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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kanak ironed Shiv and Suman's clothes and arranged nicely in the armoire, She had some time to kill before Shiv came home from school. The servants had an afternoon off on Tuesdays. Maasa had gone to visit an old friend. Uma and Meera were at work.
Kanak felt restless. She had convinced herself that Uma was a big fraud. Yet nothing had prepared her for their first meeting after the gap of 2 long years with no communication. The sight of his beloved face drove everything else away from her mind. The clouds of deep sorrow moved away from her heart to reveal the image of Uma that perpetually lived there. No matter what this was her one true love and it could never go away. Her legs had moved towards him of their own volition, The magnetic pull was as omnipresent as it always was. His face was more rugged. There were shadows under his eyes and fine lines of pain? furrowed his brows. They had not been able to take their eyes off of each other...

The bell rang and Kanak broke out of her reverie'.She went to the door thinking it might be maasa,She was taken aback to see the tall figure of Uma. His face looked a little flushed and his eyes looked dull..Kanak was going to ask why he was here this early but then thought why she should care. He barely looked at her and went straight to his room. Kanak went back to her own room too. She lingered for 5 minutes before starting to feel uneasy about how Uma looked. She could not help venturing out to take a peek through the half opened doorway of his room. He was laying on the bed still in his suit. His legs were dangling down as he had not even taken his shoes off. Kanak's heart began to beat faster. Was he okay?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome Deebz..please continue.. your story is more interesting than the current track!
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The image of Uma being poisoned by maasi flashed across Kanak's brain.Oh No! Kanak gulped in fear. Had Aditya done something? Kanak strode into the room. "Uma she tried to wake him. He seemed to barely hear her. Alarmed, she touched his forehead. It was burning with fever. Somewhat mollified that it wasnt poison, she moved to make him more comfortable. She removed his shoes and tie. With great difficulty, managed to get his coat off. Then she slowly got him to lie more comfortably. Kanak put tepid water compresses on his forehead to lessen the fever. When it subsided a little, she ran to his clinic and got the fever medicine. She somehow made him swallow it. She opened a window for some fresh air. Put a thin sheet on him to cover. She sat at the foot of the bed watching him sleep. When his temperature seemed to stabilize a little, she sighed in relief. She kept fresh water by his bedside and left the room. The doorbell rang. "Good! It must be maasa, She opened the door to maasa, left her in charge of Uma and quietly went back to her room.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kanak sat on her bed, hugging a pillow to her stomach to keep the hollow feeling off. The urge to go back to,check on Uma was so strong that she had to bite down hard to stop herself. Tears fell unchecked at her own plight. How could she still love this man, the one who had wounded her soul so deeply? There was no real explanation. It was just the plain and simple truth. Her love for him was eternal. It was unconditional. It did not need reciprocation. It did not need his physical proximity. It just was going to be there always and forever. The realization was a wake up call for Kanak. She looked around the room. What was she doing here? All her squabbles with Meera seemed pointless now. There was no battle to win or lose. She had her Uma with her always, in her heart. Kanak packed her bags quietly and left the haveli.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Can't forget your story about divorce track same way this too. realisation you portrayed excellent but can't expect any logical stuff from show. Love this deebz thanks a lot
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TSMSPfan

Can't forget your story about divorce track same way this too. realisation you portrayed excellent but can't expect any logical stuff from show. Love this deebz thanks a lot


Thank you dear. We are looking for KanUm emotional connection and they keep showing villains and drama,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful write up Deebz👍🏼 Wish we had seen some of this in the show as well
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Deebz.. .Very beautifully written 👏 thanks and update soon! !

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