Avneil FF: Tum Mile (All Chapters) new chap at pg 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys I am uploading Tum Mile again!!!..


I wanted to write this chapter so wrote it.. tell me.. how is it..
Its short.. coz i have a mood off.. sorry..
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In the church...
Everyone is sitting on the benches, and are very happy. Today shweta is getting avni and neel married again but in a Christian way.
Avni is wearing a beautiful white gown and neel is in black suit.
Priest says "Do you consider him as your legal husband"
Avni says "I do"
Priest says "Do you consider her as your legal wife"
Before neel could answer.. his phone rings. He sees the caller ID .. picks up the call then runs away. While everyone shouts to call him back.
Avni is standing there perplexed. Tears are flowing from her eyes.
Neela notices avni and comes to her. Before she comes to her avni runs from the church.

AFTER 1 WEEK

Neel opens the door. Avni opens her eyes very slowly and looks at the surroundings.
Neel gets very happy.. and says "Avni" and he walks to her bed.
Avni looks at him and says "who are you"

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey.. guys i will try to make this story updates regularly.. if not regularly then most probably in 2-3 days.. enjoy.

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AFTER 1 WEEK

Neel opens the door. Avni opens her eyes very slowly and looks at the surroundings.
Neel gets very happy.. and says "Avni" and he walks to her bed.
Avni looks at him and says "who are you"
Neel gets shocked hearing those words from avni's mouth.
He thinks avni is messing with him, she is punishing him for leaving her in the middle of their marriage.
Neel smiles and says "Avni I"
Just then somebody opens the door and it turns out to be neela ma. She notices neel in the room first then she notices avni.
Neela gets happy and she runs to avni's bed. She rejoices "bacha you finally opened your eyes. I am so glad. You know how much worried i was for you
Avni says "ma don't worry.. see i am here in front of you"
Neela says "wait i will call the doctor"
Avni nods.
Neela turns to go out but stops in her steps as she notices neel about whom she has forgotten.
Neela says "what are you doing here ACP Neel Khanna. I think you can do your interrogation later"
Neel nods. He was thinking that avni will stop him but she didnt.
When neel and neela are about to go. Avni says " please stay here ma"
Neel again has thought that she will call out to him but again he got fail.
Neela stops and comes to her. And she sits on the chair next to her bed.
Avni asks "who was this man. And how does he knows about me"
Neela gets astonished hearing avni. She was thinking that avni is actually punishing neel by not talking to him. But this thing she didnt except.
Before neela could answer. Avni says "ma what happened.. ok leave this question and tell me whats tha plan.. i mean is it the same"
Neela gets confused and asks "what plan avni. What are you talking about"
Avni says "offo ma.. i am asking about our revenge plan"
Neela asks "from whom"
Avni says "ma from dayawanti mehta. Why are you behaving so weirdly. What happened. Previously you were so excited that we will destroy her and get our aman back then why are you asking what plan
Neela says "avni actually i get very stressed thats why and i go call the doctor
Avni nods and neela goes outside.
And tears starts to flow. Neel sees it and comes to her. He says "what happened ma"
When he is about to hug her she says "please mr khanna"
And neel withdraws his hands.
Just then doctor goes to check avni as neela informs him that avni has woken.
Then khanna family comes. Bebe asks neela "where is avni. Is she fine"
Neela says "yes"
Before they could have much talk. Doctor comes.
Neela says "doctor what happened to her"
Doctor says "Due to accident. She is suffering from amnesia. And has forgotten approximately 7 months memories. "
Doctor's words shocked everyone especially neel.
Neel asks "what. But how"
Doctor says " there was a head injury and because of it she might have suffered memory loss."
Prakash says "but we can make her recall the incidence"
And everyone's face lit at this idea. But there happiness was short lived as doctor said something unexpected.
Doctor says " yes but it can prove to be dangerous. Its better if she recalls it on her own without any help. Also dont give her any type of stress. Now i should leave i have to check other patients also. Excuse me"

Doctor goes.

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Hey guys.. hope you are doing good. As promised i updated it.. hope you like it.

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Neel gets shocked hearing doctor's words. It hurts him so much that he lost control over himself.

Neel says"I will make her recall me and my love. She cant forget me"

"Control yourself please don't worry she will remember you" shweta says and rubs her hand on his shoulder.

"No no i cant. How can she forget me and most importantly us" neel says

"Neel" prakash says and tries to stop neel.

"I am going and will talk to her. I am sure she will tell me that she is just punishing me. " neel says

"Neel" prakash says

Neel starts to move towards her room. Neela stops him.

She says "you are not going anywhere"

Neel says "Ma you are not understanding she is just pranking"

Neela says "No she is not and even if she is doing then also you are not going to her."

Neel begs "Ma please let me go"

Neela says "I said no. Till the time she is not forgiving you for your deeds you can't go near her. Have you forgotten this."

Neel says "No i haven't. But please for once let me go. I am sure she will forgive me"

He goes to the room. When he is about to pull the handle. Neela pulls him back and slaps him hard.

