BeHir Fs: Inner Turmoils. Last part Updated on pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello 😛
I'm here with another part which wasn't planned .
It was only a one shot originally but seeing you wanted me to continue, don't know where the idea came from 😆
All critics are welcomed 😊

Part 2 :

Bela was pacing in their room. She was on the edge. It's been a week already since Yuvi had created chaos in her already hectic life and since then, Mahir was avoiding her. He had relayed news through Sumi Ma that he was overloaded with work but everyone knew very well the real cause of his repeated absences. She had also heard from Sumi ma that Yuvi had disappeared again and this, did make her confused as hell!

"Who could this be? This must be someone who also knows that Yuvi is dead! Vish would never betray me, so maybe someone saw her killing him that night? After all, this is impossible for him to be alive. But yet, why was someone using Yuvi's face? Was the purpose of this, to create a misunderstanding between Mahirji and I? Bela couldn't help thinking again and again.

Her thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the opening door. She was immediately on her guard but was relieved to see that it was Mahir who had just arrived! "Finally!, she thought, he decided to come home early today. Maybe I have a chance now to explain everything, and he is ready to listen to me.

"Mahirji! she started,

"You're here! I've been wanting to talk to you all these days. I hav..."

"There's nothing more left for me to listen, Bela. I've heard it all on that day itself. He interrupted.

"Please Mahirji. Listen to me. I need to tel..

"No Bela, he screamed. I don't want to listen to your lies anymore. I've had enough of it. You've been deceiving me since the start of this relationship. I was such a fool blinded by you that I refused to see clearly in your games.

"What are you talking about Mahirji? There's nothing like th..

"Stop it. Everytime you open your mouth, there're only lies which come out. You are indeed like Yuvi. You play with people's emotions and you don't care about their feelings.

Bela covered her tears-stricken face with her hands because she was hurt by Mahir's words. She was also hurt because she knew in what state he was and what was going on in his mind.

"Mahirji, you need to let me speak. Listen to.

But she was again interrupted by Mahir who was letting out all his frustrations as if he was possessed.

"I.said.I.won't.listen.to.anything.else. Bela! I am so disgusted to just say your name now. You've shown how cheapless you could be. I had promised you, Bela, I would always take care of you and be there for you. And what did you do? Do back to your lover who left you on your wedding day as soon as he comes back. I should be thankful to you though, for showing me your true character. I won't let myself be lured by such a gold digger like you anymore. I want you out of my house and out of my life. Go away from me. Go away from here and go be with him. Maybe that's why he's gone away already, because this time you know where to find him.

Mahir stormed out of the room after pouring all he had on his heart, leaving Bela shattered. She sank on the floor, shocked and shaken by his words.

"Is this really what he thinks me? Is this how he sees me? I thought he knew me. How can he... How dare he think something like that about me? I know he is angry but how can he..?she sobbed.

Bela was completely devastated by what she heard from Mahirji. She couldn't believe her ears. Mahir who was normally soft and kind, had been so harsh and was unrecognizable.

Even though she could feel her heart tearing apart, she wasn't going to keep mum anymore and let anyone question her character. She got up and wiped her tears decisively.

"Fine Mahirji. If you went me gone, then I'll go away. If you want me to be far from you, so be it. But you're definitely a fool if you think I can be with someone else, other than you now. Determined, she went to her cupboard, so she could pack her suitcase.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
wow awesome updated plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Again it was awesome
Hope Bela clarifies
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update
What happened to mahir now
I think so it's not mahir but it's yuvi
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please don't give my here so much fed up of cvs
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Hello 😊
I'm here with part 3, which didn't really turn out how I expected it to.
But I'm posting it anyway.
All your feedbacks are welcome.
And if you don't want to comment , at least press the like button please 😉


Part 3 :

Bela had almost finished packing her luggage, tears still flowing down her cheeks. She was determined like never before to get away from here, at least for some days. Deep inside, she was hurt because she didn't want be away from her Mahirji.

"Don't you dare think about this again, Bela. He clearly told you he didn't want you in his life anymore. She thought.

"But I should at least inform Sumi ma, I am going away. Of course, I'm sure she'll be more than happy about this decision of mine right now. I just don't want them to worry about me thinking I've gone missing.

With this thought in mind, she stepped out of her room to go find Sumi ma and inform about the latest happenings. She was absolutely lost in her mind; she hadn't noticed Sumi ma was talking on the phone, shaking. Hearing her loud screams, she halted in her way on the stairs and listened, confused.

