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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
hey mit.. great part hun.. awwwnnnn.. so both pari and ganga noe the truth... continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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finally they know each other that they are sibligs!! great part.. please update soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww mit.
that was sad..
aww pari defending.. her mom..
so cute.

continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mitu gr8 ff
now plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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If I dont get lazy 2day will try 2 update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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*Part 6

This part is written 4 my wonderful Di, jiju, n their little boys, Vik n DJ.

At the hospital all three girls didn't say a word for wat seemed 2 b like 30 mins. Until Krishna being the oldest out of the three girls called Atharva and told him to bring Veer and get to the hospital.
K: Hello, Atharva
A: Wat, is it y r u callin me at this time, I was havin a great dream of meri Priya
K: Wat, who's Priya, did u find some1 finally?
A: Man, I have been, she is the prettiest person out there, she's prefect
K: Wat even more then me
A: Much better then u
K: Wat, I hate u
A: Thanks. I hate u to
K: Wait, how about Ganga?
A: Nahi, Priya n Gee r both same to same
K: N not me? How rude? I hate u!
A: Sorry, the fact hurts
K: So, 2 u ur sweet sister Gee n ur Priya r both the most prettiest?
A: Yes, my jaan Priya and meri sweet baby sister r really pretty, but I didn't yes they were the prettiest
K: Then who is the prettiest person 2 u?
A: That is the person who will b the prettiest 4ever n no 1 will b prettier
K: Wow, ur in love with her a lot

Ganga who heard Di say that took the phone turned on the speaker n screamed
G: Bhaiya ur in love? With who? U did even tell me, crin 4 fake
A: Man Krishna ur, so loud
KG: no tell us now
A: Who do u both think I would b talkin about? The most beautiful person is this world their r only three
K: Now theres three
A: Would u just listen 2 me?
K: Sorry, yes tell me
A: Well it's my sweet baby sister my Gee, meri beautiful twin sister Krishu, n the person that gave us all life our beautiful mother

Both girls now had tears in their eyes and now Pari who was listening to both her sisters n her brother to had tears in her eyes, but no 1 saw that.
K: Ur a wonderful brother, I love u

Atharva who knew that both of his sister r crin knew he had 2 do something 2 make them both happier, but 4 some odd reason he felt that some1 that is really close to him was also crin a lot, but he couldn't put a finger on it on who it is
A: Now u say u love me, first its u hate me, u need 2 make up ur mind child

Krishna n Ganga both laughed at their brother
G: Bro let it b shes confused
A: I know she is the du*best person in our family
K: Hey, both of u stop it that's y I was the top one is all my grades and became a lawyer at age 21 right?
A: No, u just cheated
K: Wat, no I didn't, now will u get here b4 I hurt u?
A: Then u will have 2 b a lawyer 2 urself
K: Wat y?
A: Cause I won't let u get away with it, I will sue u
K: Wat, u would do that?
A: Man, c ur book smart not street, btw turn around
K: Y turn?
A: Well then u will c that Gee is hugin Veer n I m standin behind u
K: Really stop liein ur still in ur bed

Atharva grabs Krishnas hands n turns her around.
K: Wat the n she looks up
A: Hi, now do u believe me?
K: Hehehe, yea I do
A: Good now wat was it?
K: O, wait n she hugs Veer, hey bhaiya wats up (Veer is some months older then KW n AW, so she calls him that, but AW doesn't)
V: Nothin much, our brother dearest is really mean to u na?
K: I know
V: Don't worry these two r 2gether n we both r 2gether right?
K: Right
G: O, look bhaiya they both found a partner in each other
A: I know, I m, so scared
V: Atharva bas, Krishna y did u wake me up this really?
K: O, sorry look there

Both boys looked up to c Pari who had fallen asleep sittin.
A: Look at who, dad's little friend?
V: Jai dad has friends?
K: Hey, don't make fun of dad, u know he has friends
V: Chill just playin
K: Better b
A: Yea, turnin 2 Ganga n their a team?
G: I know right
K: Enough
A: Wat about her, hey I lied
K: About wat?
A: I say no 1 could b prettier, or just as pretty then mom or my sister's, but shes just as pretty as u three
K: O, then u will b happy 2 learn u didn't lie
A: Wat, yes I did, shes like dad's new little friend
K: No, u didn't lie
A: Wat r u on about?
K: Atharva, u said no 1 is prettier or as pretty as ur mom n sisters right?
A: Yes, I did, but now I lied cause shes pretty
K: No, that's the thin u didn't lie
A: Wat?
K: Do u remember Ganga had cancer dad told us n he told us that we have a sibling out there with mom?
A: Yea, but wat does that… Atharva realized wat his twin sister now meant
A: She's our sis…
K: Yes, shes our baby sister, mom n dad's youngest child, the one that helped Ganga get better
A: So, I didn't lie
K: No
V: Wow, she is really pretty, just like mom
A: I know she really is
K: Ok, now the thin is mom is here 2
AV: Wat, where I want 2 meet her
K: Chill, u'll get her up n moms inside there
A: Wat, is mom ok, wat happened 2 her?
K: Atharva chill don't u remember Pari said that her older sister was havin a baby?
A: O, yea, wait, so mom got married 2 some1 who had an older daughter?
K: No, Atharva
A: Stop yellin at me it's 2 much info as it is
K: Sorry, no remember b4 u n me mom had a child
A: Yea, but she mis…
K: No, that's the thin she didn't (Pari had told them this 2) n Krishna tells them the whole story
V: So, shes really alive?
K: Yes
A: I m a mamu?
K: Not 4 one child, but two
A: Two, Di had twins like u n me?
K: No, she had an older son, his name is Jai, remember the boy that came runnin 2 where we were?
A: O, him, his, so cute
K: I know he looks just like dad
A: His really cute, he looks like me, not dad
K: O, whatever
V: U both look the same there's no difference

