FF: We make them one part:8 pg 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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*I was bored n was feelin like writin this.



It was winter and 7:30 p.m. when Pari finished writing. The wind was blowing in the dark sky, which was full of beautiful stars shining down on her. She had long black hair, beautiful chocolate eyes both like her mother, but her smile, her smile was that of her father. She was wearing a pink top and pink pajama pants with little stars on them. She looked up at the stars and smiled the second that she finished writing in her Dairy.

"And thank you Daksh masa thank you. I miss you a lot masa, I wish that you were still here to tell me stories of you and masi, to tell me that I am ypur little princess, to tell me how Di changed your life of how you wished for a child and got one threw Di, about all that you and Di did, but mostly I miss you telling me that after Di was gone you got another beautiful gift me, jut like after losing masi you got Di."

In the other side of the world in Mumbai, India a young woman in a pink dress, was writing in her own diary.



Ganga got up and looked out of her window, the sun was shining at her. She had short black hair, with brow eyes just like her dad, but her smile was just like her mom's, with the two dimples on each cheek.

"Thanks to you, thank you Meera aunty thanks for being here for me when mom wasn't and giving me love like I was your own child. I miss you a lot.

Ganga wiped her eyes and want out of her room to wake-up her dad.

*Please comment.

Part 2= pg 2
Part 3= pg 3
Note 1= pg 4
Part 4= pg 4
Part 5= pg 6
Note 2= pg 7
Part 6= pg 7
Part 7= pg 8
Part 8= pg 10
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Sheena_Row thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mitu darling, you have started a new fic...cool!

So are Pari and Ganga the same? IT seemed like Pari is the kid that was born with JB reunion for Ganga, but I could be wrong. What happened to Bani, did she pick up and leave? 😕 😕 That idiot mother! 😡 😡

Anyways, I like your story from the perspective of the little girl conceived for Ganga...Please continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mituuuu jaaannn...🤗..u started a FF??😲 n didnt tell me??

hayee..chal isshh kkkk😃

awwwieee...Pari n Gangaa....i think they are sisters??🤔😃...hayeee

niceee start Mitssss...continue soon😛

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello.. mitu mommy..
what is this jaan?? dont even tell me.. that u started another ff..
that is not cool u no.
btw.. i am so sorrie.. that.. i left.. from MSN.. the other day..
it is just that.. my internet.. was acting up.
.
anyways..
aww.. that is a great start.
mitu jaan.
aww.. what is this.. why are.. pari and ganga.. seperated.. that is not cool at all

continue soon..
now i have a reason.. to u bug.. hehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mitu, you started an ff, and you didn't tell me 😭 😭 😭

You like the name Pari, you always use this name in all of your ffs.

Love the diary entry of both Ganga and Pari.

Why did Bani leave with Pari, when Ganga needed her and she was only six. What kind of mother is she?😡 😡 😡

Meera also left the walia mansion.

I wonder if Pari is born out of the wedlock?

So Pari is close to her mom, and Ganga is close to her dad 😳 😳 😳

Please write soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start👏
loved the intro of both pari and ganga 👏 👏
y did bani left ganga......
cont. soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mitu rani
madam update then i will update 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mit darlin.
why havent u updated.. yet.
i thought u said.. u will..
after i do it..
this is not cool
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mitu I love the idea of two girls...in two parts of the world, putting their thoughts down in the diary. Seems both of them have loved someone they loved so much...do continue... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2:

