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Hello everyone, My name is Ananya & I am new to this forum and radhakrishna is my favorite serial so I decided to write a short story which is complete imagination of my mind. Hope you will enjoy the teaser.
Teaser
It was dark at night and Radha saw a dim light outside the window she was surprised to see it as the house was abandoned for years.. Suddenly a sense of fear and anxiety rushed inside her.. She asked for someone's presence but there was no reply.. Then suddenly a strong wind blew and lit off her lamp.. It was pitch dark.. She was scared and tried to run from that room but she felt that someone pulled the dress from behind.. She shouted and run screaming for help and banged with someone, she prepared herself to fight with whosoever he was.. But stopped when she saw krishna's face in moonlight coming from roshandan and spread her arms around him and hugged him in fear and anxiety..
Plz comment on the teaser and let me know your views on the plot and story. Suggestions and complaints both are welcomed...
Jhanak
Tum Se Tum Tak
