Twist & Turn Tales-(Rikara) -THE LAKE-Completed-pg6 - Page 7

Originally posted by: RingsOfSaturn

Hello Ms.Lizzie @ Part 3

Thank you for the update and conclusion to The Lake! 😊
And apology for late comment, still recovering, first from holiday, then from a dreadful cough.

No problem... Hope you are good now..

Really liked how you brought very much of your own style to part 3, everyday life but positive.
Introduction of Liza and son was smoothly done and having Gauri deal with any upheaval that any revelation from Omkara might come up with re: past was already taken care of .
he he.
That was a clever move.

Thank you so much... I always prefer drama less subtle writing

If I may say so, I had imagined a bit more difficult transition for them, for their emotions to collide and their respective insecurities to do with the past to become an issue, but you erased that possibility very quickly. They made choices , but in a very prudent state.

Again each writer brings their own idea to the table. That is what the whole collaboration is about, right?

One last thing, perhaps its a cliche' but the story could have ended back at the lake, not sure why I feel that, but having diversions, is the whole point I guess of three writers collaborating.

True. The lake could have played a part.

As per all your writings, a smooth read. Well done.

Thank you😛