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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1 chapter 10

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In Khanna house

After having dinner, Avni and Neel goes to their respective room, while going inside, Neel smiles and says, "be ready tomorrow for the gift"

Avni turns to Neel and says "to hell with you and your stupid gift"

she storms off to her room and closes her door with a bang sound.

Neel shrugs at her sudden outburst and goes inside his room.

in Neel's room

Neel goes and lie down on his bed. he says "I don't know what happened that you got so angry, but I promise I will bring a smile on your face tomorrow " he smiles and thinks what happened at the dining table.

***FLASHBACK***

Everyone is sitting at the dining table waiting for Neel and Avni. Neel was busy with a call while Avni was busy having a shower. Soon Neel comes and sits.

He says, "I am very sorry guys, it was an important call."

Shweta says "everything is important to you than us"

Neel says "mom it's nothing like that"

Prakash tries to save Neel and says, "let's leave it na Shweta, Neel won't do that again, right Neel?"

Neel says "yes I would never do that again, mom now smile na"

Suddenly Avni comes and hugs Shweta from behind and kisses her on cheek.

Avni says "smile na my sweetheart"

then seeing avni's gesture Shweta smiles.

Neel pouts and says "not fair, you only care about Avni and not me"

Shweta says "just the way you care about your duty more"

Neel says "but why to her"

Avni says "because I love her and stay with her that is why she has even given me this pretty smile and this bracelet also" and Avni shows everyone her new bracelet.

everyone stares at it in awe, neela says "wow that's pretty but Shweta you don't have to do that"

Shweta says "why not she is my daughter too"

neela smiles and says "Avni did you thank Shweta"

Avni says "of course ma, the time she gave it to me I thanked her, what kind of question was that."

Neel laughs and says "even your mom thinks that you are ill mannered, Dumbo"

before Avni could say something, Shweta says "Neel say sorry"

Neel says "no"

Prakash says " say sorry"

Neel says "fine, sorry"

Avni shows him her tongue, Neel says "dad now look what she is doing"

Prakash says "Avni"

Avni cutie says, "sorry Neel" and Neel's heart skips a beat and he gets lost, then Shweta taps on his shoulder and brings him back.

Avni goes and sits in front of Neel, as the only seat left was in front of Neel.



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2 chapter 10

They have dinner peacefully, but when desserts time came, everything messes up. because dessert is Neel and avni's favourite part of dinner because Avni enjoys it very much and Neel enjoys seeing Avni. And, today it is her favourite dessert, ras malai.

Avni is busy having it, while Neel is busy staring Avni. Shweta tries to bring Neel back in the real world again, but it seems impossible. and to Neel's bad luck Avni catches him this time. Avni says "Neel why are you staring at me" but Neel is too busy in his dreamland that he isn't bothered what is happening around him, that Avni has caught him and is accusing him.

Shweta pinches Neel and then he finally comes out of his world and gets shocked as everyone are staring Neel, Neel says "what, what happened, why are you all staring at me like that"

Avni says "Neel first answer, why were you staring at me"

Neel lies "I wasn't, I was just thinking about a case and you think I was staring at you, no ways"

Avni says "liar"

Prakash says "Avni maybe Neel is saying truth"

Avni says "no, as I have caught him staring at me today also, plus he was drooling too, such a pervert. also, he was teasing me this evening"

Neel thinks "now I am done"

Prakash says "what, you were harassing her. shame on you Neel"

Avni says "yes, shame on you Neel"

Prakash says "you are a police officer, you have to safeguard this country and here you are harassing a girl"

Avni says "he is always doing that"

Neel says "liar"

Avni says "no I am not lying, bebe you tell me that am I lying"

bebe says "of course not"

Neel says "bebe, what are you doing, you should be on my side"

bebe says "I am on the side of truth "

Neel says "not fair"

Avni says "yes, it is"

Shweta says "Neel should get punishment"

Avni gets excited and says "yes yes"

Neel glares Avni and says "I will see you later"

Avni says "see what he says"

Prakash gets up and says "this is the limit, what is the stick"

Neel acts to get scared and says "stick?"

Shweta gets up and goes to get the stick. everyone gets up seeing this and Neel hides behind neela. Shweta brings a thick stick and hands it over to Prakash.

Prakash says "Neel you are done"

And the cat and mouse race start, in the dining room, hall and kitchen, Neel gets beaten up by Prakash in acting, both could see how happy Avni was getting seeing Neel like this, so they continued it for 10 minutes.

after that Neel comes and falls at avni's feet and says "forgive me"

Avni gives attitude and then says "okay" and she smiles.

Prakash says "you are saved because of her, now say thank you"

Neel says "thank you"

Avni says "now who is ill mannered, Dumbo" and she laughs.

then they resumed their dessert and later everyone goes back to their rooms after some chit chatting. while having some chit chat, Neel unintentionally made fun of Avni and Avni gets angry but doesn't show it as she doesn't want to spoil everyone's mood.

