aapko koi haq nhi he....aur Kya sakti sakti lAga k rakha he aapne?? Aapki sakti k Karan humari pyari Durga bAhu aur saru bahu Jo pahele se he giri Hui he aur gir gayi he...

Hearing this Durga and saru was shocked and freezed..and giving back to guddan Durga shouted...

Durga:- yeh Kya bakwas kare ja rahi ho?? Aur tumhari himmat kaise Hui Hume giri Hui kehne ki Guddannn....

Guddan:- Sasuma kahiye Durga bAhu Sasuma guddan nahi samjhi...aapki to ma he ne Kya unho ne aapko  nhi sikhaya ki apni saas se kaise baat karte hai??aur humne Kya galat kaha aapk bare me Jo aap itni tilmila uthi?? Q aapne milkshake wali shart jitne k liye humare Aam ki boriyo me tel nhi dala tha??aur to aur humari mixi b kharab Kar di...use b Mann nhi bhara to dance competition me lakshmibahu hissa na le isliye unk pero k niche kanch k tukde fenk kr unhe chot b pahochayi...itne se b Mann nhi bhara aapka to aapne saru bahu k sath mil Kar gano k sath b ched Chad Kar di...aur bhuaji k kaan to aap humesha bharti he rehti he humare khilaf q Durga bAhu kuch galat kaha humne??

Durga was hell shock hearing this from guddan's mouth...now guddan went near saru and said

Guddan:- aur ab Bari aapki saru bahu...humne Aj aur Dadi ki Marzi k khilaf Jakar aapko maaf Kiya...aapk itne kaand Karne k bavjood aapko gharme rehne Diya bAhu ka maan Diya par aap apni harkato se baaz nhi ayegi na?? Kutte ki dum ki tarah tedi ki tedi he rahegi?? Waise aapki chori Karne ki adat gayi nhi Kya ab Tak Jo humare kamre aakar taka jhaki kar rahi thi??aur to aur Durga bAhu ka har galat chizo me sath dekar apne sudhrne ka Aakhri mauka b gava Diya...waise bhuaji aapko kabhi wqt mile na saru bahu k kamre me jarur jayega...unka bed bAhot Sundar he aur andar se to kafi bada b he bAhot saman aa b jayega aur mil b jayega....aur ha aapko apni kuch chize bechni karni ho na to inhe jarur yaad kijiye in k chor Bazar me bAhot contact he q saru bahu??

Both dayan and chorni wear standing like a zombi there...thair head wear down coz everyone in the hall was asking answers from them??

Guddan:- aur ha bhuaji yeh aapki sakti k he Karan Durga bAhu ko itna girna pada he aur saru bahu ka to javab he nhi...waise hum aapse saaf saaf shabdo me yeh kehna chahte he k aapki soch bAhot he choti aur giri Hui he...humari Lakshmi bAhu par Hume pura yakin he wo kabhi b Aisa kuch nhi karegi jisse humara.. Inka aur is Jindal khandan ka naam kharab ho...Baki aap to samjhdar he hi...waqt rehte samjh jayiye to thik warna Lord Krishna aapka bhala kare...

Saying this guddan went from there to her room ...as Aj who was there silent till now smiling the proudest smile ..and was admiring his wife..his dost...he was proud of her...she was his guddan ..and now she needs him ... Thinking that he was about to left hall bhuaji stopped him...

DB:- dekha lalla kaisi muh fat baate Kar k gayi he yeh ladki?? Bhabhi aapne lalla ki biwi chunne me galti Kar di...sun lalla abhi b der nhi hui chod de is guddan ko... hum dhundege tumhare liye ladki hum karvayenge tumhari firse shadi ...abhi k abhi vakil ko phn Kar aur talak k paper banva me...chod de is guddan ko ..

Hearing this from bhuaji Aj was he'll angry..he clinch his fist and controlling his anger turn to bhuaji and said....

Aj:-bhuaji....me aapki bAhot izzat karta hu aur rishto k mayne b mene aapse he sikhe hai to aaj aap kaise chuk gayi?? I'm sorry to say ki aaj aap galat ho....aapne lakshmibahu par Bina soche samjhe baat ki teh Tak Jaye Bina unhe kasurvar tehra Diya...Hume humari bAhu aur biwi dono par pura bharosa hai ....aur rahi baat guddan aur Meri to hum apni zindgi me bAhot khush he aur mujhe to Garv he Meri guddan pe k usne Bina dare sahi ka sath Diya aur apni saas aur dost home farz nibhaya...bhuaji aapne aaj kaha mere aur guddan k rishto ko todney k baare me dubara mat kahiyega q Meri guddan ..Meri patni Mrs. Guddan Akshat Jindal Mera Maan he Mera Gurur he...aur koi usk sath CheD-khani kare mujhe yeh hargiz manjur nhi aur rahi baat lakshmibahu bAhu ki to sham Tak aapko aur Baki sabhi ko unki begunayi ka sabut mil jayega....Meri biwi aur Meri bAhu dono par mujhe behadh bharosa he....

Saying this Aj March in his room to be with his gudiya ...ND hear everyone one left with heavy heart only Dadi and Kishore wear there and they were genuinely happy for there lalla and his gudiya ... happy tears were flowing from Dadi's eyes..   

So guys hear is part 2...sorry to disappoint you all k is part me Akshan sath me nhi the par pakka last aur akhri part pura Akshan ko he dedicated he ...waise I would love to know k aap Sab Kya dekhna chahte he Akshan k bedroom me....

P.s:- sorry if any one find guddan harsh in my story but it was really needed to show them that she is not weak jaisa wo samjhte he  guddan ko....aur waise b serial me kaha itni straight forward guddan dekhne milegi ..so let's enjoy....

Plz like and comment and give me sum suggestions, appreciation, and criticism also....until then bye....and sorry for the typos....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting... Plz continue

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting please continue your story soon...nice to see guddan supporting her dil, hope can see such scene in the show too...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome 

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Would love to read more! Update next part soon ðŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice one

Plz update the next part

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Please update soon 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanishant

Interesting... Plz continue

Thank you will update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: davinajebakani

Interesting please continue your story soon...nice to see guddan supporting her dil, hope can see such scene in the show too...

Thank you

I too wish k yeh dikhaye show me...

Will update soon