AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09 - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paayaal

Ok wow! What an emotional couple of chapters for poor Neil...his burgeoning feelings for Ananya are warring with his professionalism!


I hope he sorts it out soon or it'll become difficult for him to focus on finding the killer...because he needs to asap be the rational supercop that he is to save Ananya from that maniac who'll be fixated on her more coz shez now the 'one who got away'!!

She woke up & called worriedly for Ali...Sh*t!!

Next pls...soon.😃


Hey Payal, thank you for taking time to read this one and also for the lovely comment.

Neil's a mess right now. His emotions are all over the place and he needs to gather himself up and work towards his assignment. And hopefully, he will soon roll up his sleeves to do so. I, however, need to work towards making that thing possible.

Yes, she woke up and was worried about Ali but post that she also had a conversation (if that's what it can be called) with Mr. Supercop.

Had it been any other day, I would probably have gone back to writing and posted another chapter. But my head is all screwed up because of the last two episodes of Naamkarann. I believe, that's the case with most of us. I will get back to type this one. I just need to clear my head just like Neil needs to.

I will update by tomorrow at least. I guess. Please bear with me.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

His feelings for Ananya are overshadowing his work . He couldn't just allow her to be taken care by constables and gave a chance for the culprit to escape . He has fallen for her without any idea .And Ananya's Ali chant fuelled him that he was harsh with her . He has to immediately roll up his sleeve and go behind the culprit


Thank you!

Well, that's very much true. He let his emotions take him over and now he is going to have to think about it. It would be very important for him to straighten out his thoughts before everything goes down the drain. But is he really gonna do that? We'll have to see.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Oh wow... his care for her and her unexpected reaction ...can't wait to see where you take this...


Hey, Thank You! I hope I can take this to a better position from what Naamkarann stands at, right now. 🥱 Sorry, I can't really help the words -_-
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shenz!great update yet again!
I liked the "so" questioning😆
Neil's unknowing pull towards ananya..it is getting more interesting!😃
Update a long one next time please??😊and when is murderer gonna come in the picture again??!
I must say this is an awesome thriller!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333

Shenz!great update yet again!

I liked the "so" questioning😆
Neil's unknowing pull towards ananya..it is getting more interesting!😃
Update a long one next time please??😊and when is murderer gonna come in the picture again??!
I must say this is an awesome thriller!


Thank You, Darshana. :)

I am glad you find interesting. There's more of 'So' coming up. At least, I think so for now.

I am not sure, how long the update would be. And frankly, the update might have landed yesterday itself had it not been for the shitty episodes since the last two days.

I don't think I am getting the murderer in the picture anytime soon. There's a lot more to be sorted before the murderer revisits the two. Instead you can expect something from these two. Individually, maybe, maybe not. 😛 I will let you decide that.

It's good to know that you find the thriller good. However, lately, there's been not much thrill in this story. -_-
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-


Thank You, Darshana. :)

I am glad you find interesting. There's more of 'So' coming up. At least, I think so for now.

I am not sure, how long the update would be. And frankly, the update might have landed yesterday itself had it not been for the shitty episodes since the last two days.

I don't think I am getting the murderer in the picture anytime soon. There's a lot more to be sorted before the murderer revisits the two. Instead you can expect something from these two. Individually, maybe, maybe not. 😛 I will let you decide that.

It's good to know that you find the thriller good. However, lately, there's been not much thrill in this story. -_-


Then update!!😃
No murderer any soon..ohkay🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: darsh333


Then update!!😃
No murderer any soon..ohkay🥱


I will update by tomorrow. You will get it.
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Neilz concern for Ananya came out all wrong in front of her...she doesn't even know he has feelings for her so obv she took his words/accusations at face value...but I think therez a bit of guilt in there too & maybe a smudge of fear...of not listening to him & what could have happened...that's why she was so harsh with her words.

Unless Neil admits to his feelings for Ananya the arguments between them won't cease...because to be a cop he needs to be objective & right now he isn't in the right frame of mind!

You brought Aman back & that too in a positive role...helping his Di...he sounds like a hacker...what does Ananya do when shez not running the orphanage with Neela??



Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
This whole conversation turned into a fight because Ananya wasn't of any mood to entertain his questions . Unless Neil realises and confesses his feelings to her she won't stop fighting and he can't get aa straight mind to think about the case. wonder what will be her reaction when he confess ! She had taken his concern wrongly as his police nature .
I'm so happy that you brought Aman to help her . Is he hacker

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