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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

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Edited by Ms.Lizzie - 6 years ago

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

thanks 4 da pm! Shot 2 and 3 - splendid updates! well written! So Dev intrigued and goes 2 meet Geet! he is stunned when she says she is Geet Maan Singh Khurana! Dev meets Maan! and Maan explains! Maan planned his death to avoid prison! so Geet is a mafia's daughter! Maaneet leaving the country! nice end

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sanam1234u

@sanam1234u

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

justtt amazing...😃😃😃

oh poor poor dev..😆😆😆😆😆

maan and geet are realy bad guyes😆😆😆😆

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Secret

@Pqwert207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

loved d story

But i wish there were more of maneet

Thnxz for pm

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

I knew Maan would be alive but all these twists totally unexpected!!!! Maan being a entirely different character and Dev being a responsible one is a welcoming change.

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Srivalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Awesome story.

Loved it.

Very well written.

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seema saini

@HateMee

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Just amazing super mind blowing fantastic ye sari Tarif storry ki last 3 lines k liye 😆 poor dev 😆

Nyyc different concept

mastermind Maan Singh Khurana

Loved ittt

Thanks 4 PM ji

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

maan dead first part itself
nice start

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@Endgame

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

more money more trouble and more gossip
dev is getting all
so geet married to maan

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

@Chapter 2

Nice update dear

Liked it !!

Dev was intrigued about the whole happenings aftermath Maan's death news and will. For a change Dev was protrayed as responsible person and was intrigued to meet Geet Sharma. Geet introduced thyself as Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana which stunned him.

:))