Neela says "Can't you understand this simple thing. You cant go near my daughter. You have already hurt her very much now i won't let you anymore"

Neel feels bad not for getting a slap but for not able to meet her. Only he knows how difficult was for him to just see her through the glass of the room. To go inside her room in the pretense of police work, for which neela ma prefered DD to go instead of him. He had just sneeked inside only few times. He just go and see her properly and returns. Because neela ma has forbidden him from meeting her daughter.

Prakash says "leave this for some time. Our main problem is what should we say to avni. What has happened in the past 7 months."

Neela says "We have to fabricate a story"

Neel folds his hands infront of neela and says "Neela ma please. Let me meet her"

Neela says "I said no"

Bebe says "Neela please. Let him. See his condition"

Neela says "Bebe i can't let my daughter get hurt anymore"

Neel says "I will never please ma"

Neela says "Don't make fake promises. I know why you left. Not just me, everyone knows. Juhi told us everything."

Neel says "what juhi"

Neela says "yes juhi she told" and neela tells juhi's story

Neel says "thats a lie, not everything but somethings and the way it is put is a false"

Everyone gasp
Neel then tells neela the actual reason.

Shweta says "Neela please you know why he done that right then please forgive him."

Neela says "But because of that only she is under this condition. How can i forget that"

Shweta says "Neela please forgive him "

Prakash says "Please i request. I will take responsibility."

Neela cuts and says "Last time you said that only"

Bebe says "Please neela trust us one last time and i assure you nothing bad will happen"

Neela says "Ok bebe. But last time"

Neel hugs her and says "Thank you so much neela ma"

Neela says "But this is my warning to you if even a single tear come in her eye"

Neel says "It wont i promise"

Prakash says "Neela what will you tell avni"

Neela says "I have a story."
Neela tells the story to everyone. And they finds it good.

Shweta says " I have a request please let her stay with us. Without her everything feels lonely"

Neela says "But i will come too"

Shweta says "You are most welcome."
She again tells the story with new additions.

Neela says "I will go and then will come to call you."

Shweta says "Okay"

Neela goes inside. Avni sees her and smile. Neela goes to sit next to avni.

Neela says "Avni how are you feeling"

Avni says "Better ma"

Neela says "Nice"

Avni asks "Ma what about dayawanti and ma i saw calendar and"

Neela cuts and says "Avni let me tell you. When we arrived in india then you had an accident and from past 7 months you were in coma"

Avni gasps "What"

Neela says "Yes and don't worry about dayawanti she is in jail, she confessed her crime and we got it shot. "

Avni asks "Aman"

Neela says "Yes amol is with us only. Avni actually he prefers his name to be amol."

Avni nods

Avni asks "And mehta mansion We got it right"

Neela says "Yes right. Actually when it was getting auctioned then my money was not sufficient so prakash helped me with money. And we both brought it and we all live together. "

Avni asks "Who is prakash"

Neela says "I made a new friend here shweta and he is her husband"

Avni says "Okay"

Neela says "Let me introduce them to you"

Avni nods. Neela goes outside and returns with many new faces.

Neela says "she is bebe shweta and prakash and he is neel their son." Neel gives her a big smile.

Avni says "Hey"

Bebe asks "How are you now"

Avni says "Better"

"You know now our house will be happy as you will come there." Shweta says

Nurse comes and says "now you should let her rest and in the evening you can take her."

Everyone nods and goes.

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Hey guys.. i am here with this update.. hope you like it.

Story so far: avni met with an accident and slips in coma. When she comes out of it, it was diagnosed that she is suffering from amnesia. Neela fabricates a story.
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In hospital (In evening)

Neela comes to her room and says "are you ready"

Avni nods.

Neela thinks 'today neel will go crazy after seeing her' and she smiles.

Avni asks "ma why are you smiling"

Neela says "i am seeing my doll cheerful thats why"

Avni smiles.

Avni is wearing a white crop top with pink colours with her favourite canvas shoes. She is wearing the kind of clothes she used to wear in Australia.

Avni asks "ma where are everyone"

Neela doesn't wanna lose the chance of teasing and says "everyone or someone special" and she winks at avni.

Avni says "special but who."

Neela continues on her teasing mode. But before she could say further.

Avni says "that neel, you think i am asking about him, really"

Neela says " whats the problem with neel."

Avni says "ma problem, he himself is a problem. Ma you know he is so annoying."

Neela asks "how do you know he is annoying. Have you talked to him"
Thinking that neel might have come to meet her inspite of her decision.

Avni says "no ma and i even don't want to meet him."

Neela says "okay. Now leave this. Are you ready to go?"

Avni says "yes"

Neela says "come".

When they are about to open the door, the door opens as prakash has come. He says "let's go. Everyone is waiting for you at home".

Avni and neela nods. And the three goes from there.

When they comes home. Bebe stops avni at the door and does her aarti. After that shweta takes her to dinning table. When she sits, neel comes running to the table. He is still in his formals.
Neel says "sorry guys. Due to an important case i got late" and he sits opposite to avni so that he could see her.

