NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 40-Chapter 45(2 part) 11th Feb

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Prologue

Three Great Emperors had toiled hard to build the vast and flourishing legacy of the 'Mughal Empire', keeping relative peace by unifying its Mughals and Hindus. However; by mid 1600s, cracks began to appear in its solid foundations. Insecurities crept in through the gaps, widening the gulfs between the two religions once again.

With the old Emperor becoming too feeble to take charge and his jealous successors remaining preoccupied with expansion and power, the damage was never repaired. Not surprising then that new rebellions arose every day. Violence escalated, claiming many innocent lives.

Yet; in the midst of such turmoil and peril, there bloomed a beautiful story - much like a lone flower blossoming upon the steepest edges of a cliff - a story of love, of sacrifice and honour!

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Forced to flee from her motherland, the one home she knew... forced to leave behind her people, for whom, she was their only hope...forced to grievously abandon the last rites of her loved one while the flames on the pyre were still ablaze...the orphaned heiress of 16 overcame grief and many shortcomings, as she embarked on a long dangerous path... setting out to seek help and support, for her people and her lands...

Till a chance stay with a complete stranger would change the course of those very plans forever!

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Being the most shrewd, determined and unforgiving of the lot meant he was formidable... a force to be reckoned with... it also meant he could have owned it all - riches, power, women and fame... but, he fancied none of it...

As a recluse with simple tastes, the rich life held no real appeal... power didn't tempt him... women didn't interest him... his passion was work and his only family were a few loyal friends... he had decided that he wanted little else in life...

Till a chance visit from a complete stranger would change that decision forever!

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Part 2 Individual links

Part 3 Individual links
Link to Chapter 37 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4865965/novel-hiding-behind-a-stranger-thread-32-chapter-37-upd-jun-28th
Link to Chapter 39 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/4897456/novel-hiding-behind-a-stranger-thread-34-chapter-39-2-parts-sep-17th
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GLOSSARY OF TERMS

Takht-e-Sulaiman - Solomon's seat i.e. Emperor's throne (Urdu/Persian)
Shehzade - prince (Urdu/Persian)
Shehenshah - Emperor (Urdu/Persian)
Wazir-us-Sultanat - Chief minister (Urdu/Persian)
Farmaan - official decree/document (Urdu/Persian)
Maharaj/Maharani - King/Queen
Maharaj - Chef/Cook
Kunwar - Prince (Generally used in Rajputana)
Baisa - Lady/Miss/Mrs/Madam (Marwari)
Banna - Mr/Sir (Marwari)
Sahib - Mr/Master/Sir (Urdu)
Sahiba - Ms/Mrs/Lady (Urdu)
Dams - copper coins
Vaid - Doctor/Healer
Ustad - Teacher/ Master of arts (Urdu)
Caravansarai - Caravan site
Kotwal - Town chief
Kos - old measurement system of distances, used in India
Tahar - battle axe (Urdu/Persian)
Khuda Hafiz - Farewell greeting which translates into 'May God be your protector' (Urdu/Persian)
Adab/Adaab - Words of Salute/respect (Urdu/Persian)
Taslim - A salute (Mughalian)
Hukum - Sir (Used commonly to address Rajput royalty)
Salaam - A form of greeting that translates to 'Hello/Hi' (Urdu/Persian)
Shubh Ratri - Good evening/Good night (Marwari)
Padhar jo Sa - I shall leave now (Marwari)
Zergul - Calendula flower
Chulho - Wood fire stove
Ganjifa - A card game, slightly similar to poker
Ahadi - Elite bodyguard, who've received specialist training
Muqannis - Specialist canal diggers/workers
Qanat - Canal
Masaka - Mosquito. (Masaka fever - Malaria)
Wali - Guardian
Nikah - Islamic wedding ceremony
Valeema - Islamic wedding reception
Saleem Shahis/Shahees - A special kind of shoe/jootis stylised during Jahangir's time
Chaupar/Chausar/Chaupara/Chausara - A dice game famous in India for centuries. Similar to Ludo

Bhagwaan ri kirpa bani rehve. Sab chokho hove. Jivta reijo sa. - Wish you all the best... may you be successful in everything you set out to do.

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A laptop, a dictionary, some imagination and loads of dreams... Trying my hand at writing, once again...

Great to be back on this platform... looking forward to regularly catching-up with my lovely old friends ... looking forward to making new ones too!

Thank you all for being here... and for your support... it means a lot... 🤗

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Story goes thus, by Saraswathi Aunty (Periyamma)

Chapter 45.


The Story goes thus..

What a superb presentation of the events
The author gives us in detail without any pretense
The much awaited chapter deals with
His mission in chase to find out the truth
Shows his action plans as a clever intelligence officer
And a strong Ustaad, the ruthless warrior.
He tactfully assesses the presence of the killers in the inn
Who follow him, only to be killed minutes within..

