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Posted: 6 years ago
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~what heart desires~

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"Kya hua hai tujhe, aisa chehra kyun bana rakha hai jaise aaj hi tujhe suli pe chadane wale hai, said a man in his early twenties. He was standing next to his friend who was looking like he was going to be dead in few minutes. Looking into the wide space he was appearing like he was trying to fulfil his last wish.

The man in question turned and leaned on the bonnet of his car and held his head with both of his hands before throwing something to his two best friends. They just grabbed what seemed like two envelopes and opened to find two photographs. His friend looked at the girl and remarked. "dekhne me toh achi lag rahi hai , kon hai ye, aur tu iski photo lekar kyun ghum raha hai. The other friend opened the second envelope to find one more photo and that too of an equally beautiful girl and showed It to his friend. "bhai kya manjra hai ? Ye ladkiyon ki photo collect karne ka shauk kabse chad gaya tujhe? said karan, his second friend while Arjun was still holding the photograph and gazing at the picture.

"tu ise dekhna band karega arjun, I am already tired of this shit and now I am feeling like a football jise sab apne court me laana chahte hai, exclaimed a hyper Maan. He was the only heir of the Khurana's post his parents' divorce and their remarriage but Maan was the one who was affected most with their decisions and now he was again in the middle of the ground where he was given an impossible task to meet the prospective bride of his father and his mother's choice.

"Acha theek hai gussa mat kar lekin ye toh bata kon hai ye ladki aur kya karti hai , asked Arjun as he was finally out of his gazing session and asked maan.

"Karan tu ise chup karwa, yahan meri life kisi basketball court se kam nahi hai aur ye hai jise iss photo ki padi hai, maan snapped. Karan signaled Arjun to be quiet and act according to the situation. The three had been together since childhood and knew Maan well. For maan, they were like his brothers and they were only ones who could make him forget all his worried amidst all his problems.

'Maan, yaar agar tu batayega nahi toh hame kaise pata chalega problem kya hai. Tu toh London gaya tha na aur kal aane wale tha phir kya hua itna jaldi kaise aa gaya aur aisa kya hua jisse tera mood itna karab ho gaya ', said karan calmly. Maan took the pictures from his friend's hands and showed them.

"ye, ladki hai.. Wait let me see the name, maan saw her name in the backside of the photograph where the details were written and told them.Sunaina, jisse dad chahte hai ki mein milun aur ye, he again looked at the other photograph and told them,ye hai natasha jisse meri mom chahti hai mein milun, maan told them.

Haan bhai toh isme kya hai mille na dono se kitni sundar toh hai, tujhe na pasand ho toh hamari setting karwa diyo, said arjun again only to get an intense glare from maan.

"Shadi ke liye milun, you fool. Mere parents ko koi middle ground nai mila isliye ab wo aise chahte hai ye prove karna ki mein kiske jyada close hun. Yaar, kabhi kabhi toh mujhe aisa lagta hai, mere parents apne so called partners ke saath kyun nahi khush reh sakte. Mere piche kyun pade rehte hai. I mean, except making my childhood a mess, a middle ground of their problems, they haven't done anything that could have benefit me and now this. You know what Arjun, I am damn lucky, people only have one mother and father to fuss over and here I am having two set of parents. The parents who wants to show the world that Maan singh Khurana is their son aur tumhe maze ki baat pata hai kya hai, mere step parents isme mere parents ko rokte tak nahi hai, I have a rotten luck that they also support my mom and dad. Maan's words were very true, Arjun and Karan had seen maan like this, if it was not for his dadima and Dadaji, Maan would have a really tough childhood.

Tu tension mat le aur ye bata dadaji ko pata hai ye baat, ab toh wo hi tujhe bacha sakte hai, tere dad teri mom ki nai sunenge aur teri mom tere dad ki, we all know that they will try to prove that whatever they have thought is the best for you but Dadaji will not tolerate their this behavior with you. aur maan dekha jaye toh teri life hai aur jin circumstances me tere parents ka divorce hua tha , I don't think they have any right to choose what is best for you. You remember your days in hostel, how Dadaji disowned his son, for his treatment to you and how he named you his heir. I am sure that he will not like your parents meddling in your life, said karan as he took the photographs from maan and kept them with him. They took maan from there and tried to calm him. They knew that maan had been busy in KC as he directly went to the office without taking any rest, so they took him to their favorite place to relax.

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Next: ek baat bata kisi na kisi se toh shadi karni hai na tujhe, said arjun as his words earned him a glare from maan

Are, meri baat toh sun, in dono ladkiyon ki baat nai kar raha, as arjun tried to pacify maan..

Shadi karni hai, lekin ainsi ladki se nai, jise life me sirf MSK ki biwi banne me interest ho, ya sirf jiske me bills hi pay karta rahun..

Theek hai, aisi se nahi karni, toh ye bhi pata hoga kisse karni hai, dekh bhai agar apni chalani hai toh ladki bata aur introduce karwa dadima Dadaji se..

Ladki toh hai, par mujhe bhaav nahi degi..

Aisi konsi ladki hai jo MSK toh bhaav nahi degi.. said a confused karan

Geet... Geet Handa,...

Edited by suhaaana - 6 years ago
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Congrats for the new story Suhaana.

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congrats for new story
superb start
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

superb start


Thanks Aparna di
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Congratulation for new story
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Congratulations on your Drabble


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Maan is in the middle of his parents ego
and its surprising that even their new spouses are supporting their decisions
now its only his Daadima and Dadaji that can truly chose the best for him
I like his friends Arjun and Karan
so Geet Handa perhaps is not interested in Maan
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the Drabble Suhana! thanks for posting! 😃
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fascinating update! superbly written! feeling for Maan! can understand him! his parents do not care about him! sad that they just impose on Maan! his anger is justified!

at least Maan has his dadaji and dadima! glad he confided in his friends!

Karan and Arjun are wonderful friends!

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