Shweta and neela serves food. All the dishes made are avni's favourite.

Neel says "what ma. Why did you made these dishes. You know my favourites then why these"
He said this deliberately.

Avni gets angry and says "whats your problem, why are you getting so jealous that shweta aunty made my favourite dish"

Neel thinks 'my 'just mess up with me and i will kill you' is back. Now our story will be much interesting'.

Neel says " okay so these your favourite. Nice."

Avni chooses to ignore this him. Neel is continuously staring avni and eating very slowly due to this .

Bebe notices this and thinks to pull his leg.

Bebe says "Tillu what are you doing, why there is so much food still left in your plate."

Avni laughs quietly and murmurs "So he is Tillu".

None heard her but neel made out what she is saying by reading her lips and he glares at her.

Avni says "Tillu answer bebe she is waiting" and she smirks.

Everyone laughs and neel glares her. But inside feels happy. He thinks "avni you will never change. Even after getting amnesia you didn't lose a chance to tease me by my nickname. Oh avni. Now it will be interesting to live our story again. You will also be my wild cat. Love you sweetheart.'

Bebe breaks his trails of thoughts and says "tillu say something."

Neel says "bebe the thing is. I dont like this dish. Thats why. Don't know how can people call these dishes there favourite" and smirks.

Avni gets angry and says " i don't know how people can say that bhindi, aloo ki sabji, dal makhni are not good. Weird stupid people". She said like she is saying in general.

Neel says "you called me weird and stupid"

Avni says "i didn't you yourself said tillu" and she laughs.

Neel says "its neel for you. "

Everyone is finding their fight amazing.

Shweta thinks 'they look so cute while they fight. I feel Deja vu.'

Neela thinks 'it looks like their love is on the way. Before also, their story started just like that'

Bebe thinks 'God bless my children. Hope they stay like this.'

Prakash thinks 'avni's memory will come soon if things go like this'.

Maddy thinks 'so cute'

Prakash says showing some fake anger 'stop it both of you. You are grown up but are behaving like kids"

Avni and neel said at the same time "she/he started it"

Prakash says "i don't care who started it. Stop this and finish your food"

Then everyone started having food. Later neela brings ice cream as desert.

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Precap

Neel says "i didn't know you liked me so much. Why behaving so rudely with me at the dinning table when you wanna come close to me later".

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How is it?? Sorry for this cliffhanger but what do you think is going on..
Hahaha... neel ... and.. avni.. i wont tell more here.. you will get to know later..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey guys.. how r u.. hope you all are doing good.. sorry for updating it this late... actually i was very very busy... plus i got hand injury so got late, then again got busy sorry
Now i will shut myself and let you read.. hope you like it..
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Then everyone started having food. When they finished, neela gets up to bring ice cream for desert.

Neela served everyone and sits. Everyone eats.

Neel winks at neela and says "finally there is something which is my favoutite" neela simles and avni looks at neel with wide open eyes, and disbelieve and shock is clearly visible on her face.

Neel haves another spoon of ice cream and says "so tasty my favotire ice cream"

Neela says "Even avni's favourite ice cream is butersotch"

Now it is neel's time to look at her in disbelieve, he says "not fair, you get this ice cream because its her favourite" and he pouts

And everyone laughs at neel's expression, this time even avni finds it cute.

After having ice cream, everyone gets up and goes. Neel and Prakash goes in the living room to have some talk, while neela, bebe, maddy and kareena goes to their room. Shweta takes avni to show her new room.

They comes near the room, avni sees another door and asks " whose room is this"

Shweta smiles and says "this is neel's room"

Avni nods.

Avni opens the door of her room and finds a very beautiful room, decorated with cute stuff, full of teddy bears and stuff toys.

Avni jumps and says "thank you so much aunty, this is just like my room back in Austrailia"

Shweta smiles and says "mention not" and she caress her cheek.

Shweta says "its late now sleep, if you need anything call me or your ma, even you can ask neel"

Avni nods and says "good night aunty"

Shweta says "good night" and she goes.

Avni goes inside her room and adorbles her room. While roaming around her room, she accidently hits her leg with a sharp edge of table and gets a scratch.

Avni says "wow great, now where is the antiseptic cream"

She tries to search around the room but fails to find any.

Avni thinks ' I think I have to go and get it from neel's room, no choice"

She goes out of her room and stands infront his room. She murmurs "you can do it, you can do it, you just have to knock and ask for antiseptic cream and done"

She takes deep breaths and murmurs "okay"

She knocks at the door, but no one opened the door. She sarcastically murmurs "great"

She pushes the door and goes inside. She finds no one in the room. She goes near the wind chimes.

She says "its so cute, also this room is so nice"

She goes near the balcony side side-table and suddenly something comes infront of her eyes which made a scream.

She screams "cockroach" , (Author's Note: the cockroach is really very big)

And she jumps on the bed and runs on it. She reaches the other side and jumps down. She finds that the cockroach is coming near her though it is really very far but still coming. So she jumps on the chair and then moves up to the table.

Sseing the cockroach she screams "don't come near me" but the coackroach didn't listen and slowly walks to the table.

