ISHIKA-ROOP- PALAK FF#Yaariyan

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Introduction

Every story is not same. 😊
Prem kathayein to bohot padi hongi na,par unmein bhi kahi poori aur kuchh adhuri reh jaati hain !
Yahi real life hai !
Yahi zindagi hai mere dost !

Its a story of best friends who are unknowingly very much attached to each other.😳

Their bonding is stronger than ever..!
But what all changes happen in their life..

In short ,kaunsa track inki zindagi pakadti hai ..ye hi dekhna hai
😉


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1
Palak is in her home .
She feels bored .
Palak :aaj kitta boring day hai!
Roop ! !wo kahan gaya ?
Aaj milne hi nahin aaye mujhse !
Aane do use achchhi khabar lungi uski!

She feels sad and a bit angry on roop .

Jeetu (palak father ) come and see her daughter sad and her arms folded .
He smiles and watch her moving here and there .

He comes inside .
Jeetu :palak beta !kya hua ?kab se dekh raha hun ..?
Tum idhar se udhar ghumi jaa rahi ho yun ?

She hugs her father.
Palak :papa pata nahin kyun aaj roop ki bohot yaad aa rahi hai !
Aaj mere baal bohot ulajh rahe the..mujhse kuchh nahin hota uske bina !
Jeetu smiles .
Relax beta relax aa jayega wo !
Her mother listens all and in anger scolds palak
Ye mein kya sun rahi hun !palak itna kisi pe depend hona achchhi baat nahin hai !
Ab tu badi ho gayi hai
Sudhar jaa !
Palak :Mummy wo roop..
Mother :bas!jab dekho roop roop roop! Kaise samjhaun mein tujhe beta kisi se itna lagav hona bhi achchha nahin hai .

Palak :mummy aap nahin samjhoge !
wo humara bestie hai !
Humara ginne bhi wo hi hai !

Her mother told to her father:dekhiye aap hi samjhaiye apni beti ko !
Roop nahin aaya isliye subhe se khana nahin khaya isne!

Palak :nahin papa wo mujhe bhook nahin thi !main kya karti ?

Jeetu :offo !tum maa beti ki ladai kabhi khatam nahin hogi !

Palak hugs her mother tightly
Palak :ufoo papa ye to mummy ka pyaar hai mere liye ,ye ladai thoda hai !





Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...I love the start! It's quite good. Please continue! I am eager to read it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siya2202

Wow...I love the start! It's quite good. Please continue! I am eager to read it!

thank u dear !
Will update soon .

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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2
Palak goes to park and sit on the bench sadly.

She remembers how she used to wait for roop when he not comes ,she gets sad .
She remembers her mother told her to grow up and stop talking of roop all day .

Palak feels the wind flowing.
She sees up in sky ..
God mein apne ginne ko yaad kaise na karun?
Someone comes behind her running and covers her eyes from his hands .
Palak smiles.
She feels its roop only .
Palak :ginne?
Roop:haan tera ginne !
Palak starts beating him in anger like a kid.
Roop :are are...bas . Bas bhi kar!!
Sorry !!
He hold his ears .
Palak :ye hui naa baat !
Roop :mujhe pata hai tu subah se bore ho rahi thi,mujhse baatein karni thi but mein tha nahin kyunki mein maa ki help kar raha tha buddhu !
Palak :mmm ..help karna achchhi baat hai but tere paas apni frd ke liye to time hi nahin hota.. ek mein hi hun ki ..

Roop shuts her mouth with his hand .
Roop :kuchh bolne ki jarurat nahin hai tujhe,mein sab samajh gaya .

Palak looks in his eyes confusedly .

She removes his hand .
Palak :kya ? Tumko kaise pata ?
Roop goes behind her .
Palak :roop tum kya kar rahe ho ?

Roop :chup aage dekho aur mein jo kar raha hun mujhe karne do .
He removes the clip from her hair from back .
Palak feels something different today and remembers her mother words again.

She gets up .
Palak :roop tum kya kar rahe ho mere baal kyun khole .
Roop:tujhe nahin pata kya jo mujhse poochh rahi hai ?

