AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09 - Page 23

Damn! This is getting all the more interesting! I missed quite a few chapters. Real life became a bit too hectic. But I had great fun catching up all the missed out chapters. :)

Wow! Avni is like superrr smarrt...she knows Neil will investigate so shez literally leavnig him crumbs so that he can be satisfied with that & not dig deeper.

I'm very late this time, really sorry for that

Originally posted by: Ashi3

Damn! This is getting all the more interesting! I missed quite a few chapters. Real life became a bit too hectic. But I had great fun catching up all the missed out chapters. :)

Thank you so much, Ashi. I understand, life can be hectic at times. Well, have I not been missing quite a few times? I did. Anyways, I am glad that you enjoyed reading those chapters. :)

Ananya is a force to be reckoned with. Her character sketch is very intriguing & mysterious. My previous question to you still remains. Is her name really Ananya, or is she Avni? And what is Red Alert? Is Aman her brother? What project are they working on? What does she actually do??? What's her job?! God! There are a hell lot of questions running in my mind, but not a single answer. Please answer them soon so that I can give some rest to my brain.

Thankfully. It's good to know her character's been appreciated so far. About your questions. I understand there are a number of questions running in your head and it's a headache to not have answers. But I can't just open my mouth. Not yet. Though, you will have most of your questions answered. You just have to wait for two more chapters. Till then, bare me please.

Neil is as clueless as I am, if not more. 😆 Loving his interactions with Ananya. His protective streak is coming to the forefront. Hope he'll solve the mystery of Ananya Verma soon. Why do I feel that he has not left her apartment premises yet and is going to follow her? 😉 Did he mislead her by getting someone else (maybe DD) to drive his car away?

Is there anyone else who can solve the mystery named Ananya Verma like Neil can? I doubt that. 😆 We will see exactly what happens and if he really is still around. Wow, you really think he can outsmart Ananya Verma. We will see 😉

Who is the serial killer? Why did he leave a trail behind for them to chase him? And why does he want to kill Ananya? Why did he murder all of his previous victims? What does this person actually want? I have a thought going on in my mind since sometime now. Let's see if that comes true or not.

I am more eager to know what is running in your head than my ideas. 😛 About your questions, I will try to get them answered soon. I will really try.

But for that you'll have to update the story. So please update the next chapter soon dear. Can't wait to read more.

Originally posted by: paayaal

Wow! Avni is like superrr smarrt...she knows Neil will investigate so shez literally leavnig him crumbs so that he can be satisfied with that & not dig deeper.

Yeah! Ananya here can do a lot of things that are beyond Neil's imagination.

I wonder if SuperCop Khanna is going to be so easily fooled this time round?

I am amazed by the expectations most of you all have regarding Neil, the supercop. But, we will have to wait till you find out.

Hmm...Avni has sneaked out for her secret meeting thinking Neil has left...I have a feeling that shez about to be taken by surprise by how smart 'the officer' actually is!!😉

We'll see who is to be taken by surprise, or how exactly do I meet the expectation you have with the story. I will try though.

Loved the whole Sherlock debate!!

I am glad you did.

Thanks for the PM.

Not at all necessary. I enjoy these reviews, so PMing isn't much of a task :)

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam

I'm very late this time, really sorry for that No, that's absolutely fine. Plus, here you are with a review. That's all that matters.

Omg I'm loving Aman, such a smart ass he is! 😆 I'm loving this thing, hats off to u for his characterisation I am glad Aman is loved. His character was an impromptu addition but I am loving the response he is grabbing. Plus, I also have some more side characters coming up. Hopefully, they will be as good as Aman is. I am hoping I can work towards it.

Oh my Aman is really quick plus he knows what his sister needs... I'm loving this duo Thankfully so. Because you can expect some more of this duo.

What was that "Red Alert"? You will get to know soon.

Btw will u be surprised if I tell u that I'm missing the murderer in picture though there r some references to him? 😆 I should be, but not really. I would have, myself been intrigued to have the murderer in the picture more often had I been on the readers list for this story. So not really. But I get it. You will have this murderer back in picture quite soon. Just wait for a couple of chapters more.

These two such kids in front of each other fighting for a thing as puny as a name😆

I loved Ananya's swag , she answered all his questions satisfactorily but I doubt there's something more to it. She passed on only those info she wanted him to know... our girl is a smart mystery. But I wonder if Neil believed her dis time Thankfully the scene was loved by you all and was played out well enough. It delivered only what was meant to. Let's not get into Neil's brain now. I wouldn't want to answer that.

Loved the sherlock part but the cutest was the name part Last minute additions can do wonders at times, I believe. This one did for me. 😆

Ananya sneaked out after double checking that Neil left still my instinct is tellin' me dat she's gonna be taken in for a surprise! Secret meeting, eh? I'm impatiently waiting for dat. Let's see if Neil surprises her😉 Wow, you really think Neil can outsmart Miss Verma. I am more than up to see your reactions for the next chapters. I would love to see how you react to their surprised faces. If surprise plays out 😛

Thanks for the PM

Please don't. I love to read these reviews. So PMing isn't much of an effort

Waiting for the next one😃

Hopefully, you wouldn't have to wait for long. I am working on the next one anyways. :)

gripping..thank you for the update😊

Omg ! This is getting so much interesting ! What an entry by ACP Neil ! Ananya man she is a force to be reckoned . Had she expected him to reach there sometime if not so soon .! She was like least affected by his sudden entry . Neil must have been more than at loss of words 😆

One thing is standard in this: Ananya will always run and Neil will always catch her; Ananya will always try to do this her way and Neil will always try and stop her. I can actually feel Ananya's frustration at not being able to outsmart our SuperCop and I can also feel Neil's anger at her always defying him! This is fun! When are these stone-heads gonna realise that they will have to work together?!

Awaiting your next update! This is getting exciting! Update soon! 😳