Her focus is on the cockroach that's why she didn't notice neel opening the door and coming inside. Neel while coming to his room, heard some screams. He got tensed that why avni is scream and he hurridedly comes inside the room, only to find avni standing on his study table and looking at a cockroach (Author's Note: their rooms are in a different wing of the house, so no one can hear the scream or noises coming from rooms except from the ones who are near their rooms)

He thinks ' really cockroach, so you are screaming because of that small creature. You have almost given a heartatteck. Such a miss ajooba you are avni hats off.'

He starts to walk to the table and she is still busy with cockroach that she didn't notice him.

Seeing the cockroach advancing near the table and ultimately her. She takes steps back. Unknowingly that she is at the very end of the table, she takes a step back , such that half of her foot is on the table. She turns as neel shouts "avni". But it was too late she begins to fall, but she looks and finds herself falling on neel who has opened his arms so that he could catch her.

As soon as she fell in his arms, he loses his balance and falls back. With him on the floor and she on the top of him.

They remained in that position for some seconds, looking in each others eyes. Neel breaks the silence and says "i didn't know you liked me so much. Why behaving so rudely with me at the dinning table when you wanna come close to me later".

Avni gets angry and says "its nothing like that" and she separates herself from him and gets up. Neel sits up and asks "so whats brings you here other than me"

Avni chooses to answer first few words and ignore the last three words.

She says "antiseptic cream"

Neel gets alarmed but didn't show it. He gets ups and goes to the almirah, to get the first aid box.

Neel asks "where and how did you get hurt"

Avni says "I got my leg hit by a table"

Neel takes out antiseptic cream, and asks "where"

She shows him the scratch on her leg and he sits down next to her leg and applies the cream on the scratch.

Neel looks up and says "next time be careful"

Avni nods.
Neel gets up.
They keep looking in each others eyes. Just then neels phone rings which got them out of their world.
Neel sees the caller name and mentally curses the caller who is none other than DD and avni felt awkward thinking what she was doing.
Neel looks back at avni and she said "good night". She turns and runs out of the room before listening to neel.
After she was out, neel's face fell and he sadly says "good night miss ajooba"

Avni comes to her room and thinks 'why did i felt so good with neel. Why felt so comfortable'

Neel in his room, picks up his phone and says "what was so urgent DD that you couldn't wait for morning"

Neel says "WHAT??!!"

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Hey guys.. how r u.. hope you all are doing good.. sorry for updating it this late...

this chapter is dedicated to sami @Avlovesneil . happy birthday sweetie. hope you like my gift..

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Neel in his room, picks up his phone and says "what was so urgent DD that you couldn't wait till morning"

Neel says "WHAT??!!"

He angrily moves his hand over his hair. Neel asks "Are you sure"

Neel says "ok DD will talk to you tomorrow, good night"

Meanwhile in neela's room

Neela is standing near the window and is in deep thoughts.

*****FLASHBACK******

In the hospital

Neela says "Don't make fake promises. I know why you left. Not just me, everyone knows. Juhi told us everything."

Neel says "what juhi"

Neela says "yes juhi she told us "

*****SECOND FLASHBACK*****

In Khanna house

Everyone except neel is in the hall, crying for avni. They all the crying seeing the fate of their poor girl. Also, they are hell worried because of her disappearance.

Juhi comes to Khanna house with her wrist and forehead bandaged. DD has come with her till the gate only, then she asked him to leave as she can go all by herself.

Everyone sees juhi and bebe asked "what happened, why bandages around your forehead and wrist"

She smiles seeing the environment and ignore her question and instead asked "where is avni and why all of you are crying"

Prakash says "as avni has ran away after neel had left her on the alter in the middle of wedding"

Juhi says "oh really,"

Juhi murmurs to herself and says "great now it is even more easier for me to get neel"

But to her misfortune, Shweta heard her. She turns juhi and slaps her hard.

Everyone gasps.

Shweta shouts "I knew it that you will come in between them"

Juhi touches her slap mark and shouts "don't shout aunty, and by the way avni has come between me and neel, and it is good that she left."

This time bebe turns her and gives her a tight slap.

Bebe says "tell me what did you do "

Juhi says "so you what to know, so listen I called neel at the time of wedding and had asked him to choose between avni and me, reminding him of the fact that he is my husband and our daughter's real father. And also that if he will choose avni over me for his family's happiness then i will commit suicide. And he will live his whole life without his love, with the most hated person in his life. So without even thinking he came running to meet me at the suicide point and took me to hospital. He came for me, for his love. Finally he chose his love else you would have got him married to avni forcefully."

Neela gets up from the sofa and slaps juhi, and she says "how dare you"

Shweta drags juhi out of the house and says "don't come here again else"

*****END OF SECOND FLASHBACK*****

Neel says "thats a lie, not everything but many things and the way it is put is a false"

Everyone gasp

Neel then tells neela the actual reason.

