One Shot||Do you remember?

First Previous

Page

Frequent Posters

Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Something different from regular love saga... Perfect story of revenge which justified revenge can only ruin...

Quote

khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

different intriguing one shot!

thought that they were happily married but was shocked that she only married him for revenge!

Cannot judge for what she did, she had her reasons!

but by killing him wld it bring her son back? was his death worth it!

I feel that he was genuinely remorseful!

curious if she ever loved him?

feeling sad for them...

Edited by khwaishfan - 7 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

no name

@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

dark one
was expected sad but not this heart wrenching
what to say both have share of pain and love too
their fate against them

Quote

Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Dark story. The extent of revenge where a person is ready to destroy himself for seeking revenge. But what can we say if it only reason for that person to be alive. If backstory of geet was painful than her way of taking revenge is too much painful. Its not easy to read such stuff where geet is killing maan. The end of the story is really unbearable.

Quote

Anotherstar

@Anotherstar

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Very different and unusual

Poor them

Feeling bad for both

Quote

sweetysaran

@sweetysaran

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Different one... loved it... awesome...

Quote

Madhu

@Madhu_31

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Amazing OS!

Didn't even think that this OS would have such an ending!

Feeling bad for both!!

Had the fate made introduced them in a pleasant situation,things would have been different!😳

Loved it!Different and unique👍🏼

Quote

no name

@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

when love is too difficult...
even with such ending this story has a different charm

Quote

maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Congratulations...

That was awesome... Real intense story..

All the emotions well portrayed...

Agony , revenge , hatred , hurt , pain , love , guilt , repentance ...

Brilliant...

Well written... Great job ..

The twist in the tale was marvelous...

Thanks for the pm..

Quote

Twenty1st

@Twenty1st

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

This so reminded me of 'I know what happened last summer' or was it 'I know what you did last summer' anyway that movie.

Though i cant blame Geet for the emotions she felt, however Maan was equally regretting

Murder isn't the answer

Personally feel Maan should have spent his time serving, and Geet should have moved forward but that wouldn't have been an interesting read, i suppose

Hence liked this OS😊

Thank you