NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 50 - CHAPTER 55 - Upd 17th Nov

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Part 2 Individual links

Part 3 Individual links
Link to Chapter 37 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4865965/novel-hiding-behind-a-stranger-thread-32-chapter-37-upd-jun-28th
Link to Chapter 39 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4897456/novel-hiding-behind-a-stranger-thread-34-chapter-39-2-parts-sep-17th

Part 4 Individual links
Link to Chapter 52 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/5026847/novel-hiding-behind-a-stranger-thread-47-chapter-52-tsr-for-53-upd
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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher/ Master of arts (Urdu)
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India
Tahar - battle axe (Urdu/Persian)
Khuda Hafiz - Farewell greeting which translates into 'May God be your protector' (Urdu/Persian)
Adab/Adaab - Words of Salute/respect (Urdu/Persian)
Taslim - A salute (Mughalian)
Hukum - Sir (Used commonly to address Rajput royalty)
Salaam - A form of greeting that translates to 'Hello/Hi' (Urdu/Persian)
Shubh Ratri - Good evening/Good night (Marwari)
Shubh havar - Good Morning (Marwari)
Padhar jo Sa - I shall leave now (Marwari)
Zergul - Calendula flower
Chulho - Wood fire stove
Ganjifa - A card game, slightly similar to poker
Ahadi - Elite bodyguard, who've received specialist training
Muqannis - Specialist canal diggers/workers
Qanat - Canal
Masaka - Mosquito. (Masaka fever - Malaria)
Wali - Guardian
Nikah - Islamic wedding ceremony
Valeema - Islamic wedding reception
Saleem Shahis/Shahees - A special kind of shoe/jootis stylised during Jahangir's time
Chaupar/Chausar/Chaupara/Chausara - A dice game famous in India for centuries. Similar to Ludo

Khwaja Sera - Eunuch


Bhagwaan ri kirpa bani rehve. Sab chokho hove. Jivta reijo sa. - Wish you all the best... may you be successful in everything you set out to do.

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Chapter 55.
Centurion


The Story angers us thus..

After expecting a rosy picture in the update
Alas, we got but the game played by the fate
As if the torture already inflicted on her is not enough
She gets from the Shehzadi , a punishment so rough
I wonder how the author managed to write
Describing the pathos, taking it to this height
We read the chapter with feelings mixed
But the incidents happening make us transfixed

While fretting about the fate of him facing the death knell
She wonders why the Shehzadi visiting her prison cell
Her message to the Shehensha is the reason
That was considered as the act of treason
She begs, "I want justice for him, he has done no wrong
Please ask him to spare his life, he is loyal to his master all along.."
The Shehzaadi who is no shade better than her husband
In response showered on her abuses in abundance

In the meanwhile the young maid is caught by the guards
While smuggling in the herbs and is brought to the yard
But smart as she is, informs her mistress through a riddle
As to where they are hidden, in words coined so very simple..
" Than the roses in the planter are her lips redder
" Than the knots of silk is her grace finer"
She gets the clue promptly, and starts making the concoction
Very cleverly, without giving rise to any suspicion

How will she succeed in her mission to meet him in his cell?
She needs the permission of the Prince for that as well..
'Ma Bhavani, why wouldn't you show us some mercy
Why wouldn't you recognise the sacrifices of so many? '
The thought of his miserable condition gave her the strength
To rise up and fight with perseverance and with full breath
She waits patiently for the prince at the gates of the Fort
And finally meets him after hours and hours of wait

She argues for her husband as a brilliant advocate
Placing forth arguments to convince him and to placate
She uses his birthday wish as the trump card to win
And succeeds in her quest to get entry into his prison..
The sight there is not enjoyable to the grief ridden wife
But consoles herself realizing that he still has life
The reader's sigh of relief is disturbed by the villain
Who is none other than the Ex General ,a reptilian

Well, what the future has in store for the lead pair
We can somewhat guess, our hopes being vested on her
Despite the troubles the lead characters face and juggle
We feel that they have reached the end of the dark tunnel
And hope they sure will see the light of the day
We pray that this will happen without any delay..
We have to wait and see how the author has planned
To take us along with her hand in hand..

Karkuzhali.
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Where is Part 3? 😔
I wish Khalil trips down and bangs his head and breaks it on his way to the jailor.😡
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Part 2

Gates of the Imperial Prison fort


You've read past it, but hadn't registered that it was part 2 😳



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Originally posted by: lashy


Part 2

Gates of the Imperial Prison fort


You've read past it, but hadn't registered that it was part 2 😳


I meant the continuation...😆

I didn't want it to end there.😒

And i deliberately ignore anything you type in red.
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Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


I meant the continuation...😆

I didn't want it to end there.😒

And i deliberately ignore anything you type in red.


You're giving me ideas, then! 😈
You finished reading it so soon? 😭
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