****END OF FLASHBACK*****

Neel smiles and says "I am so glad that Avni laughed so wholeheartedly today even though I got to do some running. but to see her like this I can do anything. and tomorrow will be your surprise day Avni, be ready "

And Neel sleeps thinking about Avni.

In avni's room

Avni is lying on her bed and she is thinking about today, she smiles and says "it was fun seeing him getting beaten up, but I wonder what he will do for surprise. but why I care to think, because he somehow gets me irritated, so his surprise would be full of irritation as well" and she sleeps as well.

In morning (6 o clock)

Neel comes to the garden as Avni exercises here daily, and today also she is here, he smiles and says, "as I said yesterday, be ready tomorrow for the gift, so are you ready"

Avni is sitting and hearing birds chirping, hearing Neel she turns, and her smiling face changes into an annoyed face, she says "and as I have said yesterday, to hell with you and your gift"

Neel says "oh ho, I swear your angry will go away, just"

Avni doesn't let Neel continue and she says "Neel just go, my angry will automatically go"

Neel says "Avni"

Avni says "Neel I am not in the mood please go"

Neel says" at least let me present you my gift"

Avni says "I am not interested" and Avni turns and starts watering the plants.

Neel grabs her wrist and turns her, he says, "this is my gift" and he shows her a basket that he is hiding behind him.

Avni says "Neel leave my hand, and as I said I don't care"

Neel leaves her hand and says "sorry, I am sorry for that but at least see it please"

Avni says "you and saying please"

Neel says "yes, it's me saying please, please see this gift"

Avni says "okay fine"

Avni takes the basket in her hand, and lifts the blanket, after seeing what's inside Avni screams "oh my god, is this for me"

Neel smiles and says, "of Course"

Avni says "thank you so much, I love you so much Neel, it's so cute" and she hugs him and kisses him on the cheek. All this happened so quickly that Neel doesn't get time to register all this, and he stands there in shock while Avni looks at the basket.

neela and Shweta comes there, and says "what happened? why did you shout"

Avni is beaming and she says, "ma look what Neel got me" and she shows them the basket.

Avni says "isn't this puppy adorable"

neela says "very"

Shweta says "aww so cute"

Neel says, "even I got one for myself look" and he goes and get another basket. he shows them the other basket.

Avni says "I just love golden retriever pups"

Neel says "come let's go and show them to bebe"

Avni smiles and says "let's go"

and they walk together with their puppy baskets.

Shweta says "can you believe they are not fighting rather they are laughing together"

neela says "yeah can't believe, pinch me"

Shweta says "what"

neela says "pinch me"

Shweta says, "okay as you say" and she pinches neela, neela says "ouch that hurts, that means it's not a dream, I am so happy"

Shweta says "yeah me too"

neela says "finally they will get along"

Shweta says "like before, that's why he got pups"

neela says "yeah, but how does he got to know Avni likes pups"

Shweta says "I don't know, maybe she mentioned it to him before the accident took place"

neela says "maybe possible"

Shweta says "what shocked me more is that Neel is afraid of dogs but still he got two"

neela says "what Neel is afraid of dogs, really?"

Shweta says "yeah, he used to love dogs but after one bit him, he got afraid of them"

neela says "poor child"

Shweta says "yeah"

neela says "let's go and continue our work"

Shweta says "yeah let's go"

and they go back to the kitchen.

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Precap: NO precap as I don't wanna give any cliff-hanger. hahaha

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how's it, hope you like it.

So, what do you think what we should name the pups, suggest names for a girl and boy puppy.

Also Sorry for such a late update, sorry. like and comment on this chapter

thank you

love you all

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 1 chapter 11

Hey guys,

This update is kind of a birthday present from me to @Innocent_soul101 for her birthday. Today is her birthday. I wish you a very Happy birthday Mehak, may you get everything you heart desires. Lots of love and hugs!!

I hope you and all love it.

Happy Reading!!!

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Recap: Neel ran away from his wedding, when he came back, he finds that Avni has met with an accident. after a week everyone discovers that Avni has amnesia and she has forgotten Neel, so Neel teases her on every occasion to make a beautiful love story. And he has gotten Avni a puppy as a present and he has gotten one too

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In the morning (In the mansion)

Avni says "I just love golden retriever pups"

Neel says "come let's go and show them to bebe"

Avni smiles and says, "let's go" and they walk together with their puppy baskets. They reach bebe's room and knocks on the door. Bebe opens the door.

Avni says "bebe"

Bebe says "arey my baby, you here"

Avni says "yes me here" and they all go and sit on the bed.