Neel says "neela ma, DD had called me and asked me to come soon as juhi has attempted suicide and is in Ayesha ma's home. And she is calling my name and not opening door. She is asking about me, DD just gave me this message and asked me to come fast. Juhi, she has never called me. Also I have never married juhi and her daughter is not mine, its Vidyut's daughter. Also I love avni only. I know that its my fault and I should not have run like this, I should have atleast informed but ma, what could have I done ma. I just felt that saving a life is more important and in stress I couldn't think much. And I am sorry ma."

Shweta says "Neela please you know why he done that right then please forgive him."

Neela says "But because of that only she is under this condition. How can i forget that"

**END OF FLASHBACK***

Neela says "I could not have even thought that juhi can go to this lengthens and because of her I treated neel so badly. I thought that he cheated on my daughter and " and a tear escapes her eyes.

Suddenly she hears a knock on the door and she wipes off her tear and says "come in"

And she finds neel on the door, neela says "come neel what brings here at this hour"

Neel says "ma actually I want to tell you something"

Neela says "come sit and I also wanna say something"

Neel sits in the bed besides neela.

Neel says "you say first"

Neela says "actually neel I want to apologize "

Neel interrupts her and says "ma please don't apologize, I was at fault and I must be punished for it, and you did right by punishing me, so don't apologize"

Neela says "neel thank you so much for not getting angry with me, also what do you want to tell"

Neel says " yeah right I have to tell you something very important. ma actually DD called me and told me that avni's accident was planned and the mastermind was none other than, any guesses "

Neela says "Vidyut"

Neel says "no, another try"

Neela says "ragini pandit"

Neel says "no ma, it is juhi"

Neela gasps and says "juhi"

Neel says "yes ma juhi, I have never thought that her hatred will make her do this, I am sorry ma because me only she is in this condition"

Neela says "don't apologize neel, its not your fault, neel don't worry everything will be fine, and I think its late and you should sleep, we will discuss this tomorrow"

Neel says "yeah ma, you are right, good night"

Neela says "good night"

Neel gets up and goes.

When he comes in his room, he says "it feels so empty without you avni, even when you are back in this house, we cant sleep in the same room, or can we" neel smiles and runs out of his room. He goes to avni's room and finds her sleepy not so comfortably as there is a frown on her face.

Neel murmurs "I know why this frown is there, because I am not sleeping with you. Before also when we use to sleep separately you have this frown when you have nightmares "

Neel smiles and murmurs "even when you forgot me, you still remember my presence"

Neel goes and sleeps with her.

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hey guys, sorry for being this late, extremely very sorry.

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in avni's bedroom


The sun has wake up and its light has finally succeeded in entering in avni's room. The sunlight has found a little gap in between the curtains and it came in their room so to disturb the sleeping couple. Neel's eyes are getting irritated by the sunlight and it opens unwillingly. But the irritation soon disappears when he finds his beloved snuggled with him. He smiles and caress her hair.

Neel says, "I missed this so much" and he kisses her hair.

But suddenly a thought crosses his mind and he bends over avni to grab his phone which is on the bedside table. He looks at phone and sees the time.

Neel says "7 o clock, oh no, I could be sleeping till this late!, if avni finds me with her then I am dead"

Neel quickly but carefully pushes avni, as soon as Neel's embrace finishes, Neel notices a frown on avni's forehead.

Neel says "oh miss ajooba I never knew that my going a little far effect you so much "

He substitutes his place with a big teddy bear, Neel says "I hope this will give you some comfort" and jumps out of the bed.

He runs out of her room and goes in his room. He jumps on the bed and acts to sleep.

After some minutes, Shweta enters in Neel's room without knocking and finds Neel sleeping in between blankets.

Shweta comes inside and sits on his bed, she says "Neel wake up, I know you are not sleeping"

Listening to Shweta, Neel is bewildered, and he gets up instantly thinking 'how did she know'

Shweta says, "see I knew"

Neel says, "but how"

Shweta says "since avni was not here you won't be able to sleep, you used to act like you are sleeping. Unfortunately, you can't fool me"

Neel says "okay" thinking that Shweta didn't know about yesterday night's incident.

Shweta says, "but wait, you don't look like this every day, rather you look fresh today like you have finally slept peacefully"

Neel thinks that his mom will get to know everything, so he says, "mom what's the time" he looks at the clock and says, "oh its 7.15, I think I should get up else I will get late"

He jumps out of bed and goes to the almirah to get this towel.

Shweta says, "Neel I know everything"

Before Shweta could complete, Neel has rushes in the bathroom.

Shweta says, "oh this boy"

Shweta gets up and goes out of the room.

Meanwhile in avni's room

Neela knocks on the door, when she doesn't hear the response, neela opens the door and sees avni sleeping peacefully while cuddling with a teddy bear.

Neela goes to her and caress her hair and says, "good morning baby, get up now"

Avni slowly opens her eyes and says, "good morning" she gets up and hugs neela.

Neela says "I think you get a good sleep yesterday"

Avni says "yeah, this teddy bear is nice"

Neela nods while thinking "I know your teddy bear is Neel"

Avni says "what are you thinking"

Neela says "nothing"

Avni nods

Neela says "okay now get up and get ready, we will be waiting at the breakfast table"

Avni nods and gets up, she takes her towel and goes to take a shower.

