Wrote it way back in Jan 2011 it's my 1st ever fictional work which I wrote 😊
MAAN AND GEET ARE MARRIED SINCE 3 MONTHS
EARLY MORNING:
MAAN {while dressing up}: Geet mera breakfast ready hay mujhay new project ki construction site jana hai, jaldi breakfast prepare kardo please getting late jan.
GEET: Ji Maan breakfast ready hai, aap neechay aajain mai table set karti hun.
MAAN: Ok Geet {while giving his billion dollar smile}
GEET LEFT FOR THE KITCHEN, MEAN WHILE MAAN WAS ALL READY FOR OFFICE AND CAME DOWNSTAIRS
MAAN: Good morning dadima.
DADIMA: Good morning Maan beta.
MAAN: Geet nashta daido plz getting really late.
GEET: Ji Maan bus 2 mins abhi aai
AFTER HAVING BREAKFAST
MAAN: Bye Dadima
DADIMA: Bye Maan Beta
MAAN: Bye Geet {while giving kiss on her forehead}
GEET: Bye Maan, aram sai car drive karea ga, aur pohactay hi phone karea ga.
MAAN: Yes madam aur kuch.
GEET: Maan shararat nahi, ab late nahi horaha, jaiye ab.
MAAN LEFT FOR CONSTRUCTION SITE
"Maan driving at his normal speed while talking with Geet through Bluetooth, while applying brakes Maan felt that brakes are not working, someone destroyed the break, he was so worried but kept his tone normal so that Geet will be unaware of what is happening across the phone, suddenly Maan saw a car heading towards him but he cannot do anything as breaks are already tampered by someone and the next thing he knew that the collision, as Geet was on the phone throughout so she heard the bang she screamed
GEET {shocked and scared hearing a bang}: MMMAAANNN.
DADIMA {gets worried seeing her screaming Maan's name}: Geet beta kia hua, aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi kai hua Maan ko, Geet beta kuch to bolye, bolye beta.
VICKY aka VIKRAM SINGH KHURANA MAAN'S ONLY YOUNGER BROTHER
VICKY {came running hearing her scream}: Bhabhi kia hua aap aisai kyun chillaain, kia hua bhaiya ko. {Take the phone from Geet} bhaiya you there aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahay hello...
SOME PEOPLE WHO WERE PRESENT AT TIME OF ACCIDENT SAW INJURED MAAN LYING UNCONCIOUS ON THE ROAD AS HIS CAR BANG WITH TREE BECAUSE HE TURNED HIS CAR TO AVOID HEAD ON COLLISION.
UNKNOWN PERSON {while picking Maan's cell phone}: Hello inka accident hogaya hai ham inhai hospital lai kai ja rahay hain..
VICKY {shocked}: Bhaiya ka Accident, aap inhay SAVITRI KHURANA HOSPITAL {owned by Maan's dadi it is a charity hospital}, ham abhi pohach rahay hain.
DADIMA AND VICKY LOOKED AT GEET AS SHE IS ROOTED ON HER PLACE DUE TO SHOCK
VICKY: Bhabhi kuch to boliye please bhabhi, agar aap aisai toot jain gi to dadi ko kon sambhalay ga.
GEET: Vicky please mujhay meray Maan kai pass lai chalo please Vicky.
VICKY: Dadima aap yaheen rahye, mai bhabhi ko lai kai hospital ja raha hun
FINALLY GEET CAME OUT OF DALIMA AND START TO CRY SILENTLY WHILE VICKY DRIVES TOWARDS THE HOSPITAL AS SOON AS POOSIBLE
HOSPITAL SCENES:
GEET {at reception}: Maan Singh Khurana kahan hai, accident case hai, please jaldi batao.
NURSE: Geet mam Maan sir OT mai hai, unkai head aur hand pai injury hai, aur abhi unconscious hain.
GEET FEELS THAT SHE CAN'T TAKE IT MORE AND ABOUT TO COLLASP, WHEN VICKY HOLD HER.
VICKY: Bhabhi aap theekh hai na, please sambhalye, bhaiya ko kuch nahi hoga.
VICKY HOLD GEET AND ACCOMPANY HER TOWARDS OT
Both Vicky and Geet settled themselves on a bench in front of OT, Geet silently praying to her babaji for her Maan's health and to keep HIS mercy on him, OT lights gets off and Doctor comes outside.
DOCTOR: Mrs.Khurana, Maan is out of danger now, magar abhi bhi behosh hain, jab tak unhay hosh nahi ata ham kuch keh nahi saktay.
GEET: Doctor kya mai Maan sai mill sakti hun please doctor mujhay unhay dekhna hai.
DOCTOR: Abhi ham unhay room mai shift kar rahay hain phir aap mill sakti hain.
GEET: Thank you doctor.
VICKY AND GEET WALKED TOWARDS MAAN ROOM
VICKY: Bhabhi aap jaiye mai yaheen hun, bhaiya ko aap ki zaroorat hay.
GEET ENTERED IN MAAN'S ROOM WITH HEAVY HEART, SHE SIT BESIDE MAAN
GEET {while holding Maan's hand and crying}: Maan please aankhain kholye na, mujh sai baat kijea, aap ka chup rehna mujh sai bardasht nahi horaha, please Maan mujhay itni bari saza mat dijeye, mai aap kai bina nahi reh sakti aur na hi aap ko is hal mai dekh sakti hun, please Maan mujh sai baat kijea na Maan...
