Falling for you:: An Avneil Story(Chapter3 pg3) (April 3rd)

Hello Peeps!! I am here with a small drabbles. Or should I say some Random shots.

Index::

Chapter 1 :: Page 1

Note :: Page 2

Character sketch and plot glimpse :: Page 2

Chapter 2 :: Page 2

Chapter 3 :: Page 3

Introduction::

Avneil are final year college students. At first they weren't much into each other. Slowly they started developing feelings for each other. Both are very new to these foreign feelings. So it took them a good two years time to realise their feelings and cherish their bond and Now, They are deeply and madly in love.

I believe love and relationship is not always merry. We should face up's and downs and Thus, the bond grows stonger and stronger with each step together. Some times the situation may get ever worse we might be at the verge of breaking up but still love is some thing that's binds you and your partner together forever.

This write up's are something that came out from my imagination. I hope my imaginations will release all your fantasies.

Do let me know if I have to continue it here.

Hey peeps!! This is the first shot. Happy reading.

With out HIM

**Oakridge Alma Mater**

A girl was sitting in her college with her unusual red slash gloomy face. No one dared to ask her the reason because they were very much sure about the cause of anger slash gloominess.

Let's peep into her day.

Avni wasn't the want to wake up late. She is an early riser unlike most of the people of her age. But today was an unlike day. She didn't wake up. And all the blame goes to her stupid alarm which didn't buzz at the right time. Some dysfunction. There it goes.. the start of her day being ruined by a lifeless alarm. She couldn't take out her anger on it alas!!

That wasn't the only reason to her anger. There was no one at the house to bring her bed coffee. Even though the maid would have made her one but she didn't want to have coffee at that time. Note the point it was her and her alone decision to not have coffee.

Although after these many dysfunctions in her life she wanted to feel good so, she was searching for her favorite top in sky scrapping shelves. When finally she found her top. She realized it was tainted with detergent marks. She quickly made a decision to ask her maa about this later on. She wore a simple cropped v-neck top with ripped jeans and made her way out.

That's when she realized her Boyfriend didn't come to pick her up. The final thread broke and her anger knew no barriers. She mentally cursed her boyfriend for his carelessness and went in her Volkswagen.

Being a girl born with silver spoon all this problems are not usual to AVNI MEHTA. Of course these aren't any big problems compared to those people usually face in their life. But these are enough to turn on the lioness in Avni.

From the childhood onwards Avni is a pampered child. She is the only daughter of Ashish and Neela Mehta. Thus, makes her the sole heiress of the vast Dayawanti Empire. But all their love didn't spoil her. She is a gem and kind-hearted girl. But not today.

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Avni was restlessly tapping her foot. It is lunch time and still her dumb boyfriend is nowhere to be seen. It's been 19 hours since she had last seen her boyfriend. Nevertheless to say, ever since they confessed their love this is longest time they are away from each other. For avni, she already started feeling like ages being away from her precious boyfriend. She mentally chided herself and decided to see this guy once he comes to her vision.

Even after giving so many curses to her boyfriend she still can't deny the fact that her heart is restless to see him and her body is carving for his touch. He is the apple of her eyes. A day without him felt like suffocation to her. She couldn't breathe in his absence. She just wanted to be in his arms and give a piece of mind and warn him to not repeat his deeds again.

Most of her friend and Neil's friends came to her and told her that Neil is busy with an upcoming event in the college. She never asked them.

After sometime Avni became unusually calm. She is a bird, who loves chirping all the time and many people loved and admired her for that. This is one of the traits that made Neil fall for her. Her calmness was due to her inner turmoil. She is missing HIM.

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In the evening, after the dismissal of college. Avni came down a little later. She is walking slowly as she has no mood to go home. Unknown to her she is in the parking lot. All this while her eyes were fixed on the ground. An unknown presence and rise in heart beat made her lift her head up. She got what she wanted.

There stood the reason for her existence. Her boyfriend looking as dashing as ever. As soon as she saw him, all she wanted was to jump into his arms, her heaven. She felt a surge of urgency to hug him there and then and kiss him all over his face.

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Neil saw his Bathsheba walking with her eyes darted on ground. He couldn't see her for a whole day due to the hectic duties of being the Head Boy. His condition wasn't any better. He missed her as much as she missed him. Maybe more than her.

He waited for her to come to him. Suddenly, she raised her head and saw him. He frowned at the sad and lost face of his girlfriend. He could do anything to bring back that million dollar smile of HIS GIRL.

He was so lost in her Beauty. He came out his trance when he saw her walking past him. "Avni, where are you going?" Neil asked in his calm tone. Avni turned towards him reply. "I came in car and can't leave it here right." Avni replied in a monotone.

Next word of Neil came as a surprise to her. He said "I asked your driver to take it back home as I wanted to pick you up". Avni on any normal day would have thrown herself on him and would have showered him with kisses. But this wasn't any other day.

"You shouldn't have to bother about me. I can manage myself even without you."

Neil wanted to hug her and hide from all the sorrows but he knew if he did that then there will be a major crying session of Avni. He can afford anything in the world but not the tears in her eyes. He composed himself and spoke, "I know my girl doesn't need anyone but the thing is Your boyfriend doesn't want to drive alone." He replied with his signature smile to lighten the situation.

He sat on his Harley Davidson, which he bought under Avni's insistence. Avni reluctantly sat at the back seat. Instead of holding Neil she held the back part of bike. "Avni, Baby you know na I cannot afford to lose you." With that Neil held both the hand of Avni and pulled her close from back.

His one touch did wonders. It worked as a magic on Avni, who is now holding his waist from back.