At the breakfast table

All the elders are having breakfast, Neel comes in his khaki pant and khaki vest coat with a dark blue shirt, with sleeves rolled up.

Neel says, "good morning guys" and he sits.

After 5 mins avni comes, she is wearing a denim mini skirt with a white crop top, and a black leather jacket with black boots.

Seeing avni, Neel's mouth went dry, and it opens a bit.

Avni says "good morning guys"

Prakash murmurs to Neel "close your mouth else fly will come in" and laughs lightly embarrassing Neel.

Avni sits adjacent to Neel as there was no other sit left. All the elders smiled at each other as their plan worked.

Bebe says "avni have poha I made this especially for you"

Avni takes poha and haves it. Avni says "wow so yummy, just like Ayesha makes"

Neel thinks "its her recipe only stupid" and laughs

Avni sees him laughing and ask, "why are you laughing"

Neel says, "I was thinking how could anyone like poha"

Avni says "and you know what I am thinking, how could a Mumbai guy not like poha"

Neel says, "coz I am a Punjabi guy"

Avni rolls her eyes and Prakash says, "If I find you two fighting again then you will land in big trouble"

Avni and Neel say together "sorry uncle/dad"

Prakash says "okay"

After having breakfast, Neel and Prakash goes to their work, and others have their chit chat session.

Around 11 am (in hall)

Bebe comes to avni and says "avni come we will go to temple"

Avni says "yeah sure bebe, but why so suddenly, I mean"

Neela comes and says "bebe don't mind avni, actually she doesn't believe in god, so she hesitates in going to religious places like temple"

Avni says "yes exactly"

Bebe says "it's okay I understand but avni can accompany her grandmother to the temple, right?"

Avni smiles and says "of course bebe". Avni never expected that people will love her or will accept her, but now seeing this gesture of bebe and Khanna family she is feeling contented.

Avni thinks "I never thought even in my wildest dreams that I will get so much love and above it I never thought I would get a family who will give me immense love and care like I am theirs only"

Bebe caught her that she is trapped in web of thoughts and distracts her by saying "let's go"

Avni nods and says "yes bebe"

Neela smiles. Avni and bebe starts to walk towards the gate when suddenly bebe says "avni wait, you can't go like this"

Avni gets shocked hearing bebe and starts to think bad that even bebe has problem with her being illegitimate. She gets dishearten that moment.

Bebe says "you have to change these clothes and wear something long"

Avni says "what" it meant to be stay inside but that word came out loud which shocked bebe.

Bebe says "what happened, have I said something wrong"

Avni realises what she has done and says, "oh no, you haven't done anything bad, actually I thought you might have problem with something else, sorry my fault, don't worry I will change these"

Bebe nods, and avni turns to go, she walks a few steps and again turns back.

She says "bebe"

Bebe says, "what happened bacha"

Avni says "I just have these types of clothes, what to do"

Shweta comes and says, "no worries, I knew that, so I have brought you these clothes, go wear"

Avni says "thank you"

And she runs to her room to change.

In the hall

Bebe asks "Shweta you are coming right?"

Shweta says "of course bebe, I am coming I can't let avni go without protection when juhi is still out there roaming"

Bebe says "so you mean that I can't take care of her"

Shweta says "bebe I didn't mean that, I meant that more people will give more protection, also bebe you can alone teach people lesson"

Bebe says "okay its fine now, and by the way I liked the buttering"

They smile.

In avni's room

Avni has changed her clothes, and is standing near the mirror and admires herself.

Avni says "I am looking good in Indian clothes too"

She wears her jhumki wearing and apply lipstick that complements the attire.

She is wearing a light pink Patiala suit with a coloured mirror embellished dupatta. She slips on her ballerina flats and comes out of the room.


In hall


Avni comes to bebe and Shweta and they both praises her. Then Shweta bebe and avni goes to temple.

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precap:


Avni says "there was a girl, she was even more annoying then you"

Neel faked anger and says "you called me annoying"

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Avni says "I was just helping a small girl, then out of nowhere a mad girl came on started shouting on me, mene bhi bol diya, jyada bakwas mat kar, tujhe jutti utar kar badi maarongi (I also told her, don't utter so much nonsense else I will beat her with my sandels)


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hows it.. hope you like it.

vote comment !! please!!


thank you so much

love you all

mehak



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Posted: 6 years ago
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hey guys, merry Christmas. so here on this Christmas i am giving double update with one chapter of tum mile and with one chapter of love me forever. hope you like it.

also which story do you want me to do update next.

and one more thing guys, i am thinking to write celebrity fan-fictions on demand. recently i loved reading Siddharth nigam fan fiction, so thought to write some celebrity fan-fictions. so if you wanna read some one-shots/fan fiction on a particular celebrity, please tell me by either commenting or by PM.

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In Khanna house

Avni comes home, she is very angry. Bebe and Shweta are following her, trying to calm her down. But their efforts are going in vain.