He learns quickly from the informer
That the muscleman had met Kunwar Mahendar..
'Was it his intention to seek revenge on the evil man
Or was he also after the Shehenshah's Farmaan?'
With these thoughts hovering in his mind
He decides to probe further into it to find
The motive of the Prince with proper evidence
Outlining his plans to his mate with diligence..


Reading his 'Thank you' note several times a day
She is in a joyous mood among her maids so to say
It is a treat to read how the author has penned the scene
The lovely conversation with her maids who are so keen..
'They dropped to the floor like a pile of autumn leaves..!'
What lovely similes she has up in her sleeve!
She receives the message that he is returning home
She gets ready to receive her husband, the most handsome!

They share some sweet moments between them
In the privacy of their chamber , the house of their dream
He enjoys the luxury of life he never had before
Devouring the food served by his wife , the dishes galore
He makes up his mind and asks her about the kunwar
She reveals everything about him as her answer
'His look made me want to wrap my veil five times over..'
' The prince will regret the way he treated you' utters her lover..

Elsewhere the secret messenger escapes from the safe house
The Mansabdar in Parnagarh is yet to receive the news
Will he go and meet the Kunwar as per his plans?
Or will his mission be thwarted by the Ustaad's strong hands?
The answers are with our wonderful author
Who stands to comparison to no one whosoever
Like what Heera says about Akbar's apetite
Let any evil eye on her be warded off straight!


Karkuzhali.

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Letter from Khan Sahib to his Begum. (In Urdu)


Mere Mehboob,

Kal raat ke hamare khoobsoorat safar ke dauraan, humne kayi yaadein ikattha ki hain -

jitna socha thha, usse kahin zyada kuchh jazbaaton ki, kuchh nazdikiyon ki.

Aur in sabhi yaadon ke liye Akbar Mahmoud Khan ke paas kayi jazbaat hain, jinhe wo apni Begum ke saath baantna chahte hain.

Filhaal in sabhi jazbaaton ka saar, hum ek lavz mein bayaan kar rahe hain - shukriya tahe dil se.

Hum uss waqt ka besabari se intezaar karenge, jab hum aapki aakhon mein aakhen daal kar aapse ye sabhi jazbaat bayaan kar sakein. Par tab tak hum ye ummeed karte hain kihamara ye khat hamare jazbaaton ki sarghoshi aapke kaanon tak pahunchaata rahe.

Aapka,

Akbar Khan



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Sorry in advance for the delays and for everything else 😔
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Congratulations everyone 🥳 Thank you Lashy di for our new home 🤗

Part 1
Baba re Khan Sahib in action scary and stunning... 😲⭐️
Planning everything so neatly without missing a thing uff
Ibrahim Miza is such a tease but not more than Heera's maids... Uff I was going all lal lal tamatar can imagine Heera's condition ☺️
Thank you so so much for the update di 🤗 Loved the the inn scene ⭐️⭐️

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Chapter -45 Part 2

The homecoming

What a lively description of The Parnagarh haveli busying itself in welcoming its master. No more 'a Mughal'. He was their own. Their Sahiba's mansabdar who had let them be themselves and not imposed his style on them. If at all he only added more colour. What a change looking back at the pre wedding chapter where everyone had their own doubts. And the change most seen in their own Sahiba.

Chachjaan's revelations and the magical night later, we can now only see the madly in love young wife who thrills in reading his letter a hundred times, who is unsure if she should rush out to absorb him into her eyes or pause a little to perfect her appearance so as to please him more when he absorbs her into his, a caring wife who revels in feeding him his favourite dishes and is satiated just watching him, a romantic who seeks pleasure in his arms as much as giving him the pleasure of herself, a compassionate companion who feels the pains of his injury more than her own, a thoughtful soulmate who thrills him with unexpected gifts.

The reunion was described beautifully. Heera is a perfect wife and she couldn''t have bestowed her love on a more deserving person who has undergone a sea of change himself. From the recluse he has become the very much family man.Indeed he has stepped on to the other side of a man's life. Like a wanderer in a desert finding an oasis, Khan Sahib has found his home, his family that was lost to him. Chachajaan must be a very very happy soul now.

The ittar testing was very ☺️. And wonder how many queries she would face from her inquisitive sakhis when she comes out of her chamber emitting fragrance all over.😆

The second part was a beautiful description of domestic bliss, of the magic of marriage and the ecstacy and raptures of love and the joy of togetherness that make a home. 👏

And we were jolted out of the reviere by the impending doom of the consequences of the escaped messenger. Sayyid, where are you?😒
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😲 Sandy reserving again and again!

Too many dramatic nervous men might ruin the effect so controlling myself!
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