CONFESSION : VIDITI TS : Las part UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Sha kitna acha likha hai yaar,isko padh ke mujhe viditi ki aur jada yaad ane lagi hai

Aww tnq Ankita di😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: shreyatode1

Finally read it

Nice one
Update soon

Tnq so much😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

@shaina behan aaj update kardena please...

Sorry actually bohot zada busy thi...jald hi kardoongi... Don't worry😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Joote chappal ka toh pata nahin phool barsane wi story zaroor hai aapki di. Philosophy,kam Namak wala khana,bhoot and I LUV U. Haye,gud se bhi meetha tha yeh chapter. Update soon di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Extremely sorry for being late and thank you so much for all your lovely comments❤️ ..thank god jute chappal nehi pade..
here is the next part.



Enjoy 😉


PART 2


Aditi: ek minute bacho ..wo khilona kaha hai jiske wajehse hum yaha par fase hue hai?
Girl: didi, wo udhar
Aditi ran towards the toy. She touched it's key..
A: Dekho hum sab iss khilone ki wajehse yahapar fase huye hai ..mujhe aisa lagta hai yeh chabi ghumane se hum aapne duniya main laut sakenge ..Sab ek doosre ka hat pakde rahne ..
She closed her eyes and touched the key..

[HOSPITAL]

Vikrant was sitting vthere holding Aditi's hand tightly.He would not let her go.Suddenly Aditi opened her eyes and breathed heavily .Vikrant looked at her face.
V : Aditi??
A : Vikrant...
He cupped her face.. Checked her if she was ok or not..
A : [smiled] Vikrant main theek hoon..
Without wasting a second Vikrant hugged her tightly..Aditi hugged him back.She missed him a lot . Vikrant broke the hug and kissed her forehead .. he let his lips lingered for sometimes on her forehead . He soothed her pain .
V : Pata hain main kitna darr gaya tha?
A : Hein?? Kaun tum? ACP Vikrant Singhal? Mazak kar rahe ho/
v: Aditimain sach mein darr gaya tha . Ekbaar tumhe kho chuka hoon dobara nehi kho sakta..Yeh ek ghanta mere liye ek saal k barabar lag raha tha..Humesha tum mujhe chod k q chali jati ho? Bohot bura hoon na main?
A : Tum bura? Bilkul nehi ntum toh bohot ache ho.
She wiped his tears and cupped his face..
A : I'm sorry Vikrant.. age se dhyaan rakhoongi ..Wase yeh sab to theek hain.. tum batao ek ghante main kitne anti-depression pill liye?
Vikrant had not expected this ..That's mean she knew about the pills !!sh*t
V : Wo main..wo..wo..wo
A : Haan, haan, pata hai..Tum to mujhe kuch batate nehi aur meri nazar se koi bach nehi sakta..Tumhari pal pal ki khabar hai mujhe..Main nehi thi iska matlab yeh nehi ki mujhe kuch pata nehi chalega..KHABARDAAR age se uss bottle ko hat bhi lagaya to..!!
V : I'm sorry Aditi..
A :Lo ab bol rahe hein sorry..
V: Acha theek hai ab ddanto mat...MUJHE TUMSE KUCH KEHNA HAIN..
A : Jaldi bolo mere pass time nehi hai..
V : Wah !! Ek to himmat karke bol raha hoon aur madam k pass time nehi hai..
A: tum rehne do..
Aditi was going to get down from the bed Vik hold her hand..
V : Aise nehi jaa sakti tum..Phirse mujhe chod k jana chahti ho?Nehi aur nehi..Na abh jane doonga na kabhi becase I LOVE YOU..
Aditi heard this..THE THREE MAGICAL WORDS..She knows that he loves her..She always wanted to hear this from him..She felt complete..Finally there is someone whom she can call her own...She was hell happy and was going to reply him but stopped in middle ..LET'S PLAY WITH HIM FOR SOMETIME..
A : Hein?
V: Kya hein?😕
A : Aapne kuch kaha?
V : What? Mazak kar rahi ho kya?
Aditi was trying her best not to laugh.. Why so cute man?
A : Q? Main mazak q karoongi?
V : [ Angrily] Jao mat suno..Jaa raha hoon main..😡
Aditi was just going to say something that's when the doctor arrived..
D : Sorry for disturbing you ma'am ..aap theek to hain na.. main kuch laaoon? Juice, Fruits ? Nehi nehi main meal hi leke ata hoon..
A ; no Doctor mujhe kuch nehi chahiye main theek hoon..ab main ghar jaa sakti hoon na?
Vikrant was neither looking at Aditi nor at Doctor .. Aditi looked at the Doctor then at Vikrant...Wo samajh gayi ACP Sahab ne kand kiya hai...
D: Yes ma'm if you are feeling alright then you can go home..
A: Thank you Doctor and I'm sorry for Vikrant"s behavior ..Actually wo thoda darr gaya tha ..aapko pata hain na humara profession kitna khatarnak hai.
D : It's ok ma'm main chalta hoon..Doctor went from there and Vik was like ' yeh behosh hui thi?'😆
[IN CAR]
Vikrant was not looking at her and she was continuosly staring at him.. He noticed that..
V : Stop starring at me like this ..main disturbed ho raha hoon..
A : Wo to ab mere dekhne se aap disturbed ho rahe hain..fine.. nehi dekhoongi..
Finally they reached at Aditi's home...Vikrant applied the break .. Aditi opened her seatbelt and looked at Vik .. 'Oh ! He is still so angry'..She went close to him..so close that Vik could feel her hot breath on his face..She smiled at him and kissed on his cheeks ..She whispered " I LOVE YOU TOO "
Before Vikrant could say or do somthing she got down from the car and went from there..Vikrant smiled at her gesture..She was playing with him..
V : Jao jao ..kl office to aogi tabh dekh loonga..Iska badla to mainleke rahoonga...



THE END



ARREY ? sorry thoda zada lamba ho gaya😛
Sorry for typing mistakes..I know ending was so boring par yeh hi dimag main aya kya karoon😔 NO CHAPPALS PLS...

Edited by Shaina744 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Boring!!!???? Pagal badi hi cute si ending thi...i can imagine viks face!!!!! Awww...love it thanku...btw mujhe aur chahiye...do write more @shaina
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Boring!!!???? Pagal badi hi cute si ending thi...i can imagine viks face!!!!! Awww...love it thanku...btw mujhe aur chahiye...do write more @shaina

Iska hi aur part chahiye kya? Then I will turned it into ss..
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Tnq so much..glad you liked it😳
Edited by Shaina744 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: viditifan

Joote chappal ka toh pata nahin phool barsane wi story zaroor hai aapki di. Philosophy,kam Namak wala khana,bhoot and I LUV U. Haye,gud se bhi meetha tha yeh chapter. Update soon di

Aww tnq so much ..love you too Manu...😳
Glad you liked it😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Aww
Cute!! Kash ye hota show me..😭

Aur ab aur likho,TS, SS, FF!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: loveinshi

Aww

Cute!! Kash ye hota show me..😭

Aur ab aur likho,TS, SS, FF!!!

😆acha likhoongi😆
Tnq you so much😳 sachi main Kamyani ko Forums ghumne ana chahiye..😆

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