"Mahir! Mahir beta! Please answer me! What was this noise? Mahir! Sumitra sank to the floor, the phone stuck to her ear. "Andy! My son! My Mahir! He is in some trouble. I'm sure he met with some accident. It is all my fault. I shouldn't have called him knowing he is driving to come back home from office.

While Sumitra was inconsolable, Bela was panicked stricken too.

"What does she mean accident? Driving home? But he was here few moments ago! What does this mean?

Bela were having thousands thoughts at the same time. Soon, realization dawned upon her!

"It wasn't him!, she thought aloud, it wasn't Mahirji who talked to me! He didn't utter those craps to me. He wouldn't even think about it. Oh Bela! You are so nave, why didn't you think about this before. This must be someone who came up as Mahirji to create more misunderstandings!

As soon as her thoughts were cleared, and she was sure on this point, she was on her feet , with one thing in mind: save Mahirji! In a blink of an eye, she was out of the house and on her way to rescue him. She knew he always took the same path to go back and forth from work and home. She was absolutely sure he was somewhere along this road.

On this other side, Mahir was annoyed. He had planned on going home earlier than these past days but he once again had a work-related impediment. Now it was already late and he wanted to get home and face Bela as soon as possible. He didn't know yet how to start this conversation with her and he hoped he'd know what to say when in front of her. He was so lost in his thoughts, he didn't notice the warning sign indicating the road was blocked ahead. Caught of guard at the last minute, he did the best he could to avoid it . But in the process, he lost control and hit the trees boarding the road. The car hood crashed against a big trunk and broken glasses flew everywhere. Mahir was shaken by this incident and could feel his heart pounding in his chest. He rested his head against his car seat and took a deep breath to calm down. With his eyes closed, several thoughts went through his mind, with the first one of Bela. He knew he love her and he wanted her, but what if that wasn't what she wanted? He'd been asking for a sign since the last week, what if this accident was one? Especially on his way to go talk to her? He was frustrated and he knew he couldn't go face her in that situation.

That's how Bela found him when she arrived there, Mahir still in his car with his eyes closed, and she feared the worst. She rushed to the car, opened the door and shook him frantically.

Mahirji! Mahirji! Open your eyes!, Bela shouted while tapping his cheek. Oh my god, Mahirji!''

Mahir, startled by her sudden presence, sat erected and looked at her with a puzzled face, startling Bela in the process.

'Bela? What are you doing?'he asked while getting out of the car. 'How did you get here? What happe...'

He couldn't finish his sentence as Bela launched herself towards him and hugged him tightly. Mahir who couldn't understand what was happening, was shocked him her act.

"I thought I lost you Mahirji. I thought something bad happened to you. Bela sobbed.

I'm fine Bela. It's only some cuts from the broken glasses. It's only some minor injuries. Don't cry.'' Mahir hugged her while reassuringly her.

"No let me. You can't stop me today. You can't take this right from me. I've barely seen you in a week and that's how I find you today.

Mahir was overwhelmed. He hadn't expect this. He was both puzzled and surprised by the behaviour. He knew she cared for him. She'd shown him several times before, but he hadn't expected it to be at that extent. Could this be the sign I was waiting for ?'', He couldn't help but hoped.

Bela, come let's go home. We'll take your car and we'll see for mine later. Come on let's go.'

Bela looked at him with tears in her eyes and nodded. While heading to her car, both of them were surprised to see that Sumitra, Andy and Yuvi were coming towards them.

"Mahir beta! Are you ok?

"Ma, I'm fine. What was the need for all of you to come here? Let's go home now.

"Right bro. You look awful. Let's go get you clean. Bela, come. I'll drive your car. Mahir you go with mom and dad.

Yuvi, where were you lost again? It's been a week since we haven't seen you at all. Now where do you come from?''

"Oh come on bro. Let's talk at home. Come on Bela, let's go.

Mahir clenched his fist, but decided against saying anything else. He started walking towards the car, when a hand on his arm, stopped him in his tracks.

Mahirji, wait. Yuvi I can drive and Mahirji is coming with me. You go back home the same way you came here. I'm not letting Mahirji go out of my sight today.'' Bela said while looking at her husband. With this, she grabbed her hand and guided him carefully to their car.

Mahir was totally shocked by her boldness, but he was also pleased because for once, she took a stand for him against Yuvi. With a smile on his face, he let her take the lead just as he had once suggested.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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I wish in show too Bela was this bold...great part... update again soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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To the cvs if u r stalking to read this track and realize it mistakes
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

To the cvs if u r stalking to read this track and realize it mistakes

Ouch to them 🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: urmita

I wish in show too Bela was this bold...great part... update again soon..

It'd be indeed great
thank you :)

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