CONFESSION : VIDITI TS : Las part UPDATED

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Posted: 7 years ago
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HLW GUYS...
Well well well it's my first attempt to write something..bhul chuk ho jaye to bachi samajh k maaf kar dena...fir bhi GHUSA,THAPPAD IS ALLOWED but pls chappal , ande,aur tomato fenk k mat maarnaBohot zada matlab bohot hi zada wala gussa aye to Raya madam ko mar sakti ho q ki is main kahi na kahi Raya ka bhi dimaag hai😆


This story is based on episode 29 jab Aditi kuch bacho k saath koma main chali gayi thi..
AND here we go..
ENJOY😉



DOCTOR: Hlw VIKRANT sir ,Aditi mam koma main chali gayi hain baki bachon ki tarah, aap please jaldi aayiyen!!
That was it for him.He ran as fast as he could.He had lost his Aditi once ,not again..

(In Hospital)
Vik; { At Reception} Aditi?
R: wo ICU main...
Vikrant does not even waste a single moment..He almost broke the I.C.U door and saw Aditi lying on the hospital bed..A lone tear escaped from his eyes..He always loves to see her smiling face but what is this? A lifeless body? no..Vikrant stepped backward ..It's his fault..Just because of him she is lying there..He let her go alone!!
In the meanwhile doctor entered ( bichara , wrong timimg)
D: Sir..
Vik: ( no answer)
D; Sir??
Vik : Haan haan
D; Sir , wo Aditi mam, Sir I'm sorry!!
Vik: Mujhe meri Aditi wapas chahiye , kuch bhi karo,kahi bhi jaao, Hospital bech do, mar jaao ! I don't care .I want my Aditi back that's it..😡
D: par Sir , humne kaha na..
Doctor couldn't complete his sentence as Vikrant's cold stare scared him😕
Vik; I SAID I WANT MY ADITI BACK😡
D; I..I..I will try my best Sir, please excuse me
Doctor ran from there. Actually wo samajh gaya tha that the man infront of him is not ACP Vikrant Singhal ..it's Aditi's Vikrant..
Vikrant started walking towards Aditi's bed .. His feet were trembling.. He sat beside her bed and hold her hand tightly.It was so cold!! He kissed her hand..

Vik; Humesha aisa q hota hai Aditi? Tum baar baar mujhse dur q chali jati ho ? Tum jab Hospital main mere ankho k samne se gayeb ho gayi thi mere pairon tale zameen khisak gayi thi..Tumhare kam namak wala khana khane ki adat padh gayi hai mujhe..uska kya? Apne partner ko bhookha rakhna chahti ho? Acha yeh sab chodo yeh batao Hospital se kya rista hai tumhara? Harbaar Hospital main hi tumhe kuch ho jata hai..Pata hai kitna ajeeb ho tum? Bhooton se rishta rakhti ho,sare mushibaton ka akela samna karti ho,kam namak wala khana banati ho ,zaroorat padhne padh Philosopher ban jati ho . Pata hai main Aai ko bolta rahta tha ki mujhe partner ki koi zaroorat nehi hai par ab mujhe lagta hai TUMHARE BINA MAIN KYA KAROONGA? You know what, 'I LOVE YOU '!! Haaan I know ki tumhe to pata hi hoga ..man ki baat jo padh leti ho..But I promise iss baar tum theek ho jaao main tumhe yeh bol doonga . Ekdam ache se without any PJ ...Tum sun rahi ho na??
He looked at her..She is still not moving..He went close to her face and kissed her forehead ..

( Other World)
Girl: Didi, hum yaha se kaise niklenge?
Aditi; Don't worry beta main hoon na .. main nikaaloongi tum logo ko yaha se..
Then all children hugged her and she closed her eyes..Suddenly she felt someone's warm lips on her forehead ..Obviously she knows who he is!..She muttered ' Vikrant' ...and his name did the magic ..She opened her eyes immediately..



OK Aaj ke lie bas itna hi.. 😕
I repeat no CHAPPAL, ANDAS AND TOMATOES please ...Ghusa, thappad mar sakti ho .. sorry for typing mistakes...



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loveinshi thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res

What?
U started writing?? 😲
I will come back after actually reading it.😆

Unres:

Me , after reading the chapter: "A lone tear escaped from her eyes.."😭

Bohot achha likha Hai. Koi chappal nahi marnewala. Mere retirement ka waqt aa gaya Hai.🤗
Edited by loveinshi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Res

What?
U started writing?? 😲
I will come back after actually reading it.😆

Unres:

Me , after reading the chapter: "A lone tear escaped from her eyes.."😭

Bohot achha likha Hai. Koi chappal nahi marnewala. Mere retirement ka waqt aa gaya Hai.🤗

Sabse pehle Thank you so so much😊
Haan likh diya maine himmat karke..pehli baar

Kya kya kya😳
Chappal nehi marnewala???😕
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Retirement???? Rulao mat aisa bolke😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sabse paheli baat chappal koi marega nahi aur dusri ande aur tomato wali dialogue meri thi tune chori karli😔 ab story pe ati hoon story bohot hi zyada interesting hai aur emotional bhi just loved it age ka jaldi upload kar can't wait
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow yr @shaina kitna aacha likha koi pagal hi hoga jo iss cute si story padhkar tumhe maarne ki soche...koi nhi maarega tumhe main hoon na!!!!!!! Dil garden garden ho gya ye padhkar aage kya hoga??????? Can't wait yr...please update.soon
👏 awesome likha yr (wait mat karvana please)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raya30

Sabse paheli baat chappal koi marega nahi aur dusri ande aur tomato wali dialogue meri thi tune chori karli😔 ab story pe ati hoon story bohot hi zyada interesting hai aur emotional bhi just loved it age ka jaldi upload kar can't wait

Excuse me????Tune kab bola yeh btw??😕
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Well,
Tnq so much..haan haan jaldi se upload kar doongi ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Wow yr @shaina kitna aacha likha koi pagal hi hoga jo iss cute si story padhkar tumhe maarne ki soche...koi nhi maarega tumhe main hoon na!!!!!!! Dil garden garden ho gya ye padhkar aage kya hoga??????? Can't wait yr...please update.soon

👏 awesome likha yr (wait mat karvana please)

Thank you so much Sakshi..means a lot...
Dekho bhai log mujhe bachane k liye Sakshi hai😆
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Don't worry jald hi update kar doongi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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damn good rula diya yaar tune 😭 koi pagal he hoga jo tumhe marega loved that confession of vik update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya95

damn good rula diya yaar tune 😭 koi pagal he hoga jo tumhe marega loved that confession of vik update soon

Ops .!!.aisa kya😆
Thank you so much😳 Will update soon🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it awesome ...
U made my morning

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