SUDDENLY GEET FEELS SOME MOVEMENT IN MAAN'S HAND
GEET: Maan aap meri baat sun rahay hain na Maan please aankhain kholain na please
5 HOURS PASSED MAAN STILL UNCONSCIOUS, GEET SITTING IN SAME POSITION CRYING BITTERLY, ASKING MAAN TO WAKE UP
MAAN REGAING HIS SENCES BACK, HE SLIGHTLY MOVE HIS HAND, STRUGGLING TO OPEN EYES, FINALLY AFTER A LONG WAIT OF MORE THAN 5 HOURS MAAN OPEN HIS EYES TO SEE HIS DREAM GIRL, HIS LIFE, HIS STRENGHT IN FRONT OF HIM
MAAN {having problem in speaking}: Geet yeh kya hal bana rakha hai apna, mai theekh hun rona band karo...
GEET: Maan aap theekh hona, ainda aisi saza bilkul mat daina mujhai, in kuch ghantoon mai mujh pai kia guzri hai aap ko pata bhi hai, har pal aisa lag raha tha koi mujh sai meri saansain cheen raha ha, Maan mai mar jaon gi agar aap ko kuch hua to.
MAAN {slowly lifting his hand to wipe her tears which were continuously flowing}: Shu Geet bas bohat roli ab mai theekh hun na, hosh mai hun na ab mai tumhay aik ansu nahi bahanai doon ga, yeh ansu meray liye kitnai anmol hai tumhay pata bhi nahi hai, Geet please sambhalo apnai aap ko {Maan gestured her to give him a hug, while hugging her}, dehko Geet mai yahen hun tumharay pass, tumhari bahoon mai, mai kahen nahi ja raha apni mishit ko choor kai, bas ab chup hojaoo.
GEET CALLS THE DOCTOR AND INFORMED HIM THAT MAAN IS CONSCIOUS NOW, DOCTOR CAME AND CHECK MAAN, HE SUGGESTED HIM FULL BED REST AS HE HAD A HEAD INJURY AND TOLD THEM THAT HE WILL REMAIN UNDER OBSERVATION FOR 2 WEEKS THEN THEY CAN TAKE HIM HOME. DOCTOR TAKE THE LEAVE LEAVING BEHIND TWO LOVE BIRDS. VICKY CAUGHT UP WITH DOCTOR AND ASKED HIM ABOUT MAAN'S CONDITION AND MEDICATION. AFTER DISCUSSING WITH DOCTOR VICKY MOVED TOWARDS MAAN'S ROOM.
VICKY {having tears in his eyes by seeing maan in this condition} : Bhaiya aap theekh hona, aap nai to jan hi nikal di thi, bhabhi nai ro ro kai apna bura hal kardiya hai, please bhaiya ainda itni bari saza nahi daina.
MAAN: Vicky mai theekh hun, pareeshan mat ho.
DADIMA ENTER MAAN'S ROOM
DADIMA: Maan beta yeh sab kaisai hua, aap theekh haina.
MAAN: Dadima mujhay kuch nahi hua hai, aap sab itna kyun pareeshan horahay ho, Geet nai bhi dehkain apna kia hal ban liya hai, Vicky bhi pareeshan hai, mai bilkul theekh hun, yeh chootain to kuch din mai theekh hojain gi, aap sab sambhalye apnai aap ko.
DADIMA, VICKY AND GEET GIVE A WEEK SMILE TO MAAN. VICKY AND DADIMA SAID BYE TO MAAN AND WENT TO MANSION, LEAVING GEET WITH MAAN.
GEET: Maan ab aap aram karye mai yaheen hun aapkay pass, mai aapko ab aik pal kai liye bhi alag nahi karoon gi apnai aap sai, ab chalye apni aankhain band karye aur soo jaye {geet slightly moving her fingers in his hairs so he can sleep easily}
FULL 2 WEEKS GEET WAS THERE WITH MAAN, SHE DOESN'T LEFT HIS SIDE FOR EVEN A SECOND, SHE HELPED HIM IN EATING , DRINKING. FINALLY THE DAY CAME WHEN DOCTOR SAID THAT MAAN IS PERFECTLY FINE NOW AND THEY CAN TAKE HIM HOME BUT NO STRESS FOR 1 MONTH. MAAN FEELS SOO GOOD AND HAPPY REACHING KHURANA MANSION AFTER 2 WEEKS. DADI TOOK HIS ARTI AND TELL GEET TO TAKE HIM UP TO HIS ROOM. WHOLE 1 MONTH GEET DOESN'T ALLOW MAAN TO GO OFFICE, HE WAS ON COMPLETE BED REST AND ENJOYING SPENDING QUALITY TIME WITH HIS FAMILY AND SEEING THEM HAPPY...
THE PERSON WHO PLANNED TO KILL MAAN CAME TO KNOW THAT HE IS SAFE AND HIS PLAN FAILED, HE ADMITTED HIS DEFEATE THAT HE CANNOT DO ANYTHING TO HARM MAAN AS HE HAS SPECIAL BLESSINGS FROM HIS FAMILY AND SPECIALLY THE LOVE OF HIS LIFE GEET..
...END...
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