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Hi guys m so overwhelmed with the response I'm getting for my story....I would like to thanks everyone one for loveing my story so much....will update next part very soon so keep loving and liking my story everyone....

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First of all sorry guys for taking so long...but was stuck up with some work...but finally aaj time mil he gaya....so here it is last and final part of my firat ever story.....plz guys give your love through likes and comments...even criticism also accepted....

P:s:- sorry for the typing errors...plz bear with it....now let's start.....

Part:-3 (last part)

After coming in room guddan went to washroom...she just let the shower on and stand there...tears were continuesly flowing from her eyes...today she was harsh...she hurted an older person by her words...though she was right...but bhuaji was elder and she spoke rudly with her....she is guddan and she can't be harsh and mean to anyone...she is not like Durga and saru bahu who keeps on hurting everyone...she is guddan....she was dranch with the water her white saree was stick to her body like a second skin...she was crying but still looking beautiful...the dream women of every men...this is when akshat come to room searching for her in the room....he searched her in every possible place where she can hide whenever she is sad or hurt...not finding anywhere he hear the water sound...he open the bathroom and there she was.... broken...hurt...and sad....she was crying and it was piearcing him ..he can't see her crying....he went to her.... seeing him guddan completely broke down and started crying vigorously....

Guddan:- hum bAhot bure he Jindal Saab...hum bAhot bure he...aaj humne bhuaji ko kitna hurt Kita....kitni khari khoti sunai....kitni dukhi hogi wo....hum yeh nahi krna chahte the par jab unhone humari mummy or ma k bare me kaha to humare sabar ka bandh Tut Gaya....aur humne unhe wo Sab keh diya Jo hum nahi kehna chahte the....hum bAhot bure he bAhot bure....Sab sach kehte he k hum kisi kaam k nahi humse to apnose bado ka aadar karna b na ho paya.....hume bAhot taklif ho rahi hai.....

Seeing guddan in this state akshat was so hurt he can't see her like this....he wipe her tears....

Akshat:- shhhhhshhhh guddan shant ho Jao...ro mat guddan...tumhe pata he na me tumhe rota hua nahi dekh sakta??aur kisne kaha k tum buri ho??Jo bure hote he jin k Mann me kapat hota he wo is tarah dukhi hokar rota nhi hai...tumhare yeh aansu he bata rahe he tumhe kitni taklif pahochi he aur tum kitni acchi aur sacchi ho....aur rahi baat bhuajiki to tumne aaj Jo b Kiya bilkul sahi kiya....unhe aaina dikhana jaruri tha.....aur tumne wahi Kiya badi he tamiz se unhe tumne samjha Diya...I hope k unhe samjh Aya ho k tum Kya kehna chahti thi...aur yeh Sab tumne q kaha?? Aur guddan bhuAji ki ek baat to sahi he k tumhe apni bahuo k sath kabhi kabhi sakhti se kaam Lena hoga khas Kar k jab bAhu Durga aur Saraswati bAhu jaisi ho??

hearing his words she was now coming out of her crying zone...she was feeling relaxed and peaceful...out of excitement she just hugged akshat tightly....now both were dranch fully....and guddan was hugging akshat making his all the pantup desire on riseing...no it was not just physical need but it was love....yes the grt Akshat Jindal was again in love with his jhalli wife guddan.....

When he started falling for her he never understand...when she saved him from dutta..or when she bring back his antras pic aur when she stood still with her trust on him when rawat accused him for antras murder...or when she come to jail aur when she proved him innocent risking her own life...ya when she stood up for Lakshmibahu against Rocky.... ya tab jab guddan denied wearing mangalsutra out of sympathy...ya fir tab jab she saved him from the clutches of Rocky-angad & saru bahu.... He doesn't know k kab wo guddan se pyar Karne lAga....

Coming back to reality Aj reciprocate the hug.... unknowingly his hand started making pattern on guddan's bare back...she stiffened for a second but then she let him do wat he wants....he was lost in guddan's arm...as guddan parted from him they saw love.... acceptance....And desire in each other's eyes....as they wear dranch guddan was moving out of washroom she slip and to prevent her from hurting her self Aj hold her by waist...and both of them fall in bathtub....Aj was down and guddan was on him.... both wear lost in each other..guddan's hair strained was blocking Aj's view so he tucked it behind her ear ... feeling overwhelmed guddan kissed Aj on his forehead... surprise with guddan's kiss Aj compose him self and asked her raising his brows wat is for??

Guddan:- bus aise he...Hume Mann Kiya to hum ne Kar Diya....

Aj:- accha Mann Kiya to mujhe kiss Kar liya?? Saying this he also kissed on her cheek....

Guddan was shocked....with sudden kiss...

Guddan:- while holding her cheek...yeh aapne Kya Kiya??

Aj:- kiss

Guddan:- par q??

Aj:- bas aise he Mann Kiya to Kar Diya....

Guddan:- aise kaise aap kiss Kar sakte hai??

Aj:- aise saying he kissed on her other cheek making guddan opening her mouth in perfect O shape....

turning beetroot red guddan started to getup when akshat pulled her towards him by holding her waist...now guddan was breathing heavily...and this all things were making Aj aroused....but somehow controlling his emotion he told guddan....

Aj:- guddan humara rishta ab sirf dosti ka nahi raha ...hum usme bAhot age badh Gaye he....main apne is rishte ko age badhana chahta hu ise pure dilse nibhana chahta hu.....Kya tum Mera sath dogi???

Guddan was so happy... emotional...she just nodd her head and hide her self in the crook of his neck.....as Aj was about to kiss her she closed her eyes....

Aj:- guddan agar tum nahi chahti to....

Guddan stop him by putting her finger on his lips and then pack on his lips...Aj was shocked with this bold guddan but he was liking it.....he wanted to kiss her feel her near him so he asked her permission to kissed her ...

Aj:- may I??

Nodding her head in acceptance..Aj put his lips on her ....she was inexperienced so she was just enjoying her self ...soon she also reciprocate the kiss...it was started with soft kiss soon it turns out to be passionate and intense kiss...due to lack of oxigen both parted away.... guddan was feeling shy she just get up from the tub and run out side the washroom.....Aj know wat was she feeling....it was her first time so he let her go...mean time he changed himself in bathrob and come out of washroom to see the most beautiful site.... guddan was dacked up in red shiffon saree drying her wet hair.... seeing Aj through mirror she blushed really hard..... seeing her this red Aj was so charged up..but he was not in hurry...he doesn't want to scare or hurt her...so he composed himself and went to her and back hugged her....

Aj:- guddan....tum bahot Sundar lag rahi ho ....dekho guddan humare bich abhi Jo kuch b hua wo aapsi sehmati se hua hai...is liye apni nazre jhukane ki jarurat nahi hai....aur ha jab Tak tum Puri tarahse humare rishte se comfortable nahi ho jati tab Tak me apni line cross nahi karunga...aur na he tumhe kabhi force karunga....

Saying this he went to closet to fatch cloth for him... guddan was touched with his gesture...and relieved with his decision to let her decide about them....she was really lucky and blessed to have husband like akshat who was his best friend who understands her turmoil and control his emotions....taking her mangalsutra and sindoor patr guddan went to Aj and asked him to fill her mang and tie her mangalsutra.....Aj does wat guddan says...done with tieing guddan hugged Aj....

Guddan:- thank you Jindal Saab Hume samjhne k liye...Hume wqt Dene k liye...hum b apne rishte ko age badhana chahte he par ek ajeeb si gabhrahat ho rahi hai...par hum aapse vada karte hai k hum bahot jaldi aapko aapka jawab denge....

Saying this she pack him on his lips and run out of the room....while Aj was still coming out of the kiss guddan again come to door and said...

Guddan:- waise aap kiss bAhot accha karte he akshatji....Hume din me 3baar yeh dose Dena hoga aapko.....

Saying this she run away and Aj was shocked with her sudden demand...but soon he compose him self and thought yeh guddan hai aur yeh kuch b mang sakti he....

Aj:- Meri jhalli pagli biwi.... guddan me bAhot jaldi he apne pyar ka izhar karunga tumse par usse pahele mujhe kisi aur se permission Leni hai....

Saying this he went to antra's portrait...he light the diya and put a white flowers on her picture....

Aj:- antra pata nahi kab par me guddan se pyar Karne lAga...mujhe nahi lAga tha k tumhare Jane k baad mujhe kabhi kisi aur se pyar hoga but guddan ne wo jagah mere dilme banali pata nahi kab kaise par me usse bAhot pyar Karne lAga hu...usne tumhari jagah nhi li he pAr apni khudki ek jagah banayi hai...Kya tumhe humara yeh rishta manjoor hai??

Asking her permission Aj looks at antra...and while giving her permission the white flower from the potrait come in the hand of Aj...Aj just smiled at antra and thanking her from the bottom of his heart begain saying...

Aj:- thank you antra....me janta tha k tum b yahi chahti hi...ab bas mujhe guddan ko apne pyar ka ehsas dilana hai ...aur tumhe b Mera sath Dena hoga isme.....

Saying this Aj left the room. The new love story is about to begin...and antra, sun, moon, stars, rain and kathor everyone was ready to play there part and to help Aj.....

So guys this is the end of my 1st ever story...hope you all will like this and plz show some love to my story by like and comments.....

PS:- it was started with bhuaji ja banter but ended on happy note with Akshan....so again thank you all from the bottom of my heart.....

Lots of love guys....do like and comment on this part and give ur honest review.....muuuhhhaaaa to all of you.....

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