MG OS: WAITING FOR YOU || FINAL PART PG 5 APRIL 13th

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hearts are only made to be broken... a lifeless scared thing that couldn't even mourn over its death no matter how ruthlessly and brutally its owner had killed it... No matter how it had pained to it seeing the one who ones cared for it shattering it into the pieces which cannot be mend...

This is the one lesson that he had learned in his life ... His heart that once he considered being with her was viciously butchered by her...she played with his feelings ... Mocked him saying all the unnecessary things ... she said she loved him... she loved him with all her heart and soul...and he what a fool he was that he easily came under her honey sweet talking...

Closing his eyes maan closed the profile that was placed in front of him...

Geet Handa... that's what written on the profile... her name...still it has the charm to get himself lost in those days ...those blissful encounters...those meetings where they used to spend hours and hours speaking about them...precisely she used to talk about her...

Her dreams... her ambition. Her life ...her career... her..her and her... But where was he... he was never given any place in her life...she was just lost in herself...

Still the same... But he failed to notice a vast change that now accompanies her...

He has decided to appoint her as designer... she is skilled ..experienced... that too from his rivals... and moreover willing to join here... join KHURANAs...

Did she ever knew that the place belongs to me...

MAAN was having his own set of doubts...his mind was having conflicting emotions... She was there his one and only love... Though she had given him the worst pain... The pain of losing trust ..the pain of betrayal...but still he loves her with all his heart and soul... And maybe still having some sort of hidden feelings for her...

With so much confusion and anxiety...MAAN signed the appointment letter... And called his secretary to give GEET the same...

maan: ( to his secretary) give this file to the candidate and tell her to join the office tomorrow nine am sharp...

maan...MAAN Singh KHURANA... He is the only and sole owner of his own built CONSTRUCTION FIRM... now holding more than ten branches all over india...well his hard work did pay off... not that he was not from a rich or influential family but MAAN always believed in proving himself... It did take him years...yes, five years to come here to this position... to hold a life which all will admire... but when you are behind something and wants that at any cost then you tend to lose yourself...

MAAN closed his eyes and leaned on the chair... when he went into the memory lane which made him lost in the business empire that he is holding today in his hands...

Everyone says ...it's your hard work... some says it's your dedication... other says it's your luck... but I know who is behind my success...

MAAN opened his eyes and opened his eyes...still he doesn't need anything to remember her a small smile played on his lips... Like always she is the only one who could make him lost himself in her...

MAAN: it's you geet... It's you... I won't say I didn't hate you... I hated you...I hated you with my life ... you left me just saying its all over... it was difficult the worst phase of my life but still I had faced it so much courage and hatred... But that was not the hatred GEET...

That was also my love...

And still, you are my love...

I will love you til I will know the meaning of love ... And won't even ask you the reason why you left...

~^~^~^~^~^

will post the concluding part of the response will be good

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's always treat to read Maan Geet ,
Love or hate but Maan just can't ignore Geet , looks like in this story Geet is back to maan after dumping him once
Looking forward to next part
Thank you for writing this .
Edited by ffreader1 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Splendidly written
Why Geet left him
Was she forced by the families
Await your conclusion
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Splendidly written
Whatvwas the reason for Geet dumping him
Was she forced by the families
Looking forward to your conclusion

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Posted: 6 years ago
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OMG...WHAT DESCRIPTION...I ALWAYS LOVE MAAN HOLDING SUCH LOVE FOR GEET ...LOVE AND ONLY LOVE...ITS GREAT...I M SURE THERE IS OTHER SIDE TOO...WAITING
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congratulations on your new OS

Maan and Geet was in love with each other in past
but it seems she had broken the relation causing Maan deep
pain and agony .
now years later he is well established in business and Geet Handa applies
for a job at his company
perhaps she is unware that he owns the company
Maan still loves Geet but I wonder will he ever get his love back

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Posted: 6 years ago
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These days I'm fortunate whenever I log on IF

I get to read something by you
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Posted: 6 years ago
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congrats
interesting

geet left maan hurting him but he still love her
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on this new OS, Suhaaana...👏

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