BeHir Fs: Inner Turmoils. Last part Updated on pg 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello everyone 😊
I'm posting my first OS ever here .
All critics are welcome 😆
I don't really follow Naagin 3, I sometimes catch up with some bits .
So if there's some inconsistencies, please do ignore :)


Inner Turmoils.

Mahir's words were still ringing in her ears.

"You and Yuvi are exactly the same!
"I don't want to see your face anymore!
"Get away from me and go to your Yuvi!

Bela couldn't believe all this was really happening to her. Where the hell did Yuvi come back from? Wasn't he supposed to be dead? This time, it was definitely not Vish who came in Yuvi's avatar because she was as confused as I was. How did she come, from nearly confessing her love to Mahir, to having to prove she didn't love his brother instead?!

"But I am also to blame in all this! she thought. "Why did I have to confuse this jerk with Mahir ji? I should have made sure it's really him. Or maybe wait till we were in the safeness of our room. And Yuvi?! Is he, or whoever is pretending to be him, delusional or what? Why the hell am I supposed to be going to the guy who left me on my wedding day?! I mean no one knows he's actually dead right? Are they all mental? I alwaysvknew this whole family wasn't straight in their heads. God! I'll go mad if this continues . As if, I wasn't already confused about my feelings, another confusion came up. Great Bela! Now you're thinking as if there's another person in this head of yours, listening to you. Uff!

Everyone in the family was somehow tensed since Yuvi's arrival. Except Paulomi, but that wasn't suprising.

Mahir, on his side, was really hurt. But he was also very confused. He'd been doing all he could to avoid Bela this past week. He'd worked till late in the office and leaved really early in the morning, so he wouldn't have to face her. Or Yuvi. But as astounding as this could be, Yuvi had once again disappear!
Mahir was totally lost!

"What could be the meaning of all this? It's as if he came, just to put a mess in my somehow, quiet life! What was Bela thinking yet again about his disappearance? Did she miss him? "

Mahir couldn't concentrate on the file in front of him and was lost in his thoughts.

"Bela, Bela, Bela. How could she do this to me? I thought she was getting used to me being in her life. But no! She runs into his arms as soon as he comes back as if she was waiting for this! "

Mahir clenched his fist, feeling himself boil yet again but refused to go there. He wasn't the one to lose his temper easily and had taken quite some times to cool down. And now that he was calm, he couldn't help but replay all of it in his head. How Bela had been begging for him to listen to her. He was in such a rage at that moment, he had refused to do so. Should he have? And what was that, she wanted to say earlier, in private?
He sighed in frustration. As much as he wanted not to, he had to give her the benefit of the doubt, because he had learned to know her no matter the circumstances of their wedding. He knew she wanted things to work out between them, and she herself had told him Yuvi was nothing to her , that they were never a thing. Maybe he had let his anger take over and had been blinded. It was time to confront her, to make things clear whether it is for the best or for the worst.


Index:

Part 1 - Pg 1
Part 2 and 3 - Pg 3
Part 4 - Pg 5
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It's perfect

Amazing job


Can't wait to read more


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Hey write some more please. Continue the story. It had the potential to turn into a proper ff.
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Yeh dil manage more plz
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Fabulous
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Thank you everyone for your comments ! 😊
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Very interesting... pls continue soon
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Nice OS dear
Angry mahir never listen
Now he realised that he should listen to her.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice OS dear
Angry mahir never listen
Now he realised that he should listen to her.


Thank you :)
No he never does and it's so frustrating 😆

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