Neel and Prakash are in hall and are discussing something when they see avni, burning with anger.

Neel and Prakash gets up and neel says "oh somebody is burning, but who"neel is worried by finds an opportunity to tease her.

Avni glares at neel who is laughing.

Prakash says "neel stop teasing her"

Neel says "sorry dad"

Neela comes in the hall and says "what happened avni"

Neel says "yeah tell what made you a tigress again"

Avni glares at neel and says "there was a girl, and she was even more annoying than you"

Neel faked anger and says "you called me annoying"

Avni says "yeah are you deaf, cant you hear properly that you keeps on confirming everything"

Neel says "you!!"

Neela says in between "keep quiet both of you"

Avni says "ma but"

Neela says "avni"

Avni pouts and neel shows his tongue to her. And Shweta sees this and pulls his ears.

Shweta says "if neela scolded her it doesn't give you a right to tease her"

Avni laughs looking at neel.

Neela says "same applies on you avni"

Shweta releases his ear . bebe says "no more fighting"

Prakash says "avni tells us what happened why are you so fed up"

Avni says "I was just helping a small girl, then out of nowhere a mad girl came and started shouting on me, mene bhi bol diya, jyada bakwas mat kar, tujhe jutti utar kar badi maarongi (I also told her, don't utter so much nonsense else I will beat her with my sandels) and she went"

Neela says "in detail"

Avni says "okay"

*******FLASHBACK****

(Author's note : Bebe, Shweta and avni reaches temple and goes inside. There many aunties hugged avni and smiled at her. All this confused avni very much, but Shweta was trying to keep people away from avni when they tried to talk to avni. But the limit of avni's patience crossed when a lady talked to her rudely and blamed her. When people, avni doesn't know, tried to be so friendly, she thought that might be she is with bebe so they talked to her but when the lady came to talk to her, it doesn't made any sense to avni. Look what happened)

avni's phone rings, she sees the phone

Avni says "unknown number, I should pick it but its noisy here"

Avni taps on bebe's shoulder and says "I just come" and bebe nods and she lets her go. as she is involved in the prayer and shweta doesn't know that avni left.

Avni comes out of the temple to answer a phone call.

When she is about to pick the call, it ends but at that moment a little girl comes and hugs avni.

Avni pushes her a bit and bends on her knees. she holds the girl by her shoulders.

Avni says "what happened, why are you crying?"

Avni wipes that girl's tears and that girl hugs her.

That girls says "angel, angel"

Avni says "please tell me what happened so that I can help you"

That girl says "where were you, why did you left me with devil, I don't wanna go with her. She is very bad"

Avni gets confused and says "devil, "

Before avni could say more, a lady comes and shouts "Mishti"

That little girl turns and sees that lady.

That girl whispers to avni "devil devil, save me angel"

That lady shouts "avni"

Avni gets up but mishti is still hugging her.

Lady shouts "mishti come here"

Mishti nods no.

Lady shouts "mishti"

Avni shouts "who are you, how can you shout on a kid like that"

Lady says "I am her mother"

Avni says "first, go and learn manners before calming to be her mother"

Lady says "avni don't give me lecture, you are the one who destroyed my life"

Avni says "me?"

Lady says "don't act so innocently like you don't know what have you done. You took my place in neel's life. I was the one to be mrs neel Khanna but no you came in between us. He doesn't love me anymore, and all this happened because of you. And you ask what have you done. You are so selfish and so clever. You are a devil that taught my daughter bad things. You have spoiled my life"

Avni cant take this nonsense, she said "shut up just shut up"

And juhi gets scared seeing this avni, she thought that avni will feel guilty and will go forever. but she doesn't know its not weak avni rather its bold ananya verma who is standing infront of her.

Avni gets so angry listening to juhi that without even thinking much she says "you are stupid that you say I destroyed your life. Its not me but you who destroyed your life. Idiot. You say that its because of me that neel lost interest in you, wow, amazing. You are blaming me that he changed his mind. It is his choice in whom he is interested in. I don't care what you think. also you said i taught your daughter bad things when in reality you taught her behaving so badly. stupid."

That lady says "avni listen"

Before she could complete, avni says "jyada bakwas mat kar, varna tujhe me apni jutti utar kar bahut maarongi, tere chehere ka vo haal karongi ki koi tujhe pehchan nhi paega. Dafa hoja aur doobara mat aaio mere saamne (don't utter so much nonsense else I will beat you very much with my sandals. I will disfigure your face so badly that no one will be able to recognize you. Get lost and don't you dare to come to me)

Juhi touches her cheeks while imagining future and then she comes near avni and pulls mishit with her.

Mishti says "I don't wanna go"

That lady says "come"

And they went.

Then bebe and Shweta comes, Shweta ask avni"what happened"

Avni says "nothing just had a fight with an idiot, please can we go home"

Bebe nods.

And they comes home.

