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kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
great part.............awwwwwwww that was sooo cute........hope bani will soo know that krishna and atharva r not dead........will be waiting for next part
plzzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
oh.. what a place to stop!!!! can't wait to know what comes next.. update soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
atlast caught up *phew*
omg!!! its a gr8888 story!!!!
loved to see all the kids alive
wait a min. Daksh n Meera died on the same day. chakkar kya hai???
omg!!!! why did u stop there??????
plzzz cont sooooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
great update!! it's good that now at least krishna and ganga know that pari is their sister!! update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
finally i read it!!! it was really good!!! when r u gonna update???? Please update soon!!!! Well now would be nice unless if u r busy!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Guys will try 2 update, but the thin is I m the laziest person.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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*Part 5
Note: DM=Daksh Meera
D= Daksh
M= Meera
DMP= Daksh Meera Pari
G= Ganga
P= Pari
Meera knows about Pari



Ganga, "Pari that means that ur m……………………"

………………………………………………………………………………………………

Ganga: Wait one minute didn't u have a Dak… I ur life?
Pari who's a little confused: Daksh… how do u know about D? I mean 2 say Daksh masa?
Ganga who gave out a little laugh: How do I know? I mean, I meet him I think. His was a family friend
Pari: D was a friend of ur family really?
Ganga: Yes, I thought I knew u (in her mind man y m I liein 2 my baby sister?)
Pari: Wow, that's really cool
Ganga: Yea, is he here?
Pari who became sad looked down n started 2 have tears rollin down her face
Pari: I m sorry… he died in January in an accident
Ganga who got the biggest shock: Wat! No! How?
Pari began to tell the girls wat had happened

………………………………………………………………………………………………

Flack back to Jan. 17, 2008 night:

A lady ran in2 the hands of a muscular n handsome mans hands

L: I really missed u baby
M: Jaan, I really missed u too kissin the lady on her lips that were callin to him

Just then a young girl came up 2 both of them n covered her eyes
G: Ewwwwwwwwww, once u both r done I m get 2 know who my new aunty is goin 2 b

The man turned to the girl and he was no one other then Daksh

D: Pari, the girl uncovered her eyes
D: Pari, wat is this can't I b with her 4 sometime alone in peace
P: Wat? I m not givin u peace, u don't wont me here? She starts 2 cry
The woman who was lookin: Daksh, y r u makin Bani's daughter cry? I told u that u rnt allow 2 do that. Ur bein, so mean look at the poor girl shes cryin.
D: But, Meera (the woman is now seen to b no one other then Meera) Jaan I didn't mean it
Pari: Wow, u know mamma? Y? D not fair she knows mom b4 I know her.
D: Pari it's not like that it's just that Bani n Meera were friends b4 u were born
P: Wow, that's some time back

The next day was the day that DM were waitin 4 cause this was the day that they were goin 2 marry each other in court, but still. Bani n Pari where both there to c them. After, it was done Bani had 2 go, so she asked DM 2 drop Pari off home. Then, she hugged all of them, she didn't know that would b the last hug she would b givin 2 her dare friends.

DMP went into the car Pari who wanted 2 sit in the front got 2 n Meera went n sit right behind of Daksh. Just after some minutes a car was drivin in speed n hit DMP's car in DM's side.

Bani got the call that there was an accident n she rushed off 2 the hospital where she was told that DM didn't make it n that her daughter Pari had some broken bones n cut, but would b alright. However, Pari once told about this blamed herself on wat had happened, even after Bani tellin her it was her fault.

Meera's family (Jai's) was told that Meera found some family there n that she was killin in the accident n that they had burned both of the bodies. Pari, who was like Daksh's child was told 2 b the last (wat they do). She did it all with her mother's help n now after 4 months she still is sad with wat happened, but she has started to move on.

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Back to hospital
Ganga: No, he was with Meera aunty.
Pari: U know Meera aunty 2?
G: Yes, I do cause she lived with me, I never got 2 say good bye 2 her, or b in her n D's weddin.
P: D?
G: Yes, ur D is my D she my mom's ur mom's sister's husband. Ur mother Bani is my mother Bani n ur the sister that gave me blood to save my life. She pointin 2 KW is Krishna Di n her brother is Atharva Bhaiya. They both were found alive after mom left me. Ur Di in there is my Di that mom n dad found out was died. My dad, ur friend is really ur father. U n Di were kept from dad n us.
Pari who got mad n shocked: Stop, it! My mom didn't leave u, but after dad found out that she did nothing wrong he couldn't take wat wrong he did with her n since he was with Meera aunty at the time mom didn't want 2 come in between of them both. I don't know y it didn't even work, but my mom didn't do anything wrong. She wanted 2 take u, but u loved dad a lot n she caused take u away from him again. She told ad that she would leave after she had me, but dad didn't want 2 take everythin away from mom, so he told her that she can stay there n have me there n then take me, or u with her, but she didn't want 2 take u away from the nice life u would get n nor could she think that u will b sad after she leaves, so she left only tellin dad that she will leave then without meetin u n that she will b back with me 2 help u.
G: How do u know all that?
P: Mom told me when I kept askin about dad.

*Comment please. Sorry its short, but did my best. Will try more afterwards.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

saving

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hmm....so that was the raaz of DM death

haila! Ganga thinks Bani left her alone?

plz cont sooooooooon

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
HalleNJ thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
my father, your father, my mum, your mum 😆 😆 Children stop discussing, bring your parents together and shoot them with questions 😆....please continue...
kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
great part........
hope sisters will sort out every thing soon and make our jai and bani to jb 😛..........will be waiting for next part.......
plzzz cont.soon

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