There were sitting on the bike for good 5 minutes. No one was willing to break the silence. Finally neil spoke, "I missed you so much." That's it Avni lost her cold exterior and came close to Neil and hugged him to herself. After few minutes of silence, "Do you even realize how much I missed being in your arms?" Avni said which came out like a whisper. Neil sighed and Held her hand."Then let me compensate this One day of separation". With that they both went to their awaited destiny.

Finally, I am done with this shot. Do tell how this came out. I would appreciate all your opinions.

Signing off,

Naina.

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Wonderful start

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Brightglow

Beautiful... Pls continue soon :)

Hey!! This is not any update. But do not ignore.

I just want to know whether this story is going to work in future or not.

I am a writer not only on IF but on 2 other sites as well but this is the only place where I am writing something about Avneil. I am a diehard fan of them. So, that is the reason I am writing stories on them.

I really don't understand whether my way of writing in not upto your mark or my imagination didn't attract enough people. Whatever might be the case kindly let me know.

Being a writer, it feels so disappointing to know that their work doesn't get enough support. Precise to say It feels like shit.

All this kills the writer in me. I still don't know how to express what I am feeling.

I just want to say we; writers expect something from our readers while writing. After seeing the result it feels hurtful.

I agree I am not much active on wattpad. But whatever the time I have been into it I vote for the stories I have read. I am not earning money by writing in this site. Or neither your votes are going to make dollars for me. But it's a kind of satisfaction which encourages us to write more.

Just tell me one thing how will the employee feel if his/ her boss is not recognizing his works?

I am feeling the same. I was so blown out when I first updated my story but all my excitement went to vain after seeing the no. of reads and votes and comments.

Kripaya karke mujhe apna reason toh bata dijiye. Atleast let me decide whether I should continue it or not. If you want me to continue then do let me know I am expecting something in return from you guys.

Take care.

Signing off,

Naina.

Originally posted by: sweetunidhi.445

Continue dear . I liked the story very much.

Hey all!! Since the lack of response made me think that you guys do not have enough idea about the plot and its characters. So here I am with the character sketch and Plot glimpse.

Initially I thought to make this one as random shots but I later changed my decision and I want this to be a fan fiction. I hope I could do justice with my plot.

CHARACTER SKETCH::

MEHTA FAMILY::

Dayawanti Mehta:: she is the grandmother of Avni. She is an industrialist and social worker. She is admired for spontaneity and presence of mind. She is a known person in the business world. She is the Creator of the vast Mehta Empire. She a family woman and she loves spending time with her son and granddaughter.

Aashish Mehta:: he is the father of Avni. He looks after the Mehta's coffee houses and tea rooms across the world. He is practical person and he believes in the ability of the person other than his background. He is the proud father of his only child, Avni. A complete family man and keeps his family above of all.

Neela Mehta:: she is the mother of Avni. She is the chair person of merged Parikh and Mehta hospitals. She is an ideal woman with a perfect family. She inspires woman to do something on their own. Loves her Bacha a lot. Friend of Shweta Khanna

Avni Mehta:: The sole heiress of Mehta Empire. Born with a silver spoon right in her mouth. She is in a relationship with Neil Khanna. Her and Neil were bonded by an eternal string of love. She is girl full of life. She loves singing. Currently, she is 21 year old and she is in same college as Neil. Ali and Riya are her best friends. She believes in helping others.

KHANNA FAMILY::

Harleen Khanna:: she is the grandmother of Neil. She is fondly called as Bebe by near and dear. She frequently visits the Nirvana House of Khanna Industries which is an old age home and also orphanage. She loves her grandson more than anything in the world. Avni and Neil are the apples to her eyes.

Prakash Khanna:: He is the "Daddy Cool" of Neil. He supports Neil in his every decision. Owner of Khanna Industries based on construction and Designing. Kind-hearted, generous, loyal and over all an honest person.

Shweta Khanna:: she is the mother of Neil. She is a social worker and Runs a NGO named Nirvana. Through Nirvana she is blessing the orphans with Parents and the left over parents with kids. Her NGO is recognized at the national level. She loves her son a lot.

Neil Khanna:: Neil is the guy with Greek god physique and can cast his spell on all the girls. Alas!! He is reserved to his lifeline Avni. He loves her with all his heart. His childishness is permitted only to his near and dear. Neil is 21 year old. He is the head boy of Oakridge Alma Mater. He does his duty wisely. He is friend with almost all the students of college.

Ali Zafar:: He is the childhood bestie of Avni and her partner in crime. In a relation with Riya

Riya Mishra:: she is the best friend of Avni in college. In a relation with Ali.

**Cast for the above characters are same as in the show. In case you feel offended by any actor feel free to imagine your choice in their place**

**Some characters may come and go. I will give the description if at all it is needed**

GLIMPSE OF THE STORY::

Avni and Neil are two different individuals. They met during family functions as Khanna's and Mehta's were closely related. Later the bond between the families grew stronger and thus, invited each other during poojas and small get togethers. This increased their meetings and led to the brewing of feelings for each other.

Later, Upon Shweta and Neela's insistence both agreed to join in same college to pursue their studies. Soon they realized their feeling for each other and confessed their love.

Now, they are in a relationship where they do not have an option of backing out. They are very happy with their relation. Their story wasn't a fairy tale came right from heaven. They too faced problems like other couples. They too missed each other like other couples. They too loved and cared for each other like other couples.

This is their story. This is the story of Avneil.

Author's Note::

I have already updated chapter one named "With out HIM". Do check it out if you haven't read. Next chapter will be updated if I get 200 votes and comments. I am not talking about this post alone I want 200 votes as a total on previous 4 updates. Come on I am not so demanding. If I get satisfied with your comments then you may get update soonish.