*****END OF FLASHBACK*****

Neel thinks 'juhi I will kill you'

Neela says "where were you bebe and Shweta"

Shweta says "actually we were in the prayer, avni asked bebe and I don't get to know that she is going else I would have accompanied her"

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precap: avni says "why are you staring me like that"

neel says "i wasnt"

avni says "liar"

neel think 'uff she someday will kill me by her hotness"

neel says "come inside now and also i have a surprise for you tomorrow"

avni says "okay and mr, do you like me"

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hows it?

comment and vote please. also should i write a celebrity fanfiction and on whom

thank you

love you

Mehak



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hey guys, as promised I am updating it, hope you like it.

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in Khanna house

Neel thinks 'juhi I will kill you'

Neela asks shweta "where were you and bebe"

Shweta says, "actually we were in the prayer, Avni asked bebe and I don't get to know that she is going else I would have accompanied her"

neela wanted to talk more on this topic but not in front of avni so she says "Avni you go in your room and change your clothes, it will be irritating you"

Avni say "no ma they aren't, I actually kinda like it"

Shweta says "really then we will get more like this for you. you look very pretty in Indian clothes"

Avni smiled

but as usual Neel can't let Avni be happy for long, and he teases her again. he says, "pretty or pretty fat"

and he laughs.

Avni pouts and squeaks "bebe"

bebe says "Neel" and she raises her hand to hit Neel at the back but Neel runs away in time.

bebe says "come here"

Neel says "sorry bebe"

Avni laughs

Neel says, "now see who is laughing"

bebe says "but you started first and Avni is innocent"

Avni hugs bebe and they stayed in the position.

Avni looks at Neel and shows him her tongue.

Neel mimics bebe and says "Avni is innocent"

Avni says "bebe Neel is troubling me"

bebe says "Neel"

Neel says, "but but she showed me her tongue and you are still threatening me"

Shweta says, "it's called tit for tat"

Neel pouts and says "fine no one loves me now, everyone loves her. stay with her, I am going"

and Neel goes.

neela goes after him saying "no its not true" it was her pretense So that she can talk to him.

Avni says "was he crack since childhood"

bebe Shweta and Prakash laughed at this.

bebe kissed avni's forehead and says, "now go rest"

Avni nods and goes.

in afternoon everyone had lunch together, after lunch Neel and Prakash and Neela went to their work and the rest had a nice chit chat session.

in the evening

Neel is on the phone talking to DD while finding Avni. Neel hasn't seen her since lunch. after lunch he had to go for a meeting with commissioner. after he returned (15 minutes ago he returned) he searched every room and every area, he even asked his family, but he didn't find her.

Neel thinks to check the garden area too.

Neel says over phone "DD we have to make sure that juhi doesn't meet Avni"

Neel first comes to the swimming pool area and sees Avni coming out of the pool. seeing Avni his throat went dry.

DD said something, but Neel wasn't listening to him, so DD ended the call in anger.

Avni comes out of the pool and sees something weird, she finds Neel gasping at her.

Avni says "why are you staring me like that"

Avni was wearing a bikini, that too of blue colour, neel's favourite.

Neel doesn't respond as he was in another world.

Avni says "oh hello"

Neel comes to his senses and says "yeah?" And he puts his phone in his pocket.

Avni says "why were you staring"

Neel lied "I wasn't"

Avni says "liar you were zoned out"

Neel think 'uff she someday will kill me by her hotness"

Neel says, "nope. Leave it and come inside for dinner."

Avni walks to neel.

Avni says "I have a question to ask from you"

Neel says, "yeah shoot"

Avni says "okay, Mr do you like me"

Neel says "no"

Neel thinks "yes I don't like you because I love you"

Neel says to Avni "why did you think like that all of a sudden, are you interested in me"

Avni says "oh hello, don't think like that, I can never be interested in you so don't think yourself to be so lucky. I asked this because that lady said neel likes you, that temple one"

Neel says "i am not that neel khanna, there may be other neel khanna too. Also I am lucky because you fatty wont be my girlfriend. I deserve someone hot, sexy, smart and thin"

Neel smirks.

Avni says "so you think I am not hot, sexy smart"

Neel laughs "so you too even think you are not thin"

Avni says "shut up, it's useless to talk to you"

and Avni goes ahead of him.

Neel shouts "at least wear a towel then go"

Avni stops at her tracks. she turns and comes back to grab a towel.

Neel says, "oh someone is blushing"

Avni says "no I am not"

Avni grabs a towel and wraps it around.

Neel says, "I said someone, are you someone"

Avni says "you are impossible"

she walks, Neel shouts "I am Neel not impossible"

Neel laughs while Avni fumes. neel also goes inside.

after having dinner, Avni and Neel goes to their respective room

while going inside, Neel smiles and says, "be ready tomorrow for the gift"

Avni says "to hell with you and your gift"

she goes in her room and closes her door with a bang sound.

Neel goes inside his room.

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precap: Avni screams "oh my god, is this for me

Neel says, "of Course"

Avni says "thank you so much, I love you Neel"

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how's it, please comment and vote. another cliffie, do you like it, what do you think what's happening.

authors note: Neel was so troubled by his bubbles's hotness. hahaha

thank you

Love you

Mehak



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Aww thank you

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