Tale of RiKara against Odds ~ SS (PART 3 pg 7) Let The Karma Begin

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I wanted to write something light and funny , so came up with this idea.
This SS is based on the OS , Dabanggri Sharma , that I'd written a few days back. I'd advice you to read that before starting this .Only difference is that here , other characters too will be included .

DISCLAIMER : This is not based on the characterisation of people in the show and is purely a work of fiction . So please refrain from taking offence :)
Most characters here are having a grey shade.I have moulded them the way I want to suit the storyline.
Those who cannot tolerate it and may feel hurt, don't read it and waste your time .
A comic PURELY for RiKara fans.
People having sensitive hearts-stay away!










PROLOGUE



Gauri Kumari Sharma worked as a textile designer in Oberoi Industries.

The whole of the industry was handled by the members of the house. No other person was given a position of high authority.
That was the reason why a fat headed and arrogant Pinke Oberoi was given the opportunity to boss the designing sector. Though she had a very little idea about good designing , she enjoyed her job as she got to boss around. She successfully maintained her two faced nature by behaving well on people's faces and cursing them in her head . A lady who believed in revenge , someone who would do anything to insult the person who criticised her.
The whole of the Oberoi clan thought too much about themselves. And they were the people who believed in the notion of maintaining a class and teaching their children the same. Even if they wanted to do something else in their lives , they would have to spend half of their lives helping to operate a sector of Oberoi industries.

One person who was least interested in business was Pinke's nephew Omkara Singh Oberoi , the son of Tej and Jahnvi. A good natured boy in his early twenties , who has more interest in art.But since the Oberois didn't want him to go out of hand (as per them) , they assigned him a duty under Pinke . They thought Pinke could bring him on line. Huh ! So in short , Pinke bosssed the designing sector , Omkara was one of the the sub head's ...yes one of ! And Gauri was a normal employee .
Basically , Gauri worked under Omkara .

So , would you like to see how does Gauri survive amongst the mad clan of Oberois ?


P.S Anyone interested ? 😆In case I continue with this , the updates would be short. !
And another thing is , I would write based on reader's wish or response. Those who would dislike Pinke are free to give in ideas to teach her a lesson .

PART 1 - PAGE 2
PART 2 - PAGE 4
PART 3 - PAGE 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice.. continue soon thanks for the pm
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Thank God Pinky is doing something rather than saying Oh My Mata.. 😆 😆
Now give me the first part soon.. 😳
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Thank God Pinky is doing something rather than saying Oh My Mata.. 😆 😆

Now give me the first part soon.. 😳


Let me get annoyed over something...then I'll update 😈
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OOO Gauri working under Om huh...update soon 😃
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SHOT 1 (a)


Gauri wasn't new to the fashion world. She'd already made a position for herself in the industry with her exceptional talent. She was smart , beautiful , charming , intelligent , witty with an overdose of skills. Who wouldn't like her ?But... There existed such people unfortunately !
She had haters mahn !! Tooo many actually ! People who were actually jealous of all the work she did. Though they never expressed their jealousy directly . Most of the times, they tried to calm themselves by making fun of her designs , and of course comparing her with everyone around.
She worked for Mr Ghanshyam Sitara on contract , Boss of the Sitara Textile industries , and was one of his most favorite employees. When her contract with Mr Sitara was over , he suggested her to apply for a job in the Oberoi industries. Mr Sitara even told her that he would talk to the head of Designing sector there and would give a recommendation. He was sure she'd be selected for the job , as she was perfect at her work.



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IN THE OBEROI OFFICE


Gauri was walking towards the corridor where people seeking the job were waiting. As she went and took a seat , she looked around to notice that there were only boys sitting in the area. Not a single girl was present. Few boys who tried to check her out were put at place by her dangerous glare.
Ignoring the fools around , she started looking towards her supposedly future Boss's Cabin when her eyes caught the most surprising sight . A handsome long haired guy talking to another guy with golden colored short hairs. They weren't just talking actually , the short haired guy who seemed to be elder was ruffling the other one's hair , patting his cheek and soon both hugged.

It was indeed a weird sight...she wasn't sure why she didn't like the way those boys were sticking to each other like that. She wondered whether such boys were allowed to do all this in office. They could look for a more private area.
Just then , she heard the peon calling out their names. Only then she realised that they were none other than Omkara Singh Oberoi and Abhay Singh Oberoi ; the cousins known for their special bond.
Gauri giggled to herself and thought that she doesn't even stick like that to her own sister Bhavya . This brotherly bond definitely intrigued her for more.



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" Gauri Sharma " please go inside. It's your turn , said the peon.


Edited by AhamyTed - 7 years ago
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SHOT 1 (b)

Gauri entered inside to see Mrs Pinke Oberoi sitting nicely on her chair like a boss. Well she was a boss ! But the room didn't have only Pinke present , the long haired guy , Omkara too was sitting there.
She went on to greet her and also Omkara . Pinke replied well but Omkara seemed so disinterested . He was more into reading "Harry Potter". Gauri didn't like someone ignoring her like that but she chose to leave the matter.

Pinke told her to take a seat and took her file along with a few designing samples she made . She made faces and kept looking at all the designs . Her looks were as though she liked the work but didn't want to accept it ! After a long time , she finally said that the designs were actually nice. Then she turned to Omkara to take his opinion . When Omkara showed least interest again , she slapped lightly on his shoulder and told him to look at the designs. That was the first time Omkara looked at me . He smiled and said "Looks like a million Bucks" , Gauri felt nice being complimented . Pinky slapped his shoulder again telling him that she was talking about the designs. Soon Omkara changed his stance and said that he was talking about the designs only.

They made Gauri sit there for a while and went inside a little room to talk something . After a while Pinke came out and told her that she won't get the job.
Gauri was startled. She never expected that these people would reject her on the face. On asking why were they rejecting her , Pinke told that Omkara's parents want only male employees to work under him . On which Gauri was even more shocked. If there were no female employees allowed , why did they call her in the first place. On enquiring further , Pinke told that Mr Sitara has made a request so she couldn't deny.

When a disappointed Gauri was about to leave the room , Pinke called her back and told that her designs were actually nice and they would want to keep her, but there's just one condition.
Gauri frowned and asked what that condition was .
The condition was that if she dressed up like a boy , they would keep her . Only that the secret would be kept between the three present in the room i.e Omkara , Pinke and Gauri.
Gauri wasn't sure about accepting the idea . How could she become a boy and work ?
She said sorry and was about to leave when Pinke told her that they would make her the head of designers and offered a pay quite higher than what she got earlier.

Her eyes fell on the book kept on Omkara's table and she thought of an idea.

P.S Done with chapter one ! Do give your reviews people !
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UPDATED PART 1 !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was really funny loved the start.
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Originally posted by: sirimiri

This was really funny loved the start.


Thank you !!😃

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