AVNEIL: His Possession { Chapter 2 on page 2}

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Guys, Wanted for so long to see a possessive Neil but couldn't and due to the current track and the abrupt end of the show thought to pen this down.


In this story, Neil after losing his first love to an accident has become very possessive to the point of obsession towards people and things that are close to him. Juhi is really dead in this story.

The story starts from before Avneil's marriage and when Neil was still engaged to Rhea, But here he will be attracted to Avni and also knows the complete truth about her and the Mehtas from Neela Ma.

Chapter 1

During Neil and Rhea's Mehendi ceremony,
Diksha Bua showed the pictures of Avneil and instigated Dayawanti Mehta and Rhea against Avni.

R: How dare you try to snatch my fiance from me Ananya?
And she slapped Avni but Neil came in between receiving the slap. Everyone gasped in shock as Neil was slapped instead of Avni.
N: How dare you, Rhea? You don't even what happened, instead of clarifying it with me you jumped to your own conclusions. Do you want to know the truth?
A: Mr.Khanna, please don't
N: NO... Stop it Ananya, for how long will you protect these ungrateful people? I thought Rhea was your best friend but clearly, only you feel that way.
R: Tell me what led you two to hug each other, I want to know.
N: First, We were not hugging, it was Ananya helping me walk and dressing my wounds after your lovely brother Amol hit me with his car and let me die on the streets. It was a hit and run case along with drunk and drive. I was fortunate enough that Ananya was passing by and also witnessed what happened, She was the only witness and patched me up and also begged me not to file a case against your brother because he was like her brother too.
But what did your lovely brother do, he kidnapped Ananya's mother to blackmail her. He also tried to kill Ananya, her mother and me. When I went to their home to ask them to file a case against your brother but they vehemently refused and your brother thought it as a nice opportunity to kill all 3 together without much hassle.

Everyone in the hall were shocked and Amol was sweating heavily. But Neil wasn't finished yet.

N: I was going to break our engagement but the so-called backstabbing friend of yours pleaded and begged me to not break it as it will shatter your family. But enough is enough, a relationship can get past anything if there was trust but that's what is lacking in ours. So I am breaking this relationship with you.
S: Right tillu, I can't let my son enter a family of murderers.
DM: But we are business partners also, you can't just break the contract it will cause damage to both the companies.
Prakash: Nothing comes before my son and we are well off to take such petty losses. Don't worry Neil you don't have to oblige to this.

But Neil smirked, this was what he wanted all along. Now to play his card.
N: Dad I don't want you to incur any loses because of me, but at the same time I can't marry Rhea. The contract only states that I need to marry it does not specify any name. So I will marry Ananya instead and we can still go through with the contract.
DM: What??? No that can't happen
A: What? Are you out of your mind. I can't marry you Mr.Khanna.
N: Why can't you? You told me you will do anything for this family, to get them justice. Now what happened or were they just empty words.
A: But...But { think Avni, think...} I have a boyfriend and I love him very much, so I can't marry you.
N: Fine! So there is no marriage so no business deal. Let's go, dad, mom.
A: Wait! Mr.Khanna please don't do this. Rhea is a nice girl, she was just confused and angry.
N: Wow! Even after all this, you are still supporting them. But my mind is already made, either you marry me and they get the contract and Amol gets to walk free or No to everything, don't forget I have proofs against Amol for kidnapping, attempt to murder and hit & run that too on the ACP, just imagine the extent of crimes and its punishment. But since I am a generous person I am giving you 12 hours to decide. I want answers by tomorrow morning otherwise the contract is nullified. Let's go, mom, dad.



~ Avanthi ~

Eagerly awaiting your response...😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazingly Written 👏
Great Start...
Looking for More.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great starting
Eager to know what happens next.
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!!! It's awesome👏 please update soon!! I'd love to see more of obsessed Neil Khanna😉 can't wait😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you guys for the wonderful response, So here I am with a new update...😃😃
Would love to have more likes and comments😉😉



Chapter 2


In the car,
S: Tillu! What are you doing?
P: Neil, What you are doing is not right.
N: I love her mom, I love Ananya and I can't marry Rhea. After Juhi, the first person to make me smile wholeheartedly was her, when I am with her I forget all my sorrows. I just want to be with her, she makes me happy and I want that for the rest of my life. Is it wrong to want to be happy?
Both Swetha and Prakash got emotional but they tried to make him understand.
S: Tillu, Wanting to be happy is not wrong but she already loves someone, Snatching another person's happiness for us to be happy is wrong.
P: Your mother is right Neil. You heard her, She is in a relationship already.
N: No dad, she is lying.
S: And How do you know that?
N: Well!! When I realized my feelings for her. I did a complete background check on her to know more about her, Her likes, dislikes everything. But her life story shocked me but made me fall in love with her even more. I cannot tell you the complete details yet, but I can tell you that she is not in any relationship and doesn't believe in love. Because her father left her mother at the altar and walked off even after knowing that they are going to have a child together, not once but twice. So she doesn't believe in love. And she doesn't know that I know about her so even you guys are not supposed to say a word about it to her.
P: But Neil, it is still wrong...
S: Shut up Prakashji, If my tillu loves that girl, I mean Ananya then we should accept her into our family. If Ananya can make my tillu happy then she would surely become the daughter in law of our home and no one else.

Meantime in the Venue,

After the Khanna's stormed out Before anyone speak and accuse her Avni decided to play the victim and escape from the situation.
A: What was the need to create a scene, Rhea? If you wanted you could have asked me in the confines of your home. Why did you have to do this? I tried all the methods I could as your best friend to get you married to Mr.Khanna only because you like him, even though I don't approve that guy and in the process also saving your brother's ass from landing in jail, and this is how I get repaid. For once that ACP was right, only I'm true to this friendship and you don't even trust me to ask me about the photographs and instead jumped to conclusions. You know what my boyfriend asked me to accompany him to Germany where he got transferred and I fought with him stating it's my BFF's marriage and have to be with you here. Right now I feel ashamed of myself for fighting with him for a friend like you.
I am done with this, After all, I went through to get you, your dream wedding going against my loved ones and endangering my mother's life, What I get, I get tagged as a backstabber. Thank you, Rhe... Ms.Mehta for proving to me that you don't value our friendship even to the slightest bit. Goodbye Ms.Mehta I hope I don't see you ever again.
Avni moved towards DM,
A: Dadi I really thought at least you would support me, I thought this as my family and did everything but now no more, I am sorry Dadi.
And Avni left the venue, smirking to herself at the success of her plan.
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SLAP, Another slap echoed in the Hall...



~ Avanthi~

eagerly awaiting your response...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update please update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Really wanted something like this on the show.
Great start
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What's ur username in wattpad
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woah!! Awesome!! Always wanted something like this 😳 possessive obsessive Neil is a treat!! Can't wait to read after their marriage! Update soon please
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome... amazing...pm me if possible..

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