Ganga entered her daddy room. It had six picture frames with things written on the bottom of them. One of them was on top of the other five. On it was a picture of an angel and on the bottom of it were the words, "Baby Krishna," the baby that made Jai and Bani one, but was never brought to the world. On the other five starting from the left the first was a picture of a boy, who looked just like Pushkar, that same smile, nose, eyes, hair, and even ears. On the bottom of it was written Veer.
Veer was really the son of Pushkar and Pia. After Bani left Pushkar found out that Veer was his son and he wanted him back. Jai couldn't take a son away from his father, so he let Pushkar have him. Veer is really close with Pushkar and still goes to visit "Jai Papa." The surprise is that after coming to know Veer is his son he took Pia back in with him. Since, then he, Pia, and Veer have been called the prefect family with Aryan in the picture to.
Aryan was PP's second son who they had a year after they got back together. Veer loved his little brother a lot, Pia became a great mother to both of her sons, an amazing wife to her husband Pushkar, and a great Sali to Jai. She has everything, but Bani with her, which she is the reason she got close to Ganga. She saw her sister in her and by being there for Ganga she knew that her sister would be happy. The only thing that Pia was waiting for is her daughter to be born, who Pushkar and she decided to name Rani. Who would according to Pushkar rule the house. Rani's brother to want her to be born, so that they can have another sister to bug and protect.
Back to Jai's room:
The next picture was of a boy who looked just like JW; the boy was Atharva, written on the bottom was Atharva and right next to him was a picture of a girl who looked just like Bani that girl was Krishna and on the bottom was the name of her Krishna.
After Bani left Jai found out that Jigs had really locked the twins in that outhouse along with another person. AW and KW came to know that their parents weren't together and asked Jai to stand them away to boarding school. Which is the reason Jai gave more attention to Ganga, that and because she was the youngest of them three. Ganga talked to her brother and sister, but phone isn't that good, so without them she became close to Jai who knew about everything.
Back to Jai's room:
The next picture was of Ganga with Ganga written on the bottom. The next frame there was nothing on it, nor was anything written on the bottom of it.
Before Jai found out about the twins he got a note saying that they took bone-marrow (got a test on this) from a little baby. Jai knew that that baby was indeed his baby. He took Ganga to the doctors hoping that he would meet to baby, but the doctors said the baby left with the mother and that they gave the bone-marrow. Jai was sad that he couldn't meet his child, until this day he still wonders if the baby's doing well, what's the name, if the baby is a boy or girl. He didn't ask the doctor then, as he was there for Ganga at the time.
Back to Jai's room:
Ganga made her way to her dad's bed where he was sleeping.
"So, still sleeping, huh, you just wait daddy."
Ganga got an idea and ran to the bathroom where she filled a bucket of water. She came out with it and was about to throw it on Jai, when she heard a voice.
"Ganga, don't you dare baby."
"Daddy, how did you know?"
Jai got up (he looked the same, but only without the white, as Ganga made him color his hair).
"I know everything about you."
"Man."
"Ganga, you're becoming naughtier by the daddy."
"Daddy, come on get up."
"Ok, ok I am."
"Good."
With that said and done Ganga walked out of the room and went down-stairs.

In the other side of the world Pari came down-stairs to eat her dinner as it was 8 p.m. her mom was down there heating-up the food.
"Mom, I am hungry."
Bani comes out with a pink top (it has to be pink, it's the best color) and jeans (would make it a skirt, but its cold).
Both sit to have their dinner.
"Mom, how was your day?"
"Busy, but I won the case, pretty soon you will get everything you want."
Bani came to the USA with the help of Daksh, after JW gave him back all of his things that he took. There she had Pari, brought her back to India to gave bone-marrow and came back to USA. After years, she and Pari talked and they decided that Bani should go back to college. She went and this very day she won her first case.
Daksh who had everything once again gave all of it back to his family and came to live with Bani helping her there Pari, until he passed away on Jan. 18, 2008.
Back to Bani's house:
"Mom we have to do something."
Bani reminder that call she got.
"Hello."
"Hello, Mrs. Waila can you come to India and fight a case for us?"
"But, why me?"
"We heard you are new, but won your first case."
"Ok."
Back to Bani's house:
"Pari I need to go to India for a case, you should come with me."
"India, but I never been there mom, I don't really know how to behave there."
Bani laughed, "Crazy act yourself."
"Ok, then."
"How was school?"
"Fine, school's boring."
Bani laughed, "What's with you kids and school?"
"It's boring."

In two days Bani came to India with Pari, but their case started on the following week. However, Bani wanted to have her daughter's birthday there in India. She took her to a get restaurant where in the next room which was a hall was a party going on. The party was for the birthday of Mr. Jai Waila.
Pari wanted to go to the bathroom, so she told Bani that she will be right back, just then JW got out of his hall room on his cell phone and banged into Pari.

Guys enjoy. Please comment. Sorry, was busy, so don't mind the mis-takes, finish this part really fast.

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