Soulmates ff p3

Hey saru here..

u can find first part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086106/soulmate-ff-p1

Second part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086244/soulmate-ff-p2

Hope u all like this one also..

After party got over Dristi came to her room and changed her dress.. while doing so she began to remember everything thats had happened during the course of the day..

She can still feel his touch on her body and she is unable to control her heart .. her mind says she cant believe rakshit..and her heart.....

Alas her heart says something else.. his care concern everything is touching her heart and she knows him enough that he doesnt show his emotions just like that..

Dristi since childhood never cried or expressed herself in front of anybody she always controlled her emotions and pain but now unable to take all recent happenings since she met rakshit to finding her divi she broke down completely shouting mamaaaa..

Rakshit who just entered the room witnessed this and hid himself to give her the space she needed right now. He didnt want to invade her personal space...

He heard dristi saying i miss u mama papa and she started crying and in anger she began to destroy the room saying i wont leave anyone who snatched you both from us. And rakshit sir...

Rakshit was shocked seeing her and thought .what the hell is she saying what is wrong with her..

He entered the room saying mrs shergill yeh sab kya hai kya hua ..

Seeing him taking a look and analysing in all the destruction that happened in the room and her emotional state dristi lost her cool and said aap aisa kaise karsakthe sir.. aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakthe ho. Saying so she lost her balance.

Rakshit catched her in his arms before she fell down..and said dristi......

Dristi before loosing her consciousness heard her name softly with so much love and saw concern n fear etched on his face and said

Raskshit.... and collapsed is his arms

To be continued in next os..

I know my way of writing is very bad .. please click like if u like it lol n leave ur feedback..thank you

Go with the flow....

Very nice update

Awesome updt

Loved it

Why Drishti was blaming Rakshit? I hope he will be able to handle her..and she share her pain wid him

Cont soon

Thnx for pm

Awesome os

Love it

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome updt

Loved it

Why Drishti was blaming Rakshit? I hope he will be able to handle her..and she share her pain wid him

Cont soon

Thnx for pm

Okey so I’ll be very honest in terms of writing yes the style of writing needs a little improvement however u yourself have said u new so it’s going to take a little time and experimenting but from what I see u have really good ideas, u seem to enjoy it so I would say keep writing as the more u do it the better you’ll get (also reading helps to improve writing) .

Also it’s great to see the different ideas in a story form in terms of the 3 parts u wrote after reading part 1 and 2 when I got to 3 I kinda knew that 1 would be my fav as I really want to see Rakshit act on the unromantic challenge however I actually enjoyed this part the most especially the fact that Rakshit addressed her as Drishti which we haven’t seen so far and plus I think it adds another level of intimacy.

So overall it’s good keeping doing what u do, u have some great ideas and I’m sure everyone will keep supporting (including me☺️) x

Oo and sorry if I said anything u didn’t like I have no intention of being mean or hurtful just wanted to share an honest opinion.

Mev my love thanks for the feedback❤.. this is what i wanted to hear rather than same routine answer..im glad u liked the story i know there is scope of improvement in terms of presentation☺ .. love you for giving such a honest opinion and it touched my heart..i know u will love this part ..keep supporting..lots of love n hugs..🤗

Originally posted by: Saru...

Mev my love thanks for the feedback❤.. this is what i wanted to hear rather than same routine answer..im glad u liked the story i know there is scope of improvement in terms of presentation☺ .. love you for giving such a honest opinion and it touched my heart..i know u will love this part ..keep supporting..lots of love n hugs..🤗

Aww bless, I feel the best way to support someone is to be honest with them as it helps encourage growth. And the truth is not everyone can handle criticism and the fact that u can shows u want for growth. U ideas are good, like really good they have they stuff the Drikshit fans what to see, so keep trying and you’ll get better and better, defo here to support xoxo❤️

Originally posted by: Mevsta101

Aww bless, I feel the best way to support someone is to be honest with them as it helps encourage growth. And the truth is not everyone can handle criticism and the fact that u can shows u want for growth. U ideas are good, like really good they have they stuff the Drikshit fans what to see, so keep trying and you’ll get better and better, defo here to support xoxo❤️

Hugs❤️

This just got me thinking does Rakshit even know Drishtis name, when he first met she said her name was miss sood, his always called her that and after marriage Mrs Shergill. Imagine if he doesn’t know her name 😮