T3 mannet ff- sympathy or love? ~completed~ thankyouall /pg91 - Page 53

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Last chapter





Geet tried to ask him again but he refused straight he was concerned for her but she took it otherwise .
She was not unaware that maan consider her just responsibilty. But today she fell like burden . her love for him doesnot let her stay here more so she decided to leave him . once the child is born she will give it to him if he want but she can't be burden on him .


Geet wiped her tears and left toward her previous home .
..


It was 5 hrs since he last saw geet . he was felling something something that he can't explain he was scared .
An unknown fear englufing him when meera yash knocked door of his room .
y- maan where is kavya?
Maan look at her frowned
M -kavya? She must be in her room !
Geet bhi toh hogi uske saath

Me- bhai geet nhi h!
I didn't see her since few hrs .

Maan get up immidetly .
M- how is it possible?
Yash come with me . meera go & call guards .

..

k- di i'm tired ghar chalte h na vapas . maan bhai k pass
kavya said
G- no kavya get up . we are just going to reach
K- di
G- I TOLD U NA KAVYA . CHUP CHALO AB
Tears formed in her eyes
Her di never raised voice on her

..

M -HAVE U GONE MAD?
Maan shouted on guard
Who didn't informed him geet & kavya went out .
S- what u did maan?
M dadi i did nothing
I told her not to go her home as she was weak .
What if something happen to her?
All look toward maan worried
But maan immideatly dialled a no ordering him to get gert address in just 15 minutes otherwise he is gone.

..

Geet open door of her room and coughed due to dust .
K- di bukh lagi h
Gert look toward kavya worried she didn't take a single thing with them bcoz she doesn't feel it right as when he doesn't want her then how could she?
Vaise bhi he did enough!
Her sister is well that's enough for her . but now she need to do something .
Geet immidatly went and clear a glass giving kavya a glass of water to drink .
G abhi yeh le lo
i'll arrange something

kavya did nothing just drink the glass understanding the same sadness that she saw once .
she missed her bhai

she was about to put the glass when her eyes fell on his bhai

..
Maan went to take geet when he reached her old house . he witnessed kavya asking food and geet just trying to divert her
Maan clentched his fist to control himself and doing sonething drastic .
He immidatly signalled guard to bring something .

M -kavya
Maan whispered

Kavya run toward him as soon her eyes fell on her bhai
Maan kissed her forehead
M- kavya go with guards i'm coming with ur di .

k- sachi?
Maan just nodded
Kavya left from their ..

..

Maan hold her hand
M- chalo yha s
He turned to move but she didn't move an inch
M chalo geet!

G -HUM NHI AAENGE !
I don't want to be ur responsibilty further i agreed i love u . but that doesn't mean aapko isse puri zindagi jhelne ki zarurat h

M- shut up now chalo
G -nhi .
Hum aap par aur burden nhi ban sakte

Maan turned toward her and frowned
M- burden?
G- haan
I know u were forced .
Asp bahut ache h ki despite this u give us place . but till when?
I don't want to be a burden in ur life!
I didn't want to
I promise . i'll handover child to u .

Maan clentched his fist
Pulling her close to himself

M- KYA KHA TUMNE?
PHIRSE KAHO ?

G - i'll handover child to

M JUST SHUT UP U DAMMIT!
HOW DARE U THINK U CAN LEAVE ME?
Tum samajti kya ho?
U ARE NOT A BURDEN ON ME!
GET THAT IN UR MIND STRAIGHT !

His voice soften then
M- i know i was forced.
But once u tied with me ! u belong to me!
U just can't leave me!
Tumhe samaj nhi aata ki i can't live without u?
AADAT HO GYI H TUMHARI NAGGING KI MUJHE.

Geet look at her man in wonder. Is he scolding her or making her understand?
Is this the way to confess ?

M- ab chalti ho y nhi?
He asked in anger

When she didn't respond maan picked her up in his arms and move toward car

Geet look at him in wonder before smiling and putting her head on his chest .
She loved the feeling of being wanted .
She now understood it's not necessary everytime a filmy confesstion .
She understaood he is never going to confess .
A confesstion is not always important .
He is different so was his ways to confessing his love .
some confesstion never happen

That was the start of a new journey on the path of love .
He never confessed but his action always show otherwise .

Geet finally understood it was not sympathy but was a journey for his love .
..

The end

Edited by Ramjanki - 7 years ago
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Nice ending, hope there is a epilogue. Her insecurities get the best of her.
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Did not expect this to end so soon!

Thanks for the pm and for sharing this amazing story!

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Last Part

beautiful update! superbly written!

can understand why she left!

Kavya misses Maan! Geet unable to handle everything alone!

Glad Maan got to know she left!

Thank God he found her!

he may have not confessed directly but he revealed his feelings to her!

great that she understood him!

She got him and his love!

please post an epilogue!



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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing ending... Finally geet got tge assurance of being loved... Maan's way of showing love is different and she learnt it at yge end...
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Good that Maan poor sense in Geet's mind
She is his need
The feeling of being wanted was all that her required

Loved it
Need epilogue
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Maan get to know after 5 hour's that Geet and kavya missing from mansion he inquiries from guard and get panic he immediately ordered to get Geet old house address
and he reached their when kavya asking fr food he went in and hugged kavya and send her qoth guard
and then told Geet to come with him she refused and told what she thought he shut hr and confessed in rude way how much he wanted hr in his life Geet was dumbstruck with his confession he lifted hr and she understand that it's his way of confess he don't know how to polite
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