Bebe says "anything special that you two are here early morning that too this happy"

Avni says "yes"

Bebe says "so tell me"

Avni says "bebe look what Neel got me"

Bebe says "what, show me show me"

Avni says "this" and she shows bebe her puppy basket, in which a golden retriever pup is sleeping under blanket and then Neel shows bebe his basket.

Bebe says "aww they are so cute"

Avni giggles.

Bebe says "by the way you always get everyone good gifts"

Neel says "thank you bebe"

Bebe says "you are welcome ji"

Neel says "by the way bebe, this girl over here who is busy adoring her pup wasn't interested in my gift, she had said 'to hell with you and your gift, I am not interested, just go '" and mimics the last sentence

Bebe says "what? Really! you said that"

Avni lies "no bebe, what are you saying Neel I I didn't say that"

Neel says "yes you did"

Bebe says "Avni very bad"

Avni pouts and says "bebe"

Bebe says "now say sorry for behaving rudely"

Avni holds her ears and says "I am so sorry Neel"

Bebe says "now forgive her"

Neel says "it's okay Avni I forgive you"

Bebe says "good"

Bebe says " so have you decided names"

Avni says "no I haven't, about Neel I don't know, but I was wondering some names"

Neel says "I have decided "

Bebe says "what have you decided Neel"

Neel beams and says "Buddy"

Bebe says "wow nice name"

Avni says "I like Buddy"

Neel says "Thank you Thank you"

Bebe says "So Avni what names are you wondering"

Avni says "Umm, cookie or berry or"

Neel says "I know that you love sweets but still naming puppy after food is not a good idea I think" Avni looks at Neel while bebe coughs. Neel realizes his mistake and says, " I mean whoso ever will see you would know that you love sweet". Bebe and Neel laughs at Neel's hinting at avni's fatness.

Avni asks "what do you mean by that"

Neel says "no- nothing"

Bebe says "oh ho leave it you two"

Avni says "I have decided the name"

Neel says "what is it"

Avni smiles and says "Bubbles"

Bebe says "wow nice names"

Then Avni and Neel's pup yawns and opens their eyes.

Avni says "aww how adorable"

Neel says "yeah"

Avni takes her pup out and says, "from now on I am your mother and your name is Bubbles" Hearing this bubbles licks her face. Neel does the same with his pup. Neel says, "from now on I am your father and your name is Buddy" Then buddy licks his face.

For some time, Neel, Avni and bebe adore and play with the puppies. Around 6.30 am, Avni says "let's take them to walk Neel, what say?"

Neel says "yeah let's go"

Avni says "yeah"

Neel and Avni says bye to bebe and goes outside of bebe's room with their puppies to their respective rooms to change their clothes from pajamas to sportswear.

Neel comes out of his room wearing, a tight t-shirt that flaunts his muscles and a track pant with sports shoe. He is standing outside avni's door and holding Buddy via leash, he is about to knock on the door, but the door opens and Avni comes out. She is wearing sports top and capris with sport shoes. Her hair is pulled in a pony tail, seeing her Neel whistles lowly. Avni does not notice it. By her leg bubbles stand. Neel gives her a leash and collar for bubbles. Avni makes her wear it.

Neel says "shall we"

Avni says "yes"

And they go outside to the car. Before settling in the car, Avni remembers something. She gives the leash in Neel's hand and says, "take this and wait, I will just come" and she runs to the house.

Neel says "okay but where are you going"

Avni turns and says, "my bottle" and goes inside.

Neel says to bubbles and buddy "uff this girl" and he settles himself and the pups in the car and waits for Avni. After a minute or so Avni comes running to the car with a bottle in her hand. she sits in the car and says, "let's go". Neel starts the car and they goes to a park. After five-ten minutes they reach the park. they get out of the car with their pups and looks around. there are many people in the park, jogging or playing.

Avni says " shall we"

Neel says, "after you" and they enter the park and walks. For a few minutes they walk quietly as if they are two strangers just walking together. Then Neel breaks the ice and says "Since you know I have gifted you a puppy and that now we both have a puppy"

Avni says "yeah so?"

Neel says" so shouldn't we start again"

Avni says "I didn't get you"

Neel stops and says "what I mean to say is that, friends? " and he forwards his hand.

Avni stops and says, "yeah sure" and she shakes hand with him.

Avni says "Even I am tired of fighting and getting annoyed, and because of this you will at least stop troubling me"

Neel thinks "nope its impossible babes"

Neel says "yeah and since we got pups, I don't think it will be good if we will fight in front of them. what will they learn"

Avni says "yeah you are right. we are their parents."

Neel smiles and thinks "aww how cute, when she said we"

Avni sees him smiling and says "hey I know what you are thinking, don't think that way, I meant I am her mother and you are his father. that kind of parents"

Neel teases her and says "I know that Dumbo"

Avni gets angry and pointes her finger to him, she says "you!"

Neel acts innocently and says "look how bubbles is looking at you, you are teaching her all wrong"

Avni looks at bubbles and says "fine."

