MG OS: WAITING FOR YOU || FINAL PART PG 5 APRIL 13th

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Part 1

I loved the way you started this OS...truely said...Hearts can never express their pain and agony...

Maan seems to be in a lot of pain because of Geet...was it really a betrayal or was it a misunderstanding between the two? Eager to find that out...

I am guessing Geet doesn't know that she has applied to work for Maan...

My heart went out to Maan...he still loves Geet the same...

But it was nice how he built his empire on his own...

Even after enduring so much pain at the hands of Geet, he still sees her as the inspiration behind his success...deep love that is...

The fact that he decided not to question her as to why she left was beautiful...

Nice one...

Edited by sahibasharma - 6 years ago

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

I hope you continue this one soon...😃

Would want to know the reason behind Geet's actions...

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Sudha

@babelicious

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Very interesting! Maan is the victim here a concept which is not very used ... looking forward to the next. Wondering what made Geet behave like that in the past and what her condition is right now

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Prabh

@MomiArti

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Superb part.geet leave maan but he still love her she joining maan compney.maan try to hate her but not fully succesful.wanting know the reason behind geet leaveing maan.

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lathasathya

@lathasathya

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Nice OS waiting for to know more about their padt. Why geet left maan.

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Mkd

@mkd.70

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Nice os

Waiting for remaining part

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Last line broke my heart but made me happy too

He still loves her even when he betrayed him

But I want to read Geet's side before judging her badly

She left but why now want to join him

She left when he was in bad shape can't see her as gold digger

There must be some reason

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 6 years ago

#18

Congrats on the OS!

thanks for the pm!

Fabulous update! greatly written!

feeling for Maan! did Geet really play with his feelings? eager to know why she left?

glad that Maan is now successful! wow he appointed Geet, does she know he is the owner?

at least Geet inspired Maan to succeed!

Maan still loves Geet!

waiting for Maan and Geet to meet!

continue soon

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preetidhawan

@preetidhawan

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#19

Nice Update

Geet after leaving Maan in the past again entering in his life and Maan again lost in her thoughts, he is still in love with her, eagerly waiting for Maaneet,s face off after a long time of 5 years and why he left him