'AvNeil FF/SS ~ BELOVED'

Originally posted by: nina282

Please continue. So sad.

Originally posted by: lilly718

Here is the second chapter. Ignore my grammar and Hindi errors. Not proofread! Read, enjoy, and comment.

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Chapter 2

...Solace...

Hello Mr. Khanna, I am Dr. Rogers your wife has been put into a coma, a medically induced coma. Due to her severe brain injuries and the swelling in her brain we needed to put her in a coma, so her brain could recover, said the doctor to Neil.

But is she stable? Asked Prakash ji.

As of now she is! Doctor responded.

And the baby? Asked Bebe.

The baby is stable too, both the mother and the baby are in a stable condition.

How long will she be in a coma? I asked.

Six days, she should probably wake up within six days if she doesn't then that will be concerning, replied the doctor.

Can we meet her now? Asked Shweta ji.

Yes, in about 30 minutes. We have shifted the patient in the ICU, so guys can meet her. Try to not make it too crowded and also there will be another doctor to keep her eye on the patient, he said.

He put his hand on Neil's shoulder and said everything looks good, positive Mr. Khanna, before leaving.

I sighed in relief knowing that both Avni and her 5 months old baby are fine, they are stable. I glanced over to Neil with a little smile on my face, but in return all I saw was a emptiness on his face, all his tears were dried up and his eyes showed no emotion or I wasn't able to figure out what he was feeling.

Ali grabbed my shoulders and guided me to the ICU where Avni was kept. As soon I saw her through the transparent glass door, seeing her in all the tubes and the wires in her mouth, her body I began to cry, I cried so hard letting all my emotions come out that I have caged since the few hours.

She is fine, Neela aunty, our Avni is fine, Ali said in a reassuring tone.

Everyone went into Avni's room, I traced my hand to her face, feeling her alive. I kissed her forehead as if meeting her after ages and I was. I found solace seeing her fine, seeing her coming back yet again.

I traced my thoughts back to the fifteen years when I first met her on the road, when she was eleven. How we soon became good friends and fought Dayawanti Metha because we both lost our loved ones, she lost her mom and I my baba. She came back fighting death after Dayawanti shot her. She fought and came back. My baccha came back then and also now. I kissed her hand to reassure myself that she was really here.

I looked around to see Bebe, Shweta ji, Nanno, Prakash ji, Ali and even DD in the room to meet Avni, except Neil. I don't see him in the room, I looked around to find him and I find him outside the clear glass doors staring at Avni. It broke my heart to see him in this state, he loved her so much, more than I did, more than he loves himself. She was his lifeline, his heartbeat, from a criminal she became his life.

About two years ago, when Avni was known as Ananya Verma, she came home late night wearing a guy's shirt. Out of curiosity I asked her and she just shut me down.

Avni, whose shirt is this, I asked

Ma! I am hungry get me some food, yeh interrogation aap sub karlena. Okay? Avni responded.

Over the next fews days, when Avni went to Mehta house to fulfill her revenge, to make Dayawanti pay for all her sins, she ran into Neil again it would piss her off as she wasn't able to fulfill her tasks when she wanted to.

She would complain about him to me, Ma yeh ladka na kabhie bhi kahi pe bhi paunch jata, hamesha mere lam rokne ke liye.

One day, she came home all sad but at the same time with a different respect in her eyes for Neil that I hadn't seen in her eyes for anyone. That day she cried and asked me "Ma, papa ne kyun nahi meri mamma ka saath diya? Aur waha Neil, uss Dayawanti ka dammad, usne toh Riya ka saath diya, engagement bhi ki apne parents ke kilaaf jake. Aise kyun hota hain Ma?

I couldn't answer her.

On the wedding day, when Neil came to confront me if Ananya is Avni, how he has gotten all the proofs against him.

Toh fir karlo na use arrest Neil, yaha pe mujhe kyun bata rahe ho? Agar tumhe pata he hai to karolo use arrest. I told him in a firm tone.

He was at loss of words but his expression were conveying that he believes Avni, he wants to give her a chance.

Shayad tumhe usse pyaar ho gaya ho ga, kan wo tumhare dil me jaga banagayi iss Chor-police ke khel mein ki tumhe bhi nahi pata chala.

Because of Avni's act I made her forcefully marry to Neil, at first he was angry but after I explained him why I did it, he understood it. And she started fighting for her, to get her justice for the loss childhood, her family.

(After few months~~ about 7 months)

Neela ma, where are you? Yelled Neil.

Kya hua, Neil? Itna kyun chila rahe ho?

Neela ma, thank you, thank you so much!! Apne mujhe meri zindagi ka sabse acha tohfa diya hai. You the know the best one. He said in excitement!

Mainne kya diya tumhe? I asked him in confusion.

Avni. Apne mujhe Avni di hain, aur main usse itna pyaar karta hun, ki wo ab meri zindagi ban gayi. Thank you so much ma, he kissed me on my cheeks.

I laughed, acha it's ok Neil, yeh kiss tum jake api biwi ko do, mujhe nahi.

I could see that he was embarrassed but happy, probably the most happiest person.

"Acha Neela, hum chalte hain said Bebe, bringing me out of the old happy memories.

I nodded, while giving her an assuring smile.

Ali, jane se pehle tum Neil ko andar bhej do.

Ali did as I told him, Neil came inside still with change in his emotions, fews days ago when I met him he was smiling, laughing, happy and now he is just standing there, making me fear that I might lose him too.

I went up to him squeezed his shoulder, "Neil, hamari Avni theek hai, dekho usse kuch nahi hua, vo bilkul theek hain. Neil jayo jake uske paas betho. Go Neil. I said to in an encouraging voice.

But he just froze there like a tomb, no movement. Finally I took him and make him sit on the chair beside Avni, and placed his hand on hers. That's when I saw a little movement. He grabbed her hand and stared at her with an unexpected emotion in his eyes.

His eyes were filled with disappointment.

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I know this one isn't as long as the first one, so sorry for that. Hope I have met your expectations. Also next time I will try to update a little sooner. Thanks!!