Neel says "great, so let's start from the beginning, I am Neel Khanna" and he forwards his hand.

Avni shakes his hand and says "I am Avni Ayesha Parikh"

Neel says "nice to meet you"

Avni says "same here"

They are looking in each other's eyes, then suddenly someone says "excuse me" they look and see an aunty who is standing as they have blocked her way. Avni and Neel apologies to her and moves a side. while going she says in a low voice "kids of these days".

Neel looks at Avni, he says "so shall we walk now"

Avni says "yup"

And they start to walk, after walking a few steps in silence, Avni stops and says, "oh wait" and Neel stops, he looks at her and she says, "I think now we should let them play."

Neel says "wow nice idea"

Avni says "But how, do you have a toy"

Neel beams and says, "of course I have, wait let me get it, it's in my car."

Avni says "Okay" and Neel gives buddy's leash to Avni and jogs to the park gate.

Avni says "let's have some fun till Neel gets you a toy" she takes the pups to the ground near the kid's swings. she puts her bottle down and plays a song on her phone. she starts to dance and jump causing her pups to get excited. Seeing this even kid come and joins Avni.

Meanwhile, Neel comes to his car and grabs some dog ropes and ball. He comes back to the park. There he sees Avni enjoying. Seeing her he gets mesmerized.

[In background this song plays:

Tu nazm nazm sa mere
honthon pe theher ja
main khwaab khwaab sa teri
aankhon mein jaagun re

tu ishq ishq sa mere
rooh mein aake bas ja
jis aur teri shehnaai
us or main bhaagun re]




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Part 2 chapter 11

Suddenly Avni notices Neel standing a bit far from them like a statue, she says "Are Neel, come na"

Neel coming out of the trace and says, "oh yeah just coming" and he runs towards Avni. Then they dance and play with the toys.

After playing for fifteen minutes, occasionally Neel sees his watch, seeing the time he says "Avni I think we should go, it's getting late"

Avni says "okay sure", Avni bends and says, "bubbles and buddy we had enough fun for today, now it's time to go home" and they take their pups out of the park. when they reach the car and are settling their pups in the car first, Neel's phone rings. The caller ID says 'DD'

Neel thinks 'oh this DD, he always calls on the wrong time. I can't talk to him in front of Avni, but I can't leave Avni alone for taking this call, but what if it's an important call. uhm but I can't leave her alone what if juhi comes. oh god where have you trapped me'

Avni says "Neel where are you lost, your phone is ringing"

Neel says "ahh it's just DD's call not that important I will talk to him later"

Avni says "at least pick it up na, what if it is important. come on pick it up"

Neel says "okay Avni, because of you I am taking this call"

Avni says "good"

Neel says, "I will be back soon."

Avni says "okay"

Neel says "take care"

Avni says "yeah yeah I will now take the call". Neel goes and Avni sits in the car.

Avni says "Bubbles you know, sometimes Neel acts like a weirdo, one moment he irritates me and the other moment he shows care and thinks that I am kid and can't manage, like without him I will get into trouble. Men! they are too complex to understand, they are such a weirdo"

Buddy barks at this, Avni sees this and holds her ears, she says " Here I am sorry buddy I didn't want to offend you. or talk bad about your father but you know he has confused me" and buddy wags his tail.

Avni says "oh I am thirsty where have I kept my bottle" and she looks around then she remembers something.

Avni says "oh god, how can I forget my bottle. you both wait here okay?" and Bubbles and Buddy wags their tails.

Avni says " good"

Avni gets out of the car and runs to the park to get her bottle. While coming back after taking her bottle she says to herself "how can I be so irresponsible and stupid, because of this bottle I had to leave bubbles and buddy alone in the car, I just hope that they are fine and the car to. Also I wish I reach before Neel else he will be very angry for leaving them alone."

While coming to car she hears something,

Someone in a terrified voice says "please leave us"

Avni says "what's happening, I think I should go and help"

Precap:

A guy sees the video and says" wow feisty as ever I like it"

A man says "should we get her too"

the guy says "na, she is mine and I will get her myself"

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Neel bursting like a volcano and is shouting on top of his voice, he shouts "I have gone for a minute and you, you have invited trouble. why do you so much love trouble. It's me who have to save you every time, why don't you give me some rest"

Avni says "you know what Neel, I hate you Neel, you are very bad, I will never want to see your face again"

Neel says" Good because the feeling is mutual"

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How's it, hope you like it. Comment, share, vote this chapter and don't forget to follow me!!!

Since I am having exams right now, I won't update anything but after 15 December I will start writing again, so let's have a poll for the next one, 'Kyun main Jaagun' or 'Love pain and your company' Comment or DM me.

Thank you

Love you all

Mehak


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Posted: 6 years ago
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wow really liked it... cant wait for the update😃

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