He holds her and makes her sit again .
He goes behind her and starts combing her tangled hairs.

Palak hairs starts flying and she starts feeling something unknown .
Roop starts combing her hairs .
Palak :roop tum sachchhi mein mere ginne ho !
Meri har problem solve kar dete ho .

Roops pats her head slowly .
Buddhu tujhe pata hai mein tujhe sad nahin dekh sakta kabhi !
So tujhe khush karne ke liye tere baal suljhane kya tere liye to meri jaan..

She shuts his mouth with her hand
Palak :pagal hai kya ,kya bol raha hai ?
Khabardar aage se aisa kuchh bola .

Palak :teri khushi mein hi meri khushi hai .
Tu khush reh bas !

Roop hugs her .

Bolna song plays.😳



Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is soo cute! Wish such scenes were there in the show as well. Please continue it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank u frds for commenting your views .glad that you are liking it .
Hope to get more comments here .

Part 3
Palak and roop are seeing each other intensely .
Just then ,someone comes and whistles in their ears loudly.

Both gets shocked and see in between who is standing.

Palak thinks who is she?

Roop :ishika ?
Ishika :haan main !

Palak :roop ye kaun hai ?
Roop :ye ..ye meri..
Ishika :teri ?

Roop:best frd ...!ye meri best frd hai palak !

Palak :oh achchha ! Nice to meet you ishika !

Roop holds ishika hands and says :palak hum aye ek min mein !

Palak feels a bit awkward .
Ye roop ko kya hua ?

Palak waits for him in park .
She waits till half an hour .

Palak :tu kyun soch rahi hai ki wo ayega tere pas ab .
Ab uski new frd jo ban gayi hai
She gets sad .
Shayad wo tujhe bhool gaya !

She starts going.
Someone holds her hand .
Its roop .
Palak turns and sees its him .
Roop :mein aa gaya .

Palak :haan finally half an hour baad tum aa gaye .
Roop :are wo mein ishika ko apna ghar dikhane lag gaya tha poora to time lag gaya .
Sorry .
Palak :its ok
She starts going.
Roop :are sun !
Palak :bol
Roop :tu jaa rahi hai aise hi !
Palak :kyun ?kuchh kaam hai ?

Roop :nahin !tu ja
He says sadly .
Palak holds his hand .
Palak :tu sad kyun ho raha hai ?
Bol kya chahiye ?
Roop :wo mujhe kuchh batana hai !

Palak :bol !
Roop :agar tere se jyada meri koi aur achchhi dost ban gayi to tu gussa to nahin hogi na ?

Palak gets confused .
Palak :nahin to ..im happy .
She tries to hide her sadness.
Roop :sure ?
Palak :yes yr !

Roop hugs her in happiness..
Roop :im sorry yr hum itte saalon baad mile aur wo bhi aise !
Meine tujhe bohot miss kiya !

Palak :sachchhi ?
Roop :mm muchchhi !
They laugh .

Roop :palak tu bilkul bhi nahin badli .
Ahhi bhi pehli jaisi sweet si cute si innocent si hi hai .

Palak smiles.
Palak :mm shayad tu bhi nahin badla !

Roop :mujhe tere se bohot sari baatein karni hain.
Bohot kuchh hai ..

Ishika comes and interrupts their talk.

Ishika :kya hai ..??mujhe bhi batao ?

Roop :kuchh nahin ..wo ..mein to..

Ishika :ab bata bhi de ??

Palak :mm bol bhi ?

He moves one step forward .
Kuchh nahin.

Ishika :roop tu baatein bhi chhupata hai ..?

Palak :koi baat nahin jab tujhe theek lage to bata diyo !

Roop smiles.
Roop :dekha ishika palak mujhe tujhse bhi jyada achchhe se janti hai .

Roop hugs palak again and this time more tightly .

Ishika feels jealous .

Ishika :haan ..!wo to hai !




Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ummm...a jealous ishika! And a sweet palak! It's going great...can't wait for next part!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siya2202

Ummm...a jealous ishika! And a sweet palak! It's going great...can't wait for next part!


Thank u dear .keep enjoying .😳😊

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