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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
@Chapter 3
Interesting update dear
Liked it !!
Dev was livid seeing Maan alive. Maan and Geet planned Maan's death foreplay to avoid get prisoned and had is connection with underworld too. Geet is Mafia's daughter. Maaneet are going to fly away to Australia. Loved Maan's grey shade and his characterization. Wish had more of Maaneet scene.
Perfect closure to Maan's death mystery.
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Part 1 - oh...story starts with the death of maan singh khurana and dev was suspected of killing him though indirectly. They were step brothers and media connected it to their rivalry and for property. Dev was sad to loose his brother but upset with all this allegations.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2 - Interesting. Like dev, you made me curious to know what really happened. Why maan put that condition to read his will in front of geet Sharma. Why maan so much trusted dev than any other family members.? So maan already married to geet and no one knows about it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3 - so it was all maan's plan to ran away with mafia's daughter, geet to Australia and he pulled act of his death. Oh...maan was bad guy, doing business in wrong way and he was chased by police and mafia. Really I feel bad for dev. Its him who have to face all negative comments and have to face mafia also, all thanks to maan. And he will enjoy his time with geet leaving dev in this mess. But glad that at least he told everything to dev. Maan was not even bothered putting dev's life in this mess. Liked this almost villainous maan.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
REVIVING The thread in Process~ Keeping it alive by comments!!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
one of the best suspense thriller I have read..
really great TS.. the concept as well as the content were very good..
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
maan's character here had grey shades & geet being daughter of a don.. their love affair was something to read.
Edited by LovelyUmang5 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
I had to read this story again
it was truly refreshingly different
Maan was alive but dead for the world as he dealt with illegal business
while his wife Geet was the daughter of a Don
Maan did have a shady character it was actually lovely reading about him in a different light while Dev was the responsible one
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Amazing story... Love this mistry... Soo geet is underworld din only daughter... . And maan is involved in it... To escape from this he had plan his own death... Superb... But mostly like Dev reaction after knowing the. Truth...🤣🤣 Rocking story...👍🏼. Totally fabulous...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
You must reconsider into turning this story into a SS

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