Flaws in the story

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is a story about two personalities who either make mistakes or always mistaken. Agreed and kudos to those writers who potrayed people in their most vulnerable moments. Their failures vs their succesa.
However as script writers or those who create the concepts for the masses can't realise their own flaws

I mean from the time the office track started they made Aditya Hooda invest in a company which is financially sick just to make Zoya Siddiqui s life miserable. Which did look irrational to quite a few. The birthday where morphed pictures were used, Royal Bengal tiger in badlapur, a court case which could be handled nicely, Rajveer coming in the picture and becoming a desi irrational version of Robin Hood. Arjun supporting Zoya because he has his own demons within him. Nobody in Hooda house knew how many times Pooja was pregnant. Who ripped off those four pages of dairy , even when one is in depressed state or going through phases of insane moments, four pages off from a diary is quite noticeable..

Post leap, Zoya goes from version 1 to 2 and God knows how many of them will be seen, same with Aditya.

It looks like some Pendulum which is going round and round whose destination cannot be found.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Haha you edited it 😆
The Rajveer track could have gone way better. After that track got over he disappeared completely. Someone who is so hellbent on getting revenge wouldnt leave like that. Aditya joining Zoya's office kinda made sense. He was grieving at that time and when youre that sad you make stupid decisions.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Okay

A ...to

Z
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A Aditya... to

Z Zoya .. . . 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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the problem is makers come up with half baked stories .. everything is left half way .. they need to 1st finish the track properly and then start come with new one ... Rajveer, Mahi and PooSh mystery ,torn pages from dairy, papa hooda raaz .. all of it is still open
i feel they want to start all of it post AdiYa marriage ...

but still .. like currently anjana kidnapping sakshi was so stupid .. there was no need of it .. but i guess they came up with this one as they wanted to show Arshad being involved in it .. may be helping sakshi .. God knows ..


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Posted: 7 years ago
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yeah the big shock was her agreeing for the 2 week proposal of getting to know Arshad...

but maybe in this track ...she may realize her love for Adi ...

I didnt like rajveer track at all ...

I also want to see the old adi and zoya back ..i love this new zoya but the older one was sooo massoomm ...i loved her and adi pre-leap ...

Cant we have new zoya and adi with older qualities and please for god's sake ...i hate the best friend jaap ...

okay u are best friends no need to keep re iterating it ...

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