Then both boys move to where Pari was sleepin n Atharva touchs her face, wat makes her jump
P: Who r u?
A: Sorry
P: U look like my friend, r u his son
A: Yes, n their pointin 2 the girls brother which means ur brother
V: I m ur mom's sisters son Veer
P: I remember mom told me about u, rnt u also dad's son?
V: No the DNA reports said I m my dad's son his mom's husband Pushkar
P: O, ok
A: Ur really pretty
P: R u sayin that 2 me cause I m ur sister
K: No, he said it b4 he found out
P: O, ok

Just that Jai jr. runs out to Pari
J: Masi, mommy, daddy, nani sleep
Pari: She carried him; do u mean that they all went 2 sleep?
J: Yes, I say
P: Sorry
J: It, k
P: Ok, then y r u awake?
J: I up
P: U just woke up
J: I say
P: Sorry, I m 2 tired n this Mamta Di isn't even here 2 tell me I can go in and c ur baby sister n Di
A: If, ur tired u can sleep
P: No, thank u, I will take care of him
A: U look mad tired
P: Ok, fine here u go, Jai this is ur mom n my brother, ur mama
J: Huh
P: Like u r a brother 2 Anjali
A: Her names Anjali?
P: Yea, jiju named her
A: Awwwwwwwwww, I will spoil her
K: Di, will most like yell at u
P: No, she wouldn't, well may cause sometime she does cause I spoil Jai a lot

After some chit chat all the of them started 2 like each other more n started 2 make a relationship with each other. Jai jr. was havin a lot of fun as he was allow 2 stay up n his darling mamu's both of them were callin places 2 get him this n that. Mamta that come n told Pari that she can go in.
P: Ur tellin me now? Where did u go? I wanted 2 go in since a long time
M: Geez, sorry Di came over here 2 vistin me with the little 1's n jiju
P: Wat n u didn't even tell me, ur dead
M: Chill, look shes still here

Mamta's sister lives in America with her husband and three children, but she had come over n decided 2 go visit Mamta at work.
P: Di n she hugs her
Shobha Di: Hey, Pari wat's up, hows Kushi doin n the little 1?
P: Like how do I know ur darling sister didn't let me in
SD: Mamta ur mean
Sunny jiju: Hey don't talk 2 my Sali ji like that
SD: Watever
Vik: SS's elder son n the studious one masi r u du*b?
M: Wat?
V: Will ur a doctor and u should have known that u have a patient here waitin n u 4get?
M: Di, ur son's bein mean 2 me
V: No, I m not, just tellin u the truth
M: Wow
DJ: He is SS's younger son n the funny 1, u all r odd people
M: Wat?
DJ: Ur fightin n we r in a hospital, Hehehe, funny stuff
Every1: Laughted cause of DJ's comment
DJ: Wat r we standin here 2?
SD: Well we r goin 2 go meet Kushi soon
DJ: O, masi y?
SD: She got a baby
DJ: O, so that's y, is it a girl or boy
P: Girl
DJ: O, like u
P: Yes, like me
DJ: Like, Diya 2 (Diya is SS's youngest child she is three n her parents little princess)(Di surprise 4 u)
P: Yes, like Diya 2
DJ: O, so masi n masa will spoil her like mom n dad spoil Diya
P: Well, mostly I think her mama's will do that
M: Mama who?
P: Tells them everythin
M: Wow, missed a lot, how about we all go in n meet them?

Every1 goes in 2 visits Kushi Anjali, Bani n Rohit.

*Please comment. Sorry was late. I m lazy.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mitu Darling:

Thank you very much and I am really, really humbled that you have included me in your FF.

Now I have three bachhe...way cool! Always wanted a girl, I have semi-adopted three of my nieces...they spend all their weekends with me!! We go to the movies, shopping etc. They are about your age..(ranging from 16,18,19)

Diya was my favorite, I so miss seeing her on the serial. I loved her.

I loved the update, all the teasing and Atharva is very sweet to his sisters and mother. I hope Pari will be included soon in the family circle...

Love,
-- Di
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Mitu my jaan gr8 part
Plz cont soon
moonlitnight thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
aww Mitdi
thats sooo sweet
all the Walia kids are togather
gr8 part 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Mit darlin..

aww i loved that update.. it was so cute..

finally.. all the kids are together.. so cute.. A is just too cute.. love him.. mwah..

Aww pari and jai jr. chem is awesome.. that reminds me of my niece..

Shobu di.. nice entry.. hehe.. aww.. three bacchas.. hehe so cute..

aww DJ is cute.. shobu di.. and.. aww Vik.. is cute.. too..

and Diya.. aww..

continue soon please mit

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