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Make a blog and post the chapter there,then give us the link.Originally posted by: Ramjanki
It's turning out to be like this 😫
Dear make blog at WordPress it will helpful
Dear try wordpress even my stories are there I haven't posted on if as old one also use confuse me and this new one is worst 😞
Oh my now he will feel guilty 😭Will look forward to read this part.Originally posted by: Ramjanki
Chapter 33Maan was waiting for doctor restless his hand was soaked with blood. He didn’t thought his one decision lead him to this situation. He is at fault.neither he will send her to her house as he become so angry at her nor his car break fails and she meet up with accident.He spoiled everything with just one wrong decision.What was the need?
Did you try by copy pastingYou updated from mobile na ... first write on phone and try to copy paste here ... may be it will helpOriginally posted by: Ramjanki
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Chapter 33
Maan was waiting for doctor restless his hand was soaked with blood. He didn’t thought his one decision lead him to this situation. He is at fault.neither he will send her to her house as he become so angry at her nor his car break fails and she meet up with accident.
He spoiled everything with just one wrong decision.
What was the need?
What was the need for getting so angry at her?
Thanks to God he sent his personal bodyguards with her even unknown to her that brought her to hospital at time.
Soon doctor come out from operation theatre
D: i'm sorry mr. Khurana but you have to make a decision . It's so risky and mrs. Khurana is losing it!
I'll be honest their are only 30℅ chance that we can save trio.
Khurana’s including handa's were too much shocked to react on anything. Just in one night things turn drastic with no fault of anyone.
Maan sat down with a thud causing Ram to held him tightly. Otherwise he was going to fall.
R- maan sambhalp apme aap ko.
D- Mr. Khurana we don’t have time. You have to make decision fast.
She get head injury and it is too risky to waste a single minute.
We will try to save trio but I can’t promise. We need your decision fast.
Rano held mohinder hand tightly.
Ra- I I want my daughter.
Please save her
D- Mr khurana being her husband we are waiting for decision.
All look at maan with holding their breath. His family know his decision but handa’s were restless.
He have every reason to not save her & choose his children over her.
M- save her doctor.
Saying so maan signed paper giving them authority if something happen they need to save her.
J- maan everything will be fine soon.
Please don’t lose hope.
With tears in his eyes he hug his mother holding her tightly.
M- I am responsible maa
I am the one.
She told me right
I don’t deserve anyone in my life that’s why god is snatching happiness from me. I am m
R- MAAN
Ram made him look at him angrily
R- abhi toh bol diya phir yeh baat maat bolna!
Janki look at her son helpless
.
Maan close his eyes feeling helples
G- kya chahte ho?
I’ll beg in front of you?
Or they need to beg in front of you so you forgive us?
G- glti unki h hi nhi k unhone tumhe raste pr chod diya you deserve it.
M- ENOUGH
Causing her to look at him stunned as her eyes fell on her now Red eyes.
M- HOW DARE YOU TO ACCUSE MY FAMILY FOR SOMETHING?
HO KOUN TUM?
DO YOU KNOW WHAT?
I’M DONE WITH YOU
JUST GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE
LEAVE!
Geet look at him angrily
G- you know I was right about you previously. You are one mean maan. You just wanna prove everyone how good you are so that they roam around you.
Do you know now I got it what you want just attention
ATTENTION FROM ALL.
G- if you were so good then why can’t you forgive me & your parents?
But no you want everyone to roam around you .
I AM GOING DO HELL WITH YOU AND YOUR FAMILY!
Maan open his eyes as he felt suffocated all of sudden. Soon he saw a nurse coming toward them with sad face holding a child wrapped in white clothes.
N- sorry sir it was a girl and we not able to save her.
Khurana’s & handa were stunned hearing this.
Maan look at that nurse with his eyes fill up unknown to him.
He hold that child in his arms asking for forgiveness. He was responsible for her death.he failed to protect her.
He cried & cried holding her close to him. Including all family who were trying to support him.
He asked for forgiveness numerous times from baby. Placing numerous kisses on her forehead.
Savitri take baby from him as he unable to hold himself further.
S- nurse please
Nurse take that child away.
Janki tried to console maan who didn’t utter a word after that.
.
Few minutes later
Doctor come out finally but khurana’s were too engrossed to notice this due to loss.
Rano come toward doctor
Ra- meri beti?
D- she is out of danger now and congratulations Mr. Khurana
Causing all of them to look at doctor confused
D- we don’t able to save one baby but we saved another one,
All of them get up with a jerk maan was the first one
M- is baby fine?
D- he is baby boy. He is fine but weak so we put him under observation.
But your wife
She lost her memories due to head injury.
All of them don’t know what to feel at that moment sad because they lost someone happy about new arrival or geet?
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Wow you managed to do it
Shocking update
poor maan feeling so guilty about everything , after happening so much he still choose geet
poor maan lost is one child but got another baby saved
oh geet lost her memory
let see what happens next
Hmm too much happened
Some good things some worse things ... She lost her memory .... will they told her about her marriage ?
No one at fault ... fate played . Maan is nice man ..he feeling